MG~ FF~The Jinx ~THREAD-12~ UPDATED Pt 122 / Pg 100 / 26th Feb..... - Page 41

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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 118


Part - 119


Geet's POV ...

She was quiet nd thinking how to take all this ? How to face this drastic change in her life ,, her mind was running from one thing to other , thinking why she didn't get from their behaviour that they came across about all d truth ,, she denied but Maan accepted that in front of them ... Why he did that nd they believed ? He didn't remember anything to prove his sin then why d elders believed him ? why all hide it from her nd didn't ask any Q ? Do they trust her or there is something else , No o ,, she cdn't think wrong after reading Yash uncle letter ,,, he backed her nd left everything on her ,, they cd force her nd argued her after Maan's acceptance , but they didn't nd hide it ,, she thought back nd remembered that all became more caring for her nd Manu , even DM too apologized for her bad behaviour ,, she didn't blame her for anything ,, how they cd trust her this much ?

All wr aware of d truth nd behaving normally in front of her ,, but there was no doubt that they wr deeply hurt ,, all wr hiding their pain from her .. Why ?

Geet's chain of thoughts broke when Maan placed his hands on her shoulder calling her .

Maan : Geet ,, don't hurt urself keeping all pain in ur heart ...

Geet sniffed nd looked at him with teary eyes : u promised me then why u put them in pain nd hide it from me ?

Maan: I was helpless Geet , they wr pestering me for marriage ,, how cn I ?

Geet: why not ?

Maan held her form shoulders nd shook her lil: r u mad Geet ? How cn I think that ?

Geet: I told u , u r not bound to us nd ..

Her indifference annoyed him ,, still she was not accepting d truth of their life ,, he scold her .

Maan : shut up Geet , stop this hiding nd refusing d truth ,, u accept it or not but now we all r accepting that u nd Manu r our parts .

Geet what's wrong if I m thinking about u nd Manu ,, tell me Geet once .. m I wrong if I m thinking about my child nd his mother ,, m I wrong if I want to be with them thinking as my parts ,, m I wrong if I m thinking for my family's happiness ,, for our happiness Geet ?

Geet: happiness , u hurt ur family Maan ,, they r in pain bcoz of me .

Maan: no ,, u r taking wrong Geet ,, now u r not trusting me nd others , all love u nd trust u .

Geet: they accepted d truth without asking me ,, strange .. u didn't know anythings , then how cd they believe u .

Maan: it was u who didn't want to face those awful questions ,, u hide d truth bcoz u didn't trust anyone but u respect all ,, u valued their love nd care,, u didn't want to hurt nd ashamed them revealing my misdeed on them nd slipped away quietly ,, u feared that we all cd blame u but truth is truth Geet nd proved all of us wrong nd taught us what was right .

Geet looked at him puzzled nd tried to get what he wanted to clear ?

Maan: Geet ur silence , rejection nd indifference , ur fear , ur care proved that u r right ,, u hide d truth for us not for u ,, u bore pain for us not for u , if u didn't think to hurt nd ashamed us then how cd Dad do that ,, he ordered us not to hurt u asking nd talking about that dreadful past ,, he was not in favour to force u to accept anything ,, Geet I m thankful to Dad that he had trusted my words .

Tears rolled down from Geet's eyes ,, she remembered Yash words that he did d same .. hide d truth ,,, they wr hurt nd in pain but didn's ask her to prove d truth , still he was assuring her that he was with her in all her decisions nd gave her liberty to live like she want away from them ,, he expressed his desires to live with her nd Manu only then if she want .

What was left to open , only her verbal acceptance nd if she do then things wd start to change , but how ? What Maan thinks about her nd what she think about him ? How they wd face each other in future ,, it wd be so complicated for her nd now how she wd talk to all ? It was so awkward for her ,, entire scenario had change after clearing everything .

Geet was drowning in anxiety ,, feeling very weak nd broken ,, her mind was blocked nd throat was chocked ,, there was only one word in her mind ...how ..how she wd face this reality ?

Her eyes wr pouring ,,lips wr trembling ,, losing all her energy to bear more ,, with lower eyes nd hung head she whimpered .

Maan was likely hurt nd in pain ,, her tears wr piercing his heart but he knew that one day she had to pour out her all pain nd fear , only then they cd talk further for their coming life,, he was understanding her dilemma nd pain which was breaking her every moment ,, he pulled her close to him nd engulfed her shacking body .

Maan : G e e t , oh baby plzz pour out all ur pain ,, I m here for u .

Geet loosened her all control nd broke down hiding her face in his crook , hugging him ,, it was so heart wrenching for Maan ,, his own eyes wr dropping tears ,, Geet was in his tight hug ,, her warm tears wr wetting his skin , after few min her sobs subsided , but her weary body was trembling in is arms ,, he caressed her back nd head to calm her ,, Maan parted a lil nd cupped her face ,, wiped out her cheeks with his thumbs softly ,, she was sniffing nd coughing coz of long cries.

Maan's heart was crying at her broken state ,, he was cursing him nd promising him that onward he wdn't let her shed any tear .

Maan (throatily): G e e t ,, I m sorry baby ,, I gave u so much pain , filled ur life with these tears , but I promise u I won't give u any pain ,, plzz give me a chance to mend everything ,, plzz allow me to think for u nd for all.

Geet (in a cracky voice) : why did u do this ? Now how I'll face them ?

Maan: like u wr facing Geet ,, did u feel any change when u wr in KM ,,, Geet when I cn face them who was at fault then why cn't u ,, u don't have to feel low .

Geet: how I'll talk to them ... I cn't ,, everything has changed ,, that's why I was stopping u ,, what did u say to them ?

Maan: just few things .

Geet with lower head : what?

Maan: I accepted that it was me who mistreated u nd Manu is my son ,, I clearly said that I want to be with u nd Manu .

Geet: I never accepted that Manu belongs to u then why did u say that , u don't know nothing .

Maan: which I know that was enough for me ,,,, tum nahi kahati to kya tumhari aanken to sab kahati hein .

Geet: don't they want any proof to trust ?

Maan: when I m sure then then why any proof ?

Geet: u threatened me for DNA test.

Maan: I did , bcoz u wr not accepting .

Geet: without my acceptance why u took that risk , it cd be wrong .

Maan: no , it cn't be ,, u r not like that nd my calculation is not wrong ,, even Dad trusted my words ,, I m not wrong Geet.

Geet waise to mujhe viswaas hei lekin meri khushi ke liye bas ek baar kaho na.

Geet: kya ?

Maan: kaha do ki Manu mera beta hei ,, plzz ek baar Geet .

He looked at her with aspiration like this was d last thing he wanted ,, there wr a squall of emotions in his deep eyes ,, an urge to seal d truth for ever ,, his body shivered , eyes moistened nd there was a faint painful smile on his lips .


Precap ... Geet accepted ...

Haan ,,, manu is ur son ,, he is ur blood Maan ...


Part - 120



sorry for mistakes ...





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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So the cat is out of the bag. Now that Geet knows that Yash is aware of the truth and trusts her what will be her next step.
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Avi dear..


u nd this time...


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Wakey Wakey Babbie

Waiting for update
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Part - 118



Wow lovely emotional update..te way geet ki shock and surprise and her questions, but she got all her answers thru yash ki letter..te way yash ki each words shows how much he love and trust geet was lovely emotional..te way he saying tis all upto her and asking her to take decision which will give them happiness was lovely emotional..now geet was numb thinking her truth which she hide tis much came out omg..te way my maan ki heart crying to see his geet like tis was lovely emotional..i love te update so much

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missed ur update..yesterday😔
now eagerly waiitn
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😃 Updated ...Pg 75

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awsemm geet broken maan consoling maan wants to hear geet saying
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awesome update. atlast geet broke down but maan is with her & giving her warmth . geet felt low ki how she will face them but maan cleared everything ,, he said that he accepted the truth in front of his parents & dadima cos they were talking about his marriage .
precap is interested means at last geet accepted that manu is maan's son
waiting for next
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geet was drowing in anxiety y no one
questions hr

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