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Posted: 10 years ago


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wow lovely emotional touchy update..te way my maan ki shock seeing te surprise his dad made for him and his geet was lovely emotional touchy..so yash have arranged everything for geet, te way my maan felt overwhelmed with his dad's love was lovely touchy..te way my maan ki restless to face his sherni and thinking how to start was lovely..i love te update
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(For banner credit goes to my dear laksmi )

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





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Part - 116

Many hrs back ... There Geet in plane ****

Geet was dragging towards her plane with heavy heart having sleeping Manu in arms ,, she was feeling that something precious was leaving behind ,, d precious happiness of her lil child which he was going to miss in coming life ,, her mind was clouded with endless thoughts ,, she settled in their seats gluing Manu to her ,, she caressed manu's head nd face lovingly with wet eyes nd pecked his forehead mumbling .. Sorry my baby for parting u from ur happiness.

She rested her head against d head rest lost in her thoughts ,, she cd give a thought to accept nd adjust but there was a fear for not trusting her ,, what was d surety that they wdn't think her a cheater like his priv GF ,, He didn't remember d whole thing ,, they wr elders ,, had an ugly experience of cheating nd wdn't trust so easily ,, they deffo asked her d proof nd that was an insult for her nd her child ,, she didn't want anything nd any favour from Khuranas ,, it was her only her decision to go with her baby nd she was determined to live away from all keeping all d truth buried deep in her heart ,, though few incidents feared her nd forced her to think about Manu's future but she was helpless here ,, she cd adjust but cdn't face humiliation of proving that Manu was Maan's son .

They have to trust her if Maan disclose d truth but that seems next to impossible ,, d elders Khurana's never accept this truth only on Maan's doubts. Secondly if they believed then what next ? They wd pressurise her to give Manu his father's name ,, they cd accept Manu even Maan too loved him but what about her ? What about Maan ? He said that he won't move on with someone other ,, was he comfortable to spent his life with her OR he was sacrificing his happiness coz of his sin nd guilt ? What he think for her ?

Maan loved someone nd faced betrayal , is that possible for him to love again nd more importantly to a girl to whom he hated ? It was not easy for him nd not for her too ,, he had changed nd regretting that is why she had accepted their friendship ,, he genuinely cared for them , saved her ,, helped her ,, honestly he did a lot for her but that was diff things nd sharing life like... God !!

Geet smacked her mind inwardly thinking so far ,, she scolded her mind thinking like this from her side where Maan never voice out his intention ,, he just wanted to keep them close coz of Manu ,, he was doing this only for Manu ,, yes ,, it was only his guilt nd love for his child, nothing else, otherwise he cd express his intention for her in these 2nd half month, but he said nothing ... Geet assured his mind with this fact nd tried to brush away these thoughts ,, looked at manu who was still sleeping ,, she diverted her mind to think how to handle him when he asked about Maan and all after waking up ,, few hrs passed hanging between sleeping nd waking ,, then Manu wake up ,, he looked around nd found them in her mommy's arms .

Manu: mommy ,, mommy .

Geet lazily : yes baby ,, u wake up ,, come lets go to freshen up ,, u r sleeping from long .

She got up taking him in arms nd went towards WC ,, manu looked around nd realized thar they wr in plane .

Manu: mommy we all in plane .

Geet: yes baby .

Manu: whele is uncle Maan ?

Geet saddened : he is in his home baby .

Manu face hung : whele al we going mommy ?

GeetL US baby ,, we have our house there , my office nd ur crche .

Manu: why uncle Maan not come with me ?

They returned back to their seats nd Geet pressed button to call AH for coffee nd hot water for manu's milk .

Geet: baby ,, he cn't come with us all d time ,, he has his family there nd his office .

Manu: I want uncle Maan ,, mommy call him .

Geet eyes turned wet ,, she knew well that her child was going to miss Maan a lot ,, he became very addict to Maan's pampering .

Geet: OK , we'll call him when we reach home ,, how cn I call him in plane ? my sweet baby'll obey his mommy nd take his milk ,,humm.

She made him sit in his seat nd gave him her Ipad to play games ,, AH brought her coffee nd warm water ,, Geet prepared Manu's milk nd gave him to drink , Geet was talking to Manu to diverting his mind ,, showed him small-small things from d window ,, played games with him ,, Geet's teammates too spent time with Manu ,, both took their lunch nd then sleep for some time .

They stopped at London for 3 hrs ,, Geet shopped many chocolates for Manu nd his crche friends then they started their rest of journey .

When they reached there nd come out Prem was there to receive them ,, bade goodbye to her teammates ,, Prem showered his love on Manu ,, both wr meeting after months ,, they settled in car nd started to back home ,, Geet asked about Heer who didn't come bcoz she was preg nd then Pren started his non-stop talks with Manu nd Geet ,, whole way they wr talking on diff nd in that Manu forgot to talk about Maan ,, Geet knowingly didn't call Maan nd Yash bcoz it cd saddened Manu ,, she decided to inform them after reaching home .

When they wr lil away from home Prem informed U&A Sam ,, there was a suspicious smile on his face too ,, after few min he stopped his car in front of d house ,, d helper opened d gate nd d car entered in d compound ,, Geet looked out from d window all puzzled nd then looked at Prem.

Geet: Prem why u enter in this house ,, our house is next .

Prem: we r at right place sweetie ,, come out ,, come baby .

Prem come out nd took Manu in his arms , who was also looking all around .

Manu: uncle Plem ,, this is not my house ,, my house is that ...

Manu indicated at their priv house , d next one ,, Geet too was very confused nd came out from d car ,, helper came near them nd wished them ,, Prem told her to take out d bags from car trunk nd she went .

Geet : prem , stop ,, what is all this ? whose house is this nd why u bring us here ?

Prem: time to surprize sweetie ,, come in ,, lets go baby, U&A r waitig for us .

Confused Geet followed Prem looking all around that beautiful house nd they entered in living hall where U&A Sam wr waiting for them with a wide smile ,, Geet was puzzled seeing them there in neighbouring house nd thought that what they r doing there ,, she smiled , wished nd hugged both ,, Manu jumped in U Sam's arms nd d couple loved him a lot ,, geet was curious to know why they wr here ?

Geet: U Sam , what is this , why u r here ?

U Sam : not only we, ask some else too why he was here dear .. look that side someone is waiting for u nd manu .

U Sam smiled nd gestured at her side to look ,, all looked there nd geet's eyes widened in shock nd Manu shout excited ... Uncle Maan ,, yee,,

He jumped down from A Sam's lap nd run towards Maan ,, in a blink hi was in Maan's arms holding his neck tightly nd Maan glued manu to him like he got his life back ,, there was contented smile on Maan's face seeing them ,, he looked at Geet with a sweet smile which was clearly showing how happy he was ?


Precap ---- Geet is bemused ...

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after a long time
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

yipppeee

after a long time
im first

hi valli
how r u??
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😃Hi Gappus
Hi Barbie doll😃
baad mein milti hu
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Hello Tabby nd Valli ...
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Originally posted by: dqno1

😃Hi Gappus

Hi Barbie doll😃
baad mein milti hu



Hi Avi...
chakki per ho kya...?

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Hello Tabby nd Valli ...

hi ..
hello babbie
how r u ?
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Originally posted by: singh24



Hi Avi...
chakki per ho kya...?

haan😕
trying to get a dentist appt too
itna dukh raha hai aur appt nahi mil rahi hai
hope aaj mil jaaye warna another torturous night, dard wali😭

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