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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 100


Part - 101


The atmosphere of KM became very quiet nd all d elders wr drawing in guilt as well as angry over Maan but d damage had done ,, that happened coz they lacked at their responsibilities ,, DM blindly backed Maan coz she loved him nd Rashi nd Yash bent to adjust for d peace in family nd they cdn't anger DM nd their son , DM was a rough nd high headed person ,though she run a NGO for orphan girls but for her that was for society ,, for her family she wanted everything perfect that is why she took Geet as a charity case nd didn't count her as a family member though Geet was Yash's friend's daughter , after that Sam's incident Yash felt guilty not trusting Geet , even all wr realising that Geet was right nd wanted to save Maan from those cheaters but later all faced a bad time not trusting her nd regret .

This situation was more painful as compare to that ,, they cdn't think in their dreams that Maan cd ruin Geet's life in his rage ,, she didn't trust anyone nd left quietly from here ,, faced a difficult nd painful time alone ,, hide nd lied about Manu even still rejecting Maan ,, all wr in a venerable situation ,, they wr ashamed nd not in d position to say anything to Geet ,, she rejected them nd they didn't have guts to ask forgiveness or to open their mouth in front of her .

In this situation only Maan cd do something nd that is why Yash threatened Maan to bring back Geet in KM with all regards but he cdn't sit back defeated ,, he lacked that time but not this time nd decided to use Geet's trick .

Rashi was bounded with Yash's order nd regretting at her place rejecting Geet calling her a mother of child nd blaming Maan for liking Geet but now things turned down ,, DM was at worst place nd she was not in d position to open her mouth , now she was feeling ashamed to face Geet .

Maan was at direct hit ,, he was d only person who cd talk to Geet regarding this issue but Yash bounded him too not to reveal d truth in front of Geet that they knew everything nd left everything on him to settle down without forcing Geet , but he had an advantage now ,, he cd meet nd talk Geet nd Manu freely . his elders wr aware about his relation with them .

Maan met Geet nd Manu at BF table nd Geet quietly served him then started feeding Manu ,, she was avoiding direct look at maan nd replying minimal ,, Maan knew she was avoiding him coz of their mrng closeness ,, to make her easy he started diff topic .

Maan: aamm, Geet I want to say something .

Geet hummed : hummm ,, what ?

Maan: U&A Sam left nd u r alone here , then why this sep living ? now u cn live in KM with us .

Geet hands stopped at her place ,, knowing about his marriage issue she was planning to maintain proper distance nd here he was advising her to shift in KM to face those heart breaking things all d time ,, how cd she ?

Geet: no, I m fine here nd now it's d matter of few weeks then we have to go back .

Her reply pained Maan ,, he cdn't force her but wanted her nd Manu close him.

Maan: Geet think about manu , in U&A Sam absence who'll look after him in day time ,, in KM Mom nd DM cn take care of him properly in ur absence .

Geet knew that Manu is missing U&A Sam but she had to manage for few weeks ,, she didn't want to burden Rashi nd DM so instructed Satish nd Nanny how to handle Manu ,, she made a timetable nd told them to work according that ,, Geet herself called them on phone nd reminded them nd talk to Manu after every hr from office ,, she had managed alone from start nd this was nothing to her .

Geet: Mr Khurana , I have managed alone all d time nd I cn't burden ur DM nd Mom ,, they bore me enough , i don't want to burden them again like they wr when ur dad brought me in KM .

Maan (hurt) : G e e t , Manu is not a burden , he belongs to them nd ,, nd they have to know about him some day ,, try to understand .

Geet: Mr Khurana , ur family is planning nd dreaming for ur future so better u think for them not for us .

Maan : nd u think i'll move like they planned ?

Geet: u have to .

Maan: I won't ,, get it clearly Geet I cn live my whole life like this facing ur indifference as my punishment but my life'll revolve around U nd Manu .

Geet worried: it cn hurt ur family , try to understand , u r not bound to us , go nd live ur life .

Maan: I'll Geet , but with u nd Manu nd start count u nd Manu as my family .

Geet: it cn't be , it's impossible .

Maan: it cn be ,, nothing is impossible .

Now move fast we r getting late for office ,, haan one more thing if u r not ready to move in KM then I'll sent few men to fix CC cameras in OH , OK .

Geet was staring at him awed ,, he was so much determind nd clear at his place ,, how she wd handle him ,, his this open behaviour cd put her in some difficult situation .

Geet meakly: eski kya jaroorat hei ?

Maan: mujhe hei nd one more thing inform me if u'll get late in eve ,, hummm ,,?

Geet: humm .

They both come out after handing Manu to Nanny ,, Maan strictly instructed Satish to keep an eye on Manu ,, Geet nd Maan left for their offices ,, Maan was lil satisfied that Geet was accepting things slowly,, Geet was going in her cab ,, she was lost in her thoughts ,, Maan's closeness with them fearing her ,, his authortive behaviour was making her weak ,,, somewhere she admitted inwardly that Maan was right at his place accepting his sin nd responsibility ,, sensing d sincerity of his care nd concern for Manu nd her she turned soft ,, d greed of a mother to give all d happiness to her child weakened her too but she feared for d results nd d reactions of his family.

Days started rolling down like this ,, there wr minimal talks between all Khuranas members ,, Yash gen talked about business with Maan ,, after that no talk about his marriage nd Geet ,, all wr doing their work at their places but one thing had changed ,, Rashi nd DM started visited OH in Geet's absence ,, both spent a good time with Manu nd have a good check on all d things regarding his care ,, now they loved him more then anything ,, he already called them Granny nd now they realised that why Geet taught him this ,, they wr overwhalmed that Geet didn't distance manu from them ,, everything was going fine but d time of Geet nd Manu's departure was reducing nd disturbing all .

Geet's office was all set with new staff nd d Sr team had guided d new respective heads of d depts. ,, Geet was in tech team so she had more work load than others ,, it was a rainy eve nd she stuck with some work in her office ,, she tried to finish fast but it became lil late nd dark she didn't bother nd talk to Manu nd his Nanny who was going back to her home ,, Geet told Satish to take care of Manu nd she started to go back home ,, All Srs staff had their sep cabs ,, Geet's cab driver had change a week before coz d last one went on leave ,, he replaced this for a week in his absence ,, D cabs wr provided by d Co. nd there was a person who deal with transport ,, so none bother these things ,, their cabs picked nd dropped them .

Geet was in her cab heading towards KM ,, she had crossed Delhi Border nd got Maan's call who was coming back from his Manesar const. site office ,, he 1st called OH nd then geet getting news from Manu nd Satish that she became lil late ,, he ordered Satish to take Manu to KM where he cd spent time with his Grannies .

Maan: hello Geet , where r u ?

Geet: hi , I m on d way to home .

Maan: u didn't inform me that u r getting late , I send Manu to KM ,take him from there after reaching home , OK.

Geet smiled: OK , thanks .

Maan: where r u right now ? I m also on MG road .

Geet: Oh ,, I m crossing R***** , but she realized that her driver took a left turn ,, it was raining nd heavy traffic so all wr moving slowly with halts but she thought that why he took left turn ,, she asked to her driver while talking to Maan .

Geet: driver tumne ye left turn ku liya hei ?

Driver startled : ji ma'am wo traffic jam hei , ye ander se road hei ,, aage jaker eesi mei mil jayega ,, yahan se jaldi pahuch jayenge , khali road hei .

Geet: nahi tum ussi main road se chalo ,, wapas lo cab .

Driver: ma'am bas abhi ussi road per aa jayenge ,, aap aaram se baitho .

Geet : nahi , maine kahan wapas lo ,, gadi ro ko abhi aur main road per lo ,, nahi jana yahan se .

But he didn't stop ,, Geet slided down d window glass nd tried to locate d area,, shout but that was lone road nd there wr farm houses both d sides ,, she feared nd scold driver again

Geet: gadi ro ko abhi ,, suna tumne ,, ro ko.

Driver : gadi to ab wahi rukegi jahan mai chaunga ,, chup baithi raho jaan pyaari hei to ,, he closed d WG which feared nd shocked Geet .

There Maan was on hold nd listening Geet's talks ,, he sensed that she was in danger nd started fearing for her ,, his breath stuck in his throat .

Precap --- Maan was dying to reach Geet ,,, praying for her ...


Part - 102
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4298595/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-11-updated-pt-110-pg-130-12th-feb?pn=23




sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago

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