CHURA LIYA HAI TUM NE JO DIL KO ... MG * Ch 4,p 112, new thd link pg 1

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anshm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#921

Nice story...snd d link 4 chapter 4th

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tapti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#922

luvd part 2 luvd maan gawking at geet and geet being ignorant to it wanting the link for part 3 pls send me the link

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minelove24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#923

awsme update.. garba wad so awsme
.maaneet.. just magical.. omggg slapping for msk... how come... loved update... hehe disaster queen pinky did gadbad it turned beautiful mistake for maaneet... loved update

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maansi25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#924

Awesome update

Going very fast.

Maan worried about geet.

Saving her, loving her

Why in most of the stories he is without the parents

It feels bad.

Geet again with the grace of babaji as the mangetar.

Happy for them

Part 4

Aakhir kala jaadoo chal hi gaya

Disaster Queen Pinky ne kamal kar diya

Babaji ne dua sun lee

While reading we are so much engrossed

Want to go on and on

Keep giving as our darling maaneet

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Remya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#925

that was so cute.. especially Maan..
Maan understands her innocent nature very well and dint even take advantage of that situation.. He is such a charming character..
Did geet realize now the funny sensations in her stomach in past while seeing maan's love filled eyes? 😉
Thanks to pinky for being a disaster queen.. warna geet etni jaldi maan ki mangetar nahi banthi..jooti toh sahi 😉

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nats010114

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Posted: 10 years ago

#926

hey

i dint get a pm for ch 4..😭😭

i did comment last tym..

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4298497&PID=119280651&#p119280651

will b waiting!!

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namita25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#927

awww you seem to have some magic wand...the way your stories leaves me spellbound...hats off to you gal...
Maan saved Geet from those goons and warned her not to take shortcut...
Time flew and Maan lost his parents...he left playing cricket and is now MD of Khurana constructions...Geet on the other hand shifted to her hometown with Daarji...now he is looking for a girl who would act as his fake fiance and seems like Adi has picked up Geet for this...
waiting eagerly for the next part...

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namita25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#928

plz send password for part 4...

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Onir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#929

Chapter 2 : As always 👏👏

I guess your favourite line is

"The mightier they are, the harder they fall.

Boy, did he fall for her." 😆😆 You just love it... and you know what I love you doing this in each of your story.

Bechara Maan he got it all back with interest... Moti moti kehta rehat tha, but now she's all that he thinks about and fantasizes 😉. I think he always thought about her whether it was fighting or else when he stares at her. Maan I really feel for him.

I love the way you gave space and perspective for their growth... something that's natural, but you added your own twisty tadka to it 😳😳. Architecture mein bhi bechare ki halat kar di 🤣

Great going Avi... 2 more upadates to read now... 😃

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mauaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#930

Originally posted by: mauaa
Cross my heart n hope to dy.. Wt a twist.. But tht to incomplete... Is that fake fianc geet or smone else? Jaldi update dena.. Biting my nails..

ive already gave pt 3 s comment.. Then pt 4 ka pw kyu nhi diya?😡