CHURA LIYA HAI TUM NE JO DIL KO ... MG * Ch 4,p 112, new thd link pg 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Onir

me me 😃

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It's been ages I've commented on your work. It feels great commenting 😳
Love the Mullaqat
Mumbai municipal corporation 😆😆
The innocence, the adrenaline and the nok jhok of those early days of life that will always struck a chord ... You captured the essence very well 👏
You know what I love about it is... the way you narrate it giving it a fresh feel... it always brings a smile to my face reading the way you bring about your thoughts together making it into a scenic picture to visualise the happenings... the simplicity and beauty in your writing always makes me yearn to comeback and relive the moments you describe with your characters. 😊
Thanks for continuing writing... it requires a lot of effort and will power to keep going even when the life we lead keeps us from coming back and continuing with full enthusiasm. 👍🏼
Love you [>D<]
Waiting for more... 😉

Oh my!
holding my heart in with my hand!
Nisha once said that write if only for that one person who gets you.
That was at chapter 4 of the locket😆
Just seeing you here and seeing your comment has invigorated my craze again😆
Thank u Doc for always being here for me🤗
Je t'aime forever😃
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Awesome update
Geet maan fighting so cute
Maan want hit ball to her after first fight

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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
another lovely story yaar..it was fun to see maaneet fight for the ball and maan fida over geet when they enter teenage..cant wait for the story to progress..d
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: dqno1

Oh my!

holding my heart in with my hand!
Nisha once said that write if only for that one person who gets you.
That was at chapter 4 of the locket😆
Just seeing you here and seeing your comment has invigorated my craze again😆
Thank u Doc for always being here for me🤗
Je t'aime forever😃

You did great... quite a journey from our angel days to The Locket to today ... sems awesome 👏 Proud of you 😃
Btw where's Nishaji ???
And I LOVE YOU TOO FOREVER 😳❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
You know what I also Loved the "Muqqa-Laat" for the "Mullaqat"
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Onir

You did great... quite a journey from our angel days to The Locket to today ... sems awesome 👏 Proud of you 😃

Btw where's Nishaji ???
And I LOVE YOU TOO FOREVER 😳❤️

The Angel Days😆
How much fun was that!
Nishaji went for a vacation to Europe and India.
Abhi tak koi message ka reply nahi kiya hai
hope she comes back soon.
Doc you made my day😃
I was not even going to post today, Lakshmi is still making a banner, but because you came I did.
🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
lovely start dear
eagerly waiting for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Beautiful and Energetic First Meeting
Ullu and Moti ...well seems that Geet could'nt keep the ball
as Darji always gave the boys the ball back
I simply love their childhood fights its real
now Geet is 15 and Maan 17 ...lets see what happens

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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Amazing update ...loved it wat a start
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Lovely start..It's a normal fight between kids for a cricket ball but you made it very interesting with the nick names they use for each other..Loved it..Thanks for the PM and for continuing to write again..

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