MG~ FF~The Jinx ~THREAD-12~ UPDATED Pt 122 / Pg 100 / 26th Feb..... - Page 52

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Awesome update!!!Finally Maan confessed his feeling...he asks her chance to prove his love for her...she silently accepted...Loved it so much..waiting for the next.
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Hello my dear friends ...

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😆😆 wanted to update on next pg...


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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hi babie kaise ho?

aaj raat ko aaongi. jaldi aajana
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updating


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(For banner credit goes to my dear laksmi )

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 121


Part - 122


Trying to wake up fighting d demons, but I m suffocating

Suffocating by my own fears

Trying to get back up fighting to stand tall , but I m broken

Broken by all I lost

Trying to be alright again fighting for survival , but I m imprisoned

Imprisoned by my own thoughts .

Geet knew that it was only Maan who cd help her in this tough situation ,so she decised to talk him ,, she came to his room nd find Maan lost in his thoughts near d dresser , he was looking at his open palm like trying to read d lines of his hands ,, Geet knocked at d door to get his attention ,, Maan turned nd saw Geet at d door ,, it seems that he was getting ready after taking bath , his shirt was open nd showing his taut masculine chest nd his deep saddened eyes rippled her heart ,, averting her gaze from him she spoke .

Geet: sorry I disturbed u ,, wo,, I want to talk u something ,, aammm ,,I m waiting in lawn .

Saying this she turned nd went away from there ,, Maan got her words ,, inserted his hand in his pocket nd followed her with heavy heart ,, he himself was garnering him to talk her ,, he find her sitting in d swing ,, ,, he nearer her with slowpace ,, d surrounding nd her simple serene beauty was casting a spell on him nd aroused many raw desires in him which seems all new to him,, he never felt these arousing but soothing feelings ,, these feelings filled his every pour with unsaid pleasure ,, she saw him nd find oddly quiet but his eyes wr full of emotions nd captivative .

There his heart was heavied with lots of feelings ,, he wanted to pour out all ,, this distance nd formalities which they had between them wr hurting him ,, he find her bashful ,, sometime her shyness nd embarrassment pleased him but sometime hurt him bcoz it stopped her to open her heart .

Maan bent nd held her hands in his ,, make her stand close to him ,,d bright moon light nd cool zephyr was making d nyt more alluring ,, lost on those hezel he asked .

Maan: essa kya hei jo mujhe kahane ke liye permission leni ho ,, tum kabhi bhi kuch bhi kaha sakti ho Geet .

Geet startles : wo , wo ,..

Maan pressed her hands : bolo Geet .

Geet: wo ,, I got a msg from Yash uncle .

Maan shocked: dad's msg ?

Geet: haannn,, wo ,, he insisted me to come UK .

Maan : aur ?

Geet: aammm,, mai kaise ?

Maan: did u reply back?

Geet; no ,, I don't know what to say ?

Maan: why ,, what's d prob ?

Geet looked at him timidly : u know I cn't face them ?

Her this fear nd hesitance hurt him , though he thanked his Dad inwardly for msg her directly which made her to think solely ,, she herself came to talk for this matter ,, he knew she didn't want to disappoint her Yash uncle but not able to come out from her fear .

Maan: reply him that u cn't come .

Geet : it cn hurt them ,, plzz help me .

Maan: how ?

Geet : plzz tell him that I m not comfortable to go ,, how cn I ,, it's so tough for me .

Maan: u cn Geet ,, there r only family members ,, why r u fearing when we all r with u ,, u have to face them one day .

Geet: it's Annie's family function , what'll I do there ,, plzz I cn't .

Maan: u r also a family member nd I m going with u ,, Geet come out from ur shell ,, why this fear now ?

Geet : Mai ,, mai kaise ,, I never ...

Maan : chup ,, bilkul chup ,,, tumhara ye darr tumhe aur sabko hurt ker raha hei ,, Geet u r going with me as a family member ,,, as my mangetar .

He took out d ring from his pocket nd showed her ,, Geet was staring at him nd then at d ring perplexed thinking ... Mangetar ... Ring ???

Maan: Geet , mom gave me this ring when I was coming here ,, she said that this is her blessing for u ,, Geet they all accepted u as their part then why cn't u? I know nothing is very romantic between us but I request u ,,plzz trust on my love for u , accept me nd my family ,, we all love u a lot ,, plzzz ,will u Geet ?

Geet was staring at him confused ,, his Mom gave him ring for her ,, they wanted her in d family as their DIL ,, they thought so much for her nd accepted her nd Manu as their integral part ,, she remembered Yash's msg ...

Geet , i'll be d happiest person if u come with Maan to attent d function nd complete our family ,, waiting .

She looked at Maan with moist eyes who was eagerly waiting for his response ,, her lips quired nd asked in a fearful voice .

Geet: kuch galat to nahi hoga na ?

Maan: nahi , kuch galat nahi hoga ,, hum sab hei na .

He held her hand nd slipped that ring in her finger saying ... in d presence of moon nd stars I m accepting u as my love nd thanks for accepting me in ur life nd giving me chance to bring back our long lost happiness ... thank u Geet .

Geet was quietly staring at him chocked with emotions ,, how cd she deny when all wr waiting for her nd Manu with open arms ,, this ring from Rashi was a symbol of their love nd trust ,, they wr not forcing her but respecting her all decisions .

She was in daze , very quiet nd calm , looking only in his eyes with longings ,, maan too was in same condition ,, he felt contented when she accept him respecting d desires of his nd his parents ,, there was no need of words only feelings nd realisation ,, he lift her in his arms nd brought her inside ,, made her stand on her feet in her room nd broke d silence .

Maan: pack bags , we r going TM night for 2-3 days ,, I m going to bring Manu , humm.

She didn't reply ,, Maan cupped her face sensing her inner turmoil ,, gave a peck on her forehead saying ,, welcome nd thanks for entering in Maan's world ,, be ready to enjoy ur family gathering ,, i'll make it memorable for us .

I m coming back in few min then we'll planned with our cutie ,, OK,, now smile baby ..

Geet gave a faint smile ,, she was still in daze ,, Maan went patting her cheek nd she was standing there staring at d diamond ring which was adoring her finger ,, proving that he really love her nd his family too.

Next nyt they flew to UK ,, Maan nd Manu wr very excited but Geet was nervous ,, Maan informed his Dad& Mom , who wr already reached there in d morning ,, DM was also with them to bless her Grt G daughter ,, d fuction was schudled next day nd Arjun's family was also there .


It was mid nyt when Maan nd Geet reached at Annie's home ,, with lil intro Annie went back to sleep excusing herself after few min ,,, Annie was stunned seeing Geet ,, she saw a timid chashmish Geet yrs back but now that girl transformed in very beautiful nd smart girl ,, it irked Annie that her family was showering this much love on that mere Geet nd her son ,, she was Khurana's loving daughter nd lived like a princess ,, she wanted all love nd pampering for her nd her baby ,, but when she saw that her parents nd DM wr loving that Geet nd her son in front of her it pricked her ,, she was angry on inviting Geet at her function .

All 3 Khurana elders wr showering their love on Manu nd Geet ,, without showing any change in their prev behaviour but now d brightness nd smlils of their faces wr showing their inner happiness which they got having Geet with them ,, for them their whole family was there ,, Geet's nervousness was visible to all but they wr ignoring that nd trying to make her comfortable ,, after spending some time all retired to their respective rooms to sleep.


Precap ----- jealous Annie insulted Geet ...


Part - 123


sorry for mistakes ...

i m sorry for late updating ,, my lappy was troubling me last nyt ...





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Part - 121

Wow lovely emotional wow superb very sensational update yar..te way my maan want his geet to give him a chance and geet was struggling with her own feelings and seeing their effect and pain , and te way they hiding for was lovely emotional..so she deciding to give a chance was lovely..te way my maan want to prove his love and geet letting him in her life was lovely touching..te way geet ki distance from his family making him worry for her was lovely..so now my maaneet ki family how nice it feel to say my maaneet ki family,my maan-geet-manu, wow, will go to uk..will geet face any humalition , how she face khuranas?..i love te update so much yar

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Originally posted by: priya111111

hi babie kaise ho?

aaj raat ko aaongi. jaldi aajana


Hello priya,,,

😊 OK ,, aa jaungi..




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Posted: 10 years ago
pg 100
calls for a sweet sweet scene today
ek chumma tu udhar de de
ab Maan ko Geet se pyar karne de😆
Hi Barbie doll😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dat was all so goody goody ...
finally she has accepted dat maan really cares for her nd loves nd want her in his life..
bt he still need to prove he means wat he said..
i guess..geet needs dat one trust dat she ll be loved
nd may b in dis function maan ll be able to build dat trust nd dat love in her heart wit all due..

lovly part..
want some cute maneet moments and some nok jok of maneet for manu..
waiitn to see dat..
bahut rona dona ho gaya..guilt accusition everythin..
mist is cleared ..

waitn for next part..

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