MG~ FF~The Jinx ~THREAD-12~ UPDATED Pt 122 / Pg 100 / 26th Feb..... - Page 9

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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 111



Part - 112

A pure heart open to light , will be filled with the very essence of truth .

We must accept the end of something in order to build something new nd better.


Day went well ,, all took their lunch in OH prepared by Geet even DM too accompanied nd talk to Manu lovingly ,, she blessed Geet when she touched her feet nd wished holi ,, all felt d ice wall between them but remained quiet ,, Manu slept after lunch nd all came back in KM ,, Rashi nd Maan insisted Geet to help her but she refused saying that Satish was there to help her,, Maan nd Rashi came back in KM to finish some of their work nd Geet finalised manu's b day cake ,, she made a cake in a Red Car shape .

Then she set d table for dinner , decorated d room with flowers nd balloons ,, Satish was helping her even Nakul too joined them ,, they wr very happy celebrating manu's bday ,, everything was set there .

There in KM Yash was busy in his study ,, he was talking to someone nd nd watching something in his lappy ,, checking nd replying ,, Rashi came with his coffee nd went back seeing him busy in call ,, she was feeling very bad for not doing anything satisfactory for Manu nd Geet , there was an emptiness in their life ,, she went to DM nd both wr sipping their tea with lil convo when DM asked .

DM: hume samajh nahi aa raha ki hum Manu ko kya de uske Bday per ,, Geet to kisi se kuch bhi lene ko ready nahi ,, apne aur Yash ne kuch socha ? it was Manu's 1st Bday here with us ,, we sent so many things for Annie's daughter but here not able to give small thing to Geet nd Manu .

Rashi sighed: manu only asked a toy car from Yash nd we got very hardly ,, whole market was closed today.

What an irony there was a girl who cheated nd blackmailed us trapping Maan nd one is Geet , only suffering coz of us ,, not accepting anything from us ,, here we r dying to shower our everything on them but she was not ready to take ,, samajh nahi aata kya kare ?

DM lost in thoughts time proved her wrong again ,, her thoughts nd behaviour ashamed her in front of her family ,, she was d solo reason of Geet's broken life nd now her whole family was suffering coz of her ,, she proved that ... bado se bhi galtiyan hoti hei aur choty unhe sahi rasta dikhaty hein .

Rashi went back ,, DM thought for few min nd then came out from her room ,, with lower head she reached in OH , saw nakul there nd asked about Geet who told her that she was in her bed room .

Geet got a shock nd feared seeing DM there alone at door of her bedroom ,, she fumbled nd came close to her thinking why DM came to her like this ?

Geet meakly : aap DM ,, mujhe bula lete ,, aapne ku takleef ki ?

DM: nabhi Geet ,, aana to humara hi banta tha ,, jarrorat humari thi .

Geet feared , running her mind to remember if she did any mistake which angered DM .

Geet: kya mujhse ya manu se koi galti ho gai hei , I m sorry agar anja...

DM: nahi Geet galti apse nahi humse hui hei ,, aur himmat nahi ker pa rahe thy tumhe face kerne ki .. shayad humara Ahankaar hume rok raha tha ...

Geet: aap eese matt kaho DM ,, aap bahot badi hein mujhse ,, plzzz esse mat kahiye ,, aap ku galat hongi ?

DM: hum thy Geet ,, bahot galat thy ,, apne ghamad mei hum sahi galat bhool gaye ,, sabke dukh ka karan ban gaye ,, aur dosh aap per daal diya ,, hum galat thy beta ,, I m very sorry ,, plzz hume maaf ker do .

Geet: DM ,, ye aap kya kaha rahi hein,, plzz don't say sorry to me ,, plzz DM .

DM: u faced so much pain bcoz of me ,, I m d reason of ur broken life ..

Geet: nahi DM ,, it was my destiny ,, plzz don't blame urself ,,I was a bad omen nd it was good for all if I went away .

Both wr very sad nd having tears ,, Geet didn't hope that DM cd do this ,, she was saying sorry to her nd regretting .

DM: u wr not a bad omen beta , but our thinkings wr bad , we r ashamed on our misbehaviour beta ,, I m sorry .

Geet : DM plzz , don't say sorry .

DM: aap humse naraaz to nahi hogi na ?

Geet: nahi DM ,, mai aapse naraz nahi hu ,, aap essa matt sochiye .

DM: humne aapko sabse dur ker diya tha beta aur hum chahate hein ki aap apni ess family se jude rahen , esse dur matt jana beta ,, sab aapse bahot pyaar kerty hein .

Geet: mai kaise dur ho sakti hu DM ,, mere paas jo kuch bhi ess family ka hei ,, bas rahati hi dur hu ,, mai kisi se bhi dur nahi hu .

DM understood d hidden meaning of her words but she was not able to open d truth bcoz of yash order ,, she didn't want to go against Yash wish .

DM: hum jante hein ki aapke liye mushkil hei lekin hum aapse ye request kerte hein beta ki plzz aap naraz nahi hona .

Geet: nahi DM .

DM caressed Geet's face lovingly ,, her wet eyes wr showing that she was ashamed on her misconduct nd regretting ,, Geet was puzzled nd thinking about DM , her apologize cleared that all wr feeling guilty for not trusting her that time after getting that blow from Maan's GF ,, d family faced a bad time bcoz of that cheater , but d damaged had done nd she cdn't hurt them more .

All meet again at eve ,, Geet dressed Manu , placed his cake on d table ,, he jumped with joy seeing his red car cake nd very eager to cut that ,, all praised d butiful cake nd Geet's hard work ,, Maan set d candles nd lit them ,, Geet told Manu to bring his G granny to cut d cake ,, all looked surprized at her ,, this was d 1st time when Geet talk about DM ,, Manu brought DM near d table holding her hand ,, all wr gathered ther including Jojo ,Satish , Nakul nd few more servants ,, Manu cut d cake nd DM fed him .. blessed him showered her love on him ,, all sang nd wished Manu happy bday again ,, Geet gave Manu cake pieces nd told him to give all ,, Manu then fed Yash , rashi , Maan , Geet nd to all d servants .. Maan opened a champange bottle nd served for him nd Yash ,, other took juices , Geet started soft music nd served hot snacks to all ,, Yash took Manu in his arms nd danced on d soft beats ,, he was very happy , then Maan , Rashi even Maan danced with DM nd Rashi too ,, yash dance with Geet for few secds but she excused her nd made rashi to dance ,, though all wr very sad inwardly but they wr happy too ,, they didn't know that after how many yrs d whole family was enjoying like this ,, manu was jumping nd bursting balloons nd playing with his big red car which his dadu presented him ,, he made all busy with him .

U&A Sam too called Geet nd wished Manu ,, they wr missing Manu nd Geet bcoz last 2 Bdays Manu celebrated with them ,, they talked to Maan nd Yash also.


It was a complete family party nd all wr satisfied ,, took leave blessing drowsy Manu who was in Maan's arms nd yawning ,, Maan Brought him in bedroom nd made him sleep patting his back nd head ,, removed his shoes nd jeans ,, covered him with blanket ,, Geet came after arranging d things in room nd kitchen ,, servants went to their rooms ,, she tied Jojo near his bed .

She checked manu nd moved to go but Maan held her hand ,, Geet looked at him puzzled ,, he came behind her caged her between his arms ,, she shuddered with his action nd looked at him shocked .

Maan whispered near her ear : u didn't dance with me ,, I didn't ask in front of all bcoz that cd make u unesssy .

Geet fumbled :b but why now ?

Maan: it's our manu's bday , nd I want to celebrate with his mommy too ,,

He started a soft music in his phone nd started swaying on rhythm ,, both wr moving slowly , their hearts turned heavy coz of pain which they wr holding back ,, both had their reasons ,, both wr feeling a void in their life ,, everything was there but not in a perfect form nd this thing was paining them, both wr helpless at their places .

Their pain was visible in their eyes ,, she wanted to go near him, but her heart was stopping her,, Maan's eyes wr giving a diff msg which was confusing her ,, his closenessnd gestures wr making her weak which she didn't want,, she cd be wrong ,,as a mother she desired all d happiness for her child but ,, Maan was assuring her too but there wr many things which wr disturbing her a lot ,, her heart was crying thinking that like her manu was also away from many happiness ,, Geet felt chocked nd tried to part but Maan tightened his hold gluing her more to him ,, she whimpered ,, Maan turned her towards him nd looked at her teary eyes ,, he whispered ... G e e t ,, there was unbearable pain in her heart nd nobody was there to share ,, she lost her hold nd cried out hugging him .

Maan: G e e t , Baby ,, kya hua ?

She nodded in a no but crying ,, he cupped her face nd wiped her flowing tears .

Maan: fir ye aansu ku ? mujhse share ku nahi kerti apne dil ki baat ,, jo dil mei hei kaha do Geet .

Geet sobbed : kya kahu ,, kuch samajh nahi aata .

Maan lifted her nd sat on a chair having her in his lap , cupped her face nd tried to make her look at him wiping her wet eyes ,, he was also very sad ,, thinking why their life was this much complicated ?

She hide her face in his crook nd cried out ,, helplessly he hugged her back to let her pour out her pain through her eyes .


Precap --- Twist ...

Dad , plzz stop her , she won't deny u Or let me say ...


Part - 113 & 114

sorry for mistakes ...



Branka_68



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

DM finally apologized!

Geet innocently forgave
Lovely party for Manu😃
Mummy Daddy had fun too😉
In each other's arms and dancing.
Finally Geet's hurt comes out in his arms.
Hope she forgives him now.
Thanks for updating.
🤗
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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😊 Updated ...
i'll PM TM...

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Beautiful update...
loved it...
but precap is more Intresting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Vibrant Update

Finally Daadima did the needful and came to Geet to apologize .
Geet , Manu and the Khurana family celebrated Manu's birthday
after all left Maan wanted to dance with Geet telling her both of them should also celebrate their son's birthday this dance was very painful not only for Geet but Maan too

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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautifully updated
loved it
manu's bday cake was awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved the update
dadima felt sorry after along time which she could have done early
better late than never
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dm apologised family enjoying party maneet painful dance scary precap
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i will say in one word i love this update
mafi mangne walo se mafi dene wala bada hota hai (geet-dadi)
dil todne wale tujhe dil dhundh raha hai tujhe dil dhund raha hai
seene mein mere, pyar ka toofan utha hai (geet)
ai dil ke sahare tujhe dil dhund raha hai tujhe dil dhund raha hai(maan)
aawaz de mai teri raho mein khada hoon aye dil ke sahare...

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