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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Barbee


Priya teri ya lakshu ki trd pr aa ,,
😆 Eske bs 20 pgs bache hein.. Mujhe essi trd per 2 aur update dene hein..



tho mere tread par chal

mujje wo khatham karna hain😆
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Posted: 10 years ago




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hello my dear friends...
Updating...

Thank u so much




Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear laksmi )

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 108


Part - 109

After dinner Manu remained with Yash nd Geet went to check Maan in his bed room but her was not there ,, she checked his study nd that was empty ,, disappointed she came back in OH after spending few min with Yash nd Rashi in his study .

Manu asked many times to play with Maan ,, lastly Geet tried to contact him on his phone but he was not replying ,, Geet try to divert manu's mind nd called U&A Sam nd made him talk to them ,, they knew it was Manu's Bday next day so asked him what gift he want from them ,, this convo changed Manu's mind but Geet was thinking about Maan ,, she felt bad thinking about Maan nd she was sure that he again start old topic ,, there wr few days nd she wanted to slip away peacefully .

It was nyt nd Geet made manu sleep after spending time with him ,, Satish went back to his room nd Geet went to bring Jojo in room who was sleeping in living hall,, Geet heard some faint sound of breacking even jojo to become alert nd looked around to catch d sound ,, then she heard again nd came out in coridore holding jojo's rope ,, she find Maan's gym light on , Geet went in nd tied Jojo in bedroom nd came out ,, she was puzzled but thought that he cd be there nd went that side ,, she was right ,, d sound was coming from there nd d scene of gym shook her ,, she gasped nd a feable cry came out from her mouth .

There wr broken planks nd rods ,, few things wr scattering here nd there like he threw them in anger ,, his hand's skin was torn from many places nd blood was dripping down ,, Maan was looking worn out nd broken but his eyes wr red , jaws wr tight nd body was drenching in sweat ,, he was very angry nd in frustration pouring out that on him .

Her cry caught his attention nd turn his face to look at her side ,, seeing her there he threw d rod which was in his hands ,, Geet slowly dragged herself near him ,, her eyes wr roaming on his body nd stuck at his blood stained hands ,, her body was trembling in fear ,, she looked painfully at him .

Geet: what is this ..? why r u hurting yourself like this ?

Maan coldly: jao Geet ,, jao yahan se . ( he turned his back )

Geet : aap essa ku ker rahe ho ,, sabko pata chalega to kitna dukh hoga .

Maan angrily turned nd held her from her shoulders :: ku sochti ho dusro ke dukh ke bare mei ,, sach bata ker agar unhe dukh hoga to chupaker bhi hoga Geet ,, mujhse ab ye aur sahan nahi hota ,, nahi bardast hota ki tum aur manu esse dur raho ,, ku nahi maan leti sab ?

Geet: usse kya hoga ? uske baad kya hoga , wo bhi bata do agar sab etna aaasan hei to ,, uske baad mujhe kya kerna hoga ? What do u want actually ?

Maan looked at her thinking what to say ? his dad wanted her back with respect not by force ,, he had to bring her in his life 1st nd that was really tough to voice out that he wanted to share his life with her ... God !! where u put me?

Geet: tell me what do want from me mr Khurana?

Maan: it's hurt me when u call me mr khurana ,, its hurt me when manu calls me uncle Maan ,, it's hurt me Geet ,, I know this pain is nothing which I gave u nd my family , but it's eating me ,, mai kya karu ki sab khush rahen aur sath rahen ?

Geet sensed his turmoil , feeling bad for him , but cn't think about that which was a forbidden dream for her ,, they have to bear this pain ,, geet held his wounded hands ,, her heart cried seeing his condition .

Geet: mere sath aao , u need bandages ,, don't go in KM like this , what'll u say if someone ask u ,, ku esse behave kerty ho ? come with me .

She held his hand nd dragged him with her in OH ,, made him sit on bed nd brought her first aid box ,, cleaned his hands , applied ointment nd bandaged them ,, he was quietly looking at her nd sometime at sleeping Manu .

Geet: sit here , I m bringing coffee , inform U&A.

Maan slowly : no need .

Geet sighed nd went in kitchen nd came back after few mnts with 2 mugs of coffee ,, handed him nd sat on d bed opposite to him taking rest against head rest.

Geet: if u r upset for Manu's bday then u cn do anything here nd celebrating with family in home is much better than outside ,, do u feel anything wrong or below std if I m doing like this ?

Maan: no Geet , it's not like that ,, plzz don't think so .

Geet I know u all r habitual of big parties for every small occasion , but I m not.

Maan meakly: sorry Geet ,, essa nahi hei ,, mai ab parties mei nahi jata ,, I attened business parties only for formalities ,, it's manu's Bday so I wanted to enjoy with all , otherwise no parties for me .

Geet: ku ,, pahale to bahot pasand thi ?

Maan: pahale jaisa ab kuch bhi nahi ,, that was a bad phase of my life ,, I don't want to remember that .

Geet: then why do u want to make me remember my bad phase of life ? Why do u want to know about my past , if u don't want to talk about urs ?

Maan: if I want to share ?

Geet: means ?

Maan: u cn ask anything Geet ,, anything nd I m too want to know few things from u which wr unknown to me ,, dad forced me not to think about that nd handled himself solely .

Geet I know that u knew many things nd I want to know them ,, will u share that with me ?

Geet looked at him confused thinking what nd why he wants to know now ?

Geet: there is no use of talking about that ,, uncle was right forget everything what had happened , nd think about ur future .

Maan: to start a new life nd to make a solid base of trust ,, clearity is must ,, it cn be painful but sometime our past draw up our future ,, though now they r useless but I want to know .

Geet: what do u want to know ?


Precap ----- Maan shared his past ...


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb

Dard baatne se kam hota hai

She feels his pain so how can he not feel hers. He feels it and he is punishing himself for it.

Hope they open up now and start fresh

I want Manu to have a wonderful b'day Babbie

Thanks for updating
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
felt Maan's pain in this. He is hurting and hoping for some answers from Geet. Maybe after their talk, they will realize what actually happened and why.
Thanks for pm.
Edited by fict - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Feelinggg bad 4 Maan...
but Geet is also right on her part...she can't forgive him easily...
Excited 4 next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part di...maan frustrated and geet felt pain to see him like that...now maan wanted to share his past with geet..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous Update

Actually right now I'm a bit upset with Geet surely she can move a little ahead why she is been so suborn only after she sees Maan worn out she allows him to have a party for Manu .
Geet considers her past a bad phase and that is understandable but she should also look at the brighter side she has Manu because of her past

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Posted: 10 years ago
maan angry geet bandaging him maan decided to reveal his past

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