A Love in Silence MG FF Chapter 15 pg 107 updated

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shubhi_s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#431

awesome update

loved it

maaneet first kiss😳

maan guilty for kissing geet😲

geet decide to leave maan😲😭

precap seems scary😲

pls update soon

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Well written! Geet loves Maan bt will leave him! she wonders wt will happen 2 him! Maaneet kiss! she is happy bt Mana feels guilty! he thinks he is like Rakesh! so he is helping her 2 get her voice back! Geet goes 2 the gurduwara! she thanks Nakul! he wonders y! Geet leaving! interesting precap! update soon!

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icskwt

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Posted: 10 years ago

#433

Wonderfully written super part...such a beautiful potrate of maneet feelings...just one kiss and so many things changed ...where maan felt bad for his behaviour ,geet just want to live her life for those beautiful memories...so geet is not feeling herself fit and good for maan...so she is going to leave him...

while reading only it touched my heart...their unsaid love...suffring...and just everything...

thanks for this lovely part and for pm...do continue soon...

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 10 years ago

#434

just read all the parts

awesome

cont soon

thnku 4 the pms

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cuteeagle65

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Posted: 10 years ago

#435

amazing update loved it maan kiss geet lovely their moments lovely geet think she don't deserve maan she inpure 4 maan adi talk with geet also lovely hope she don't leave maan

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NoshiMaaneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#436

I don't know what do you have Maya..
I just can not stop my tears
I really can't
See i came back to read ur writings after such a long while and i can't hold back my tears..
I know how does it feel maya to leave a place which u love so much.. Which isn't ur home. . but theres no place better than that for ur soul.. Theres no other Home better than that... I know..how it breaks a person to leave.. That caress that final look on the dearly loved places..the rooms..
I can't stop my tears
I can relate

I have no more words for now
I'll just say u r brilliant i dont know whats with u but it always reaches my heart

U added their kiss in this update too but im honestly too much emotional to focus my attention on that. I'll however add, I hope the future gives them both the chance to tell each other how they felt and specially Maan gets to realise his action didn't dirty her..

I can relate maya. How leaving Home feels..
Hope their wandering souls find their way back to each other.
Carry on soon

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jenny

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Posted: 10 years ago

#437

Really touching reading this beautiful update...Geet thinks she isn't pure to deserve Maan's care and affection. Just a kiss by Maan is enough for her to live her life with maan's memory. She's ready to leave him and go away...

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vrinda22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#438

Geet thinks she is not worth for maan

Maan k geet

He feels guilt

But geet is happy

Dr.told Geet can get her voice back

Geet leaving maan oh no

Nice part

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maya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#439

A Love in Silence

Chapter 12

Maan was driving in silence and Geet was just staring at him all the way long with an smile, she wanted to get enough of him until she is with him, Maan saw her starting at him and asked what, but Geet nodded nothing but kept staring at him, Maan suddenly stopped his Car and Geet looked forwards, "what the hell" Maan thought as he got down and saw the Police, seeing Maan an Police officer came up,

"Mr.Khurana, sorry the road is blocked, an huge accident" he informed, "OH, how to get to Gurdwara then," Maan asked, "Mr. Khurana, if you need I will let you walk through this but can't let the car" he said, "No Problem" Maan said and looked behind at his guards standing behind him now, "no problem, you guys be here, the Gurdwara is nearby only, I will go, you park the car in the side and wait here" Maan ordered and the Guards paused for a second and finally said an ok,

Maan walked Geet to the Gurdwara, "Geet, you go on, I will wait outside" Maan said as he doesn't believe in god, Geet nodded an ok and smiled at him big, as she was seeing Maan, her tears flowed down without her permission, and Maan looked at her shocked, "Geet" he said and Geet suddenly hugged him, putting Maan to utter shock, in midst of the road she is hugging him, "I am sorry, I am so sorry, I need to leave you alone, thank you for everything" she thought as she hugged him and pulled from him,

And turned to leave and Maan held her hand and Geet stopped, Maan made her turn around, "What the hell is the problem," Maan shouted in anger and Geet smiled up instead of being scared, this is what she missed to see, his angry avatar, and now she saw this side too, she smiled and wiped her tears, pulled from Maan and rushed inside the Gurdwara without looking back, Maan was totally confused and decided to wait for her return and ask what the matter is, when they get home,

The place almost was deserted, except for few shops there; Maan went and stood under a tree, thinking about Geet, "why in the world I couldn't understand her, in the hospital she didn't want to remove her Mangalsutra and I thought she liked her husband and so doing like that, and then yesterday night I kissed her and I thought she would scream up and create an drama and will leave the house, but she was acting so normal, what the hell is in her heart, if she likes her husband so much, you should she be here,"

"And if she doesn't like him too, why should she be here, she would have go to her house and why the hell is she wearing these marriage symbols, she could have got divorce and marry someone else, she is young and beautiful, then, and also on that day she was ready to go to Rakesh for my sake, who in the world would dare to do that, that too an married women, this girl sure is an puzzle and pulling me too into it" Maan thought shaking his head up,

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Geet went inside the Gurdwara and looked around and found people walking up here and there, Geet want up and asked a Guy where the bus is in her sign language, showing the notice which she took from Rahul and he told her that it's parked behind the Gurdwara, Geet nodded and thanked him, and she reached the gang which was gathering up for the trip, and she again signed an women, what should she do to come with them, and the women told her to go and register her name first,

Geet then when to the person she showed and signed she can't speak and that she needs to join them, "just pay 150 as the registration fee, and get an ID card, and after that you no need to pay anything we will take care of stay, food everything," the guy at the registration counter said, Geet didn't take any money along with her, and she looked blank, she signed she had no money, and the guy was above to say something. But before that Geet removed her golden bangles and gave him,

"Baba ji, what is this, please take this back, I can see that you are in some big trouble, ok, I will even pay for you, after all this is Baba ji's holy place and here troubles are gone, not created, so please takes this back" he said and Geet thanked him with her tears and got the card he gave her, "please write your name and contact details in it, and then go and wait there, will call you when we are above to move" he said and Geet thanked him again and went and sat there,

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It's been more than half an hour and Maan was getting frustrated, "what the hell she is doing inside," Maan thought looking at the holy place, and suddenly hear some noise and turned around to see some guys walking with an wooden sticks in hand and they were asking everyone to get out of this place, "now what is this" Maan thought, as he saw all the shop keepers and people there rushing away from the place, and in no second the place turned deserted completely,

Maan then took his mobile and found there was no signal in it, "hey, have to say especially for you ah, Get out" An Guy shouted looking at Maan, "Or" Maan said as he kept his mobile in his pocket, "or," an guy shouted as he raised his hand up to hit Maan, but Maan held his hand on time and hit him hard on his abs, "How dare you warn Maan Singh Khurana" Maan asked as he held his hand and turned it behind his back and pushed him away, "hey, what are you looking at attack him" the guy shouted towards his partners,

Then two guys came up and held Maan's hands from either side, and Maan used his strength to pull those guys with full force and dash against each other and they fall on the ground with the other guy, "now I will show you your really place" Maan said, "Sir, please forgive us" the first guy on ground said and before Maan could turn back, he felt an painful hit on back of his head and, he turned around, and there was guy behind him holding an wooden stick, and he hit Maan's on his forehead hard now,

Maan felt his vision blurring up with the pain and before he could react he felt another hit on his face making him fall on the ground, then the guys hit him hard on his legs and arms and after Maan was totally fallen weak on the road, "Hey enough, let's go" they said and rushed away, after some times, Maan slowly try to held his head behind and found the blood flowing from behind and there was also blood oozing out from his forehead, Maan tried to stand up, but as soon as he stood up, his head spin up and he fall on the ground, Maan try to get up but he couldn't,

Maan slowly raised his head to looked at the place, there was no one or nothing except for the symbol of god shining before him, which he refused to pray, "I would die rather than asking you for help" Maan thought as he looked at it,

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Geet was sitting there waiting holding Maan's photo in her hand, thinking how her life will be without his presence, it was even hard to think about it, she was surprised to find, Maan had created an unshakable presence and impact in her life and heart but she had to do it for him, Geet thought looking at Maan and suddenly an huge strong wind came up pulling the photo from Geet's hands and Geet freaked out and ran behind it but it land on the live cooking fire, burning the photo before Geet could get it, Geet's heart started to beat high, her eyes filled up,

She felt like something bad is gonna happen to Maan, Geet can't stay calm, she felt an suffocation, "no, nothing will happen to him, nothing will," Geet said to herself, but her heart was not listening and getting more scared, "ok, will go and see him for once" Geet thought and rushed up to Gurdwara entrance, as she went there, she saw few people crowded in the mid of the road but she looked around for Maan, he was not there, "May be he had gone back to the car" Geet thought,

But somehow her heart wanted her to go and see the reason for the crowd in mid of the road, she felt really wired as her heart turned heavy with every step, as she reached the crowd, she went close and saw what they were seeing, Geet's heart skipped an beat and her eyes widen up and her tears flowed down as she kneeled down and held Maan's head, Maan was not fully conscious he was moaning and signing in pain, Geet's hands started to tremble up, she looked at people around then and pleaded to them to help her,

But everyone was scared, and paused up, Geet then stood up and rushed up, she was running with all her strength, crying and breathing high, and as she saw the police still in the accident spot, she stopped at them, and as the police man saw her with Maan a few minutes back he recognized her, "what happened Mam" the policeman asked and then Maan's guards who were waiting there rushed to her seeing her, she then signed them to follow her and rushed away and the guards and the Policeman followed her,

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Geet was praying her heart out and was crying like anything sitting in the hospital, and Adi was standing there yelling at the Guards there, "who the hell asked you to leave him alone," Adi was yelling at them "Sir, Boss only ordered us" the Guards said, "Hell with your reasons, even if he asks you not to follow, you are suppose to follow him," Adi shouted, "Sorry sir, this will not happen again," he said, "Sorry, Sorry, your sorry will not cure him" Adi shouted in frustration,

Adi then walked up, and saw Geet crying her heart out, and her tears melted him, Adi went and held her shouted and Geet stood up and Adi wiped her tears, "No, Geet, he will be fine, nothing will happen to our Maan sir, he will be fine" he said and Geet hugged him up, she wanted to scream, it was all because of her, her fault, she decided to go away, and she asked Maan to take her to Gurdwara, she left him alone, and...

Adi pulled her up and wiped her tears, "be strong Geet, be strong" he said but how will she, when all her strength was lying inside the hospital room unconscious, the then doctor came out and Adi rushed towards him, "Doctor, how is he, is he ok," Adi asked and Geet was looking at the doctor waiting for his words, "Relax Mr.Adithya he is fine, nothing is serious, he is strong, just slight fractures in his knees and thank god that the head wound was not in an bad place, he will be fine in a week but still he is weak, because of the blood lose so only with proper food and rest, he will be fine" the doctor said,

"When can we discharge him" Adi asked, "When he turns conscious, he is still under the drug effects," The doctor said, and Geet signed whether she can see him with her tears flowing down, "oh" the Doctor started, and Geet pleaded up, "Doctor please" Adi too asked, "Ok, but don't disturb him" the doctor said and went away, "Go" Adi said and Geet smiled and went towards Maan, her tears flowed down like an flood river, half in pain and half in happiness as he will be fine soon,

Geet touched his band aid and looked at his calm face, she held his hand in her hands and looked at him, "I am sorry, please forgive me, it's all because of me, it's all because of me, forgive me please" Geet thought crying and holding his hand tight and kissed it with her lips and tears, "forgive me" she said in her silent language, Maan's mind was getting it's conscious back and he slowly began to remember the incident with pain, and I also remember leaving Geet inside the Gurdwara,

Maan's mind somehow feared of leaving Geet alone, what if she came out and searched for him, are even worse, she get into the hands of those guys, his fear in his mind, made his body react, and his hand moved in her hold by holding her hand back, "Geet" his lips utter her name and she looked at him shocked, and found his eyes are still closed, Geet have an humongous wave of happiness hovering inside her, and she held his hand tight, and Maan tried to open his eyes with so much of pain,

It was all blur and tears formed up hiding his views more, but finally he opened his eyes and saw Geet's smiling lips and tear filled eyes, and her happiness was screaming up in her face now, Maan felt an relief seeing her safe and near him, Maan try to get up and Geet helped him up hold him carefully, "Geet" Maan said looking at her smiling yet teary face, "Geet, how did I get here, when did I, how did you" Maan asked and Geet trembled up, and got up and rushed outside,

In a minute, she came with Adi, "Maan sir" he came in with tears, "Adi, how, what happened" Maan asked and Adi said everything, "Poor Geet, she only managed to bring you here, she didn't even wait for the police to file the report first, or fill the doctor report" Adi said and Maan looked at Geet, who was looking down still smiling, "Maan sir, will go and bring the doctor" Adi said and went away, "Geet," Maan called her and she went near him, "I am fine, atleast now stop crying" Maan said and Geet started to cry more with his sweet words,

"Oh Damn" Maan said, "Geet" he yelled up but his head hurt as he raised his voice and strained his body a bit, "Ah" Maan said closing his eyes, Geet freaked out and signed him to relax and wiped her tears and looked at him and signed she will not cry, "Good" Maan said silently, and then Adi came in with the Doctor, "Hello Mr. Khurana" he said, "How are you feeling" the Doctor asked, "I am fine" Maan said, "Good, but your reports say you still need an good rest" the doctor said,

"Don't worry doctor; I will be fine" he said, "Maan sir, please, listen to the doctor" Adi said, "Adi" Maan looked at him with his stern look silencing him, "Doctor, just give the medicines," Maan said and the Doctor nodded up, "Mr. Khurana, should I send a nurse to your house to look after you" the Doctor asked, "Do I look like an little kid, and also Geet is there na" Maan said suddenly and Geet looked at him shocked,

Maan himself is shocked with his words, "how did I say that, why did I say that" Maan thought and looked at Geet, who was smiling at him as usual, "Ok then, I will explain to her even, the dosage timing and dressing details for the wound" Doctor said and Geet nodded an ok, "Come with me, please" the doctor took Geet away with him, "Maan sir, I will do the payments and get ready the discharge papers" Adi said and went away, but Maan was still thinking, in what sense he said that Geet will take care of him,

But he knew he wasn't wrong, he couldn't believe the scary girl, who was scared even to take an small step forward alone, had made him admitted in the hospital, and made the doctor to start the treatment soon, even before writing an report or filing an compliant, it was unbelievable,

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It was around 10.00 pm, Geet was happy that they are back to the Khurana Mansion, she took his tablets and went to his room and saw Maan filling his drink glass, and Geet went and held his hand, and signed an no, "Geet," Maan said as he pulled her hand, she then showed the tablets she was holding, and Maan got the tablets and throw that into his mouth and had an sip from his drinks glass, Geet looked at him scared, and held his hand and pleaded with her eyes, "Geet," Maan said pulling his hand away,

Maan usually gets irritated when someone stop him from drinking, but with Geet he didn't want to yell now, "Geet, it's paining a lot, and I need this to get away from my pains," Maan said and Geet looked at him silently, "or else I will never be able to sleep, you need me to take rest" Maan asked and Geet nodded an yes, "then let me" Maan said and Geet now have no reason to stop him, she wanted him to be pain free, Geet then took his bottle and kept before him

Maan looked at her puzzled she signed saying him just to drink this bottle and no more, "I can't say that but will stop when I forget the pain," Maan said understanding her meaning and Geet nodded an ok finally, and went away, Maan looked at her walking, what kind of strange bonding is happening between them, no name for the relationship, but it's getting deeper every day, Geet turned and looked at him as she reached the door and walked out,

Precap: Vikram's plan making Maan and Geet even more closely,

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samidsamid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#440

awsm updt...thank God Geet didnt leave maan...maneet has a uniq bond bttwn thm...i jus lovedit...i hope maan will undrstand Geets past...whnvr it happen maan will support Geet...thanx 4 updt...and PM