Originally posted by: Onir
Avi I love you for such back-back updates ❤️ 🤗
Piya ke rang mein rangnewali se jiya dhadkane wali tak mast progression 👏
Reading this whole part I was having a laughing fit ... enjoying it so much that I was either smiling or giggling. I loved it 😃 Right form Adi giggling like a girl to Rajdhani express, multiple trains, do do fruits, stinking Shyamlal, Polo, Plomish and ending was like a the final blow to my giggling fit Nakul getting shocked with his wish and being asked for two fruits 🤣 🤣 🤣
Hayee My Maan's wishes are somewhere somewhat coming true. Having office romance, she being contentedly and safely tucked in his arms. 😳 It actually was the compensation for enduring and living through all that silence, avoidance, longing and anguish form such long separation... he was justly, romantically and handsomely rewarded for all his wait and holding onto that hope never once letting go. 😉👏
I loved his control. his inner voices his simple wishes and his care for her. 😳 I loved her simplicity, unrestrained being herself in front of him uninhibited making him know her better... 😳 And finally the duo lived some moments of sweet intimacy, desires out in the open and actually being aware of the effects caused. ☺️
Naureen 👏 👏Too good girl! I love her shayari. and this one was beautiful and deep. Hayee afterall uski nadaani hi toh hai jisse usse seene se lagaye rakhne ka mann hota hai Maan ko aur uski dhadkane tez ho jaati hai 😉
Maan bechara had to endure the torture of not being able to express his desires at the gain of having her with him not avoiding and in such close proximity. J from dhudhwala Shyamlal 😆😆 Indeed loved the combined effect of heart full of desires and love for her, body wanting release for expression of it all and mind filled with stinky Shyamlal... 🤣
Geet's innocence came out all shinning again. 😊 Even though she was speaking all random yet it did speak of her simplicity and naivety. The two fruits and care for him to have the best (Though i hate papayas... 🤢 But i'm glad uske wajah se baat toh aage badhi 😆) The way she was concerned for Shyamlal's wife's dreams and wishes she revealed her own choti choti dreams and wishes and wants in her life and future. 😳
I relived all the GHSP days through this update ... Gitt, his care, her sleeping with his hand under her cheek, Aise mat dekho, ye ladki mujhe pagal kar degi, the forehead kiss... I can go on and on 😳
The whole sofa scene with the song, his desires the bliss and the kiss and even tying of her dupata end to his wrist to not let her go was so romantic and dreamy 😳😳 Loved it ❤️ Loved the song selection its soulful and beauty in words. 😳
Bournvita and spicy Pizaa 😆 atrangi combo 😉 But Maan aadat daal do aise sab cheezon ki 🤣
I loved his care for her likes and comfort. The way he made his workers life hell for getting a packet of bournvita 😊 👏 And also how he related her needs for bike ride, being there for her and taking care not by saying it in words but living it for her without her stating it by his each and every action and deed right from the start. 👏👏👏 ❤️ Also how he voices internally how he will be restless after feeling her so close and she will be blissfully unaware of it and asking him what happened ... 😳
Nakul being added in the end was too good 😆 Finally itna saara gusaa jhelna ke baad kuch toh accha mila 🤣
Ending with him dreaming of her moments with him,. and she being the song of his life was 😳😳 I loved it and was craving for more... 😃
Thanks for updating continue soon... me missing my Dev-Naina 😉
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Anupamaa
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