A Love in Silence MG FF Chapter 15 pg 107 updated

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Alamelu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

omg...thank god maan did the right thing and came back and saved her...poor guy so tormented...trying hard to be a rock and not let emotions inside...but geet is slowly cutting through the exteriro...what is she doing going to rakesh on her own...

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samidsamid

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

niceuppdt...soo mmaan save Geet ...i jus had doubt...ddid maan delibrtly take Geet to rakesh...cz hhe ws feeling guillty...poor geet what shhe have to bare more...precap mee oi thhink Geet cm to knw abt deal so she is going to rakjesh hrself...upddt soon

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Rosmitha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

superb update...

loved it...

I really like the way you write your story dear...

i really appreciate your writing 😊

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K1k1k1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Loved last 2 part amazing Mann saved her his falling in love and precap why is geet going baclk to that idiot

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cuteeagle65

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Posted: 10 years ago

#235

awesome updates loved it maan saved geet again geet went 2 party so happy that she is going out with maan i hate that man rakesh maan did deal but felt guilty & throw papers on his face loved it maaneet like each other the choice of song superb

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shubhi_s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#236

awesome update

loved it

maan taking geet with him to rakesh😲😡

but maan heart did not let him in peace leaving geet alone with that creep👏😉

so maan cancelled the deal and brought her back👏

maaneet hug was cherry on the top😳

precap seems scary

pls update soon

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APARNA TAMBE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#237

very nice

maan is not accepting that he is changing

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zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Very intense.. And emotional one..

Fabulously pulled together..

Written superbly..

Maan's frustration.. Geet trust on Him..everything... Confusing.. How he suffer between heart and mind..

Wow..👏

Geet ..trust maan..though she understood.. He used her..

Her heart believed he ll come back and save her..her belief came true...

But couldn't understand.. What maan is and fear what ll he do knowing her past ...

Maan decided to stay away..recognizing he is changing ..

Waiting.. How she by herself goes to rakesh..guess maan having out break..

Waiting 4 next..

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GBR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#239

I read prologue long back n lost this link...got to read all parts in one go...this is such a complicated n terrific story...

feeling very bad for geet...her story really make me feel horrible n maan...as of now I have mixed feelings about him...

waiting to c where maaneet story leads to

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maya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#240

A Love in Silence

Chapter 7

It was around 2.30 when Maan rushed into Khurana Mansion, and it looked like a storm hit the place, he just destroyed whatever came before his eyes, Geet and Rahul looked at him rushing up the stairs and stood there scared and feared, actually Maan's mood was good in the morning, he didn't shout or yell, which was an very good sign, and suddenly this, "Geet ji, something is so serious, Maan sir coming home in afternoon and with this mood" Rahul said scared,

They heard lots of noise in Maan's room, and after the noise got less Geet made his black coffee and went up scared, his room was opened up and Geet knocked up twice and went in but Maan was not there, looked like he was in the washroom, the room looked totally messed up with things shattered everywhere, Geet kept the coffee cup on the table and went away,

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Maan was roaring inside the washroom, he ripped his tie and shirt of him, "how dare they are, how dare," Maan roared up, "what the hell they think of me," Maan shouted up, "this is my company, my rules, and how dare they question me" Maan roared again, and looked into the mirror, "Mr.Khurana, how could you be this careless, first hearing went on the favor Vikram groups, we didn't except this from you" their voice rang up in his mind,

"We kept all our fates in you and so as our money, and if it goes like this, we need to reconsider about our investments" another voice pricked his mind, "what answer will we give to our share holders Mr.Khurana, you know how much this will affect the shock values" another voice rang up, "Looks like Mr. Khurana lost his charm" this voice almost killed him up, Maan looked himself into the Mirror,

"They find fault in me, ah, those morons who praised me when I get the deals, holding my feet when I put the note bundles in front of them, praised me like god, now just for losing, no, no, I didn't lose it yet, for just stepping down a bit, started to question me, question Maan Singh Khurana, how dare he raised his voice before me" Maan roared up, he couldn't bear it, it was an big insult, and hurt to his ego, they saw him like an loser, they questioned him like a loser, which he couldn't take it, He felt like destroying the world,

"Why, why did I back away from my plan, why, I should have left her with him, I showed an little goodness and the world is accusing me for that, I should have got the deal, but" Maan stopped as he remember Geet and it made him more anger, why in the world I bring her here, if she wasn't here, he would not seen her or demanded her, it was my mistake and my damn mistake" Maan shouted, he was burning up, and to cool himself he stood under the shower, letting the cold water wash away his heat inside and outside the body as he held the wall.

The cold water cooled his skin but not his mind, those looks and voices and their thoughts made Maan hell anger, his ego was stamped and was hurt to an huge level, something that haven't happened before, he was trying to stop those voice but he could and his uncles voice too came up, "All the people loves only money, and once it leaves you everyone will leave you, everyone, People will be around you, praise you, until you have this money, if not, no one will come near you,"

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It's been more than one hour either Maan came out of his room or anyone went in, "hey, what is this, morning only I filled the water tank, and now the water is not coming on the pipes," Rahul said as he was standing before the sink, " must be an leak somewhere, Hmmm, Geet ji, will you go and bring Maan sir's coffee mug from his room, I am hell scared to go, please" Rahul said and Geet nodded and went up, Geet slowly peeped in and found Maan was not inside the room, Geet then went inside to take the empty cup, and thus she saw that the cup was still full "Is he still inside the bathroom," Geet thought puzzled up,

Geet then went and knocked the Bathroom door but there was no sound, she tapped it again hard but still no response, Geet then closed her eyes pulling the courage and opened the bathroom door and looked inside, Geet's eyes went wide in shock, her heart almost stopped beating, Maan was on the floor, fully wet and still in his pants, Geet went and kneel down near him and slowly touched him and got shocked up, he was almost frozen, Geet's eyes poured out as she took his head on her lap and rubbed his cheeks, and tapped up, she wanted to scream now, but she cursed herself as she can't,

Geet felt like her life ended up seeing Maan, she now prayed to the God she never believed, to save him, she was ready to offered her life back to hell if they could save him, Geet then wiped her tears up and got up as she put Maan hand over her shoulder, but it wasn't easy for her to pull Maan up, that too in this unconscious stage, Geet used all her strength and stood up pulling him along with her and dragged him slowly out of the bathroom and made him to lay on the bed,

Geet then rushed down to the kitchen and Nakul and Rahul freaked out seeing her messy self and Geet pulled them both to Maan's room, "Maan sir" Nakul went and held him up, "Mata Rani, he is frozen, what is this" he cried up, "Rahul you change Maan sir's dress and I will go and call the doctor" Nakul said and went away and Geet too went away and stood out crying high looking at Maan, "one man tried to help her and now he is laid helpless inside" she thought cursing her fate,

The doctor came up soon and treated Maan up, gave some injections, "he will be ok" he said making Geet to smile up finally, " I had given him a strong sedation, so he will sleep for long hours, only way to keep him calm and resting up, but keep him away from the cold for a while and he looks weak again" the doctor said to Nakul when Geet as standing near, "What to do Doctor, if he is drinking so much, without eating properly, his health will be spoiled like this only na," Nakul said as he cried up, "Then why don't you stop him and talk to him," the doctor asked, "what doctor, knowing him how could you, will he ever listen to anyone, or does anyone ever had any guts to say anything to him," Nakul said crying,

Doctor nodded and went away and so as Nakul, and Geet went and sat near Maan on the floor looking at him, "what would have happened, for he was so anger on himself and try to ditch himself like this," she wondered looking at Maan unconsciously laying there,

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It was around 4.30 when Adi came to the Khurana Mansion and Nakul told him what had happened, and Adi rushed to see Maan along with Nakul and saw Geet there sitting near bed on the floor, and seeing Adi she stood up, "Damn, I knew this would happened, I should not have let Maan sir alone" Adi said fisting his hands and Nakul asked what happened, and Geet too looked at him with her questioning eyes,

"Oh, there was an huge deal, and we need an guys approval to get that deal, that day too he came to the Mansion with Maan sir, Rakesh," Adi said and Geet's eyes widen in shock and fear, "don't know what happened between Maan sir and him, yesterday evening Maan sir said the deal will be ours, so as that Rakesh and today morning don't know what happened, Rakesh called and said he had shown his support to opposite party in written and the news soon spread up,"

"And an meeting was held up with the board members, and our companies major share holders started questioning Maan sir" Adi said more of to himself totally anger , "What they questioned him" Nakul asked, "yes, and you know him, he got hell anger and promised them, the deal will be done in one way or another, but that Rakesh said he will not talk with us anymore, and he was hell tensed and angry, he hated the way the board acted up, they started commenting on him, thank god, I somehow made the meeting end, or else, there would have been an murder there," Adi said,

"Now I am hell scared, in two days, second and final hearing for the deal is up, and Rakesh is refusing to speak and if that deal gets out of the hand, god knows what Maan sir will do to himself, I am hell scared, god save him, you take care of him and please don't leave him alone, ok" Adi said looking at Geet and Geet nodded up, Adi didn't miss the care and concern in Geet's eyes for Maan, and went away,

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Night as Nakul and Rahul went away, Geet came up and saw Maan still sleeping, Geet remembered the Doctors words and touched his head, and it was turning cold, Geet thought for a second and went out and bought some hot oil and went and sat near his foot and slowly touched his feet and looked for his reaction, but there was no moment and so she kept his leg on her lap and started to message it with oil trying to heat his body up, she was massaging well as she looked at him,

"Yesterday you saved me and because of which everyone questioned you and you are like this" Geet thought remembering Adi's words and Maan's actions yesterday, and then kept his legs on an pillow and went and took his hands and started massaging, "if you had left me there, with him, now everything would have been fine" Geet thought looking at Sleeping Maan, "why did you come back, why" Geet thought as her eyes welled up, "when my father didn't care, when my husband didn't care, why did you care"

"When he can sell his our blood, when he can sell his own wife without any care, why did you come back for me, who are you to me, who" Geet asked as her tears flowed down, and suddenly she felt Maan's hand moving in her hold and he slowly grabbed her hand in his sleep, "now I am hell scared, and in two days, second and final hearing for the deal is up, and Rakesh is refusing to speak and if that deal gets out of hand, god know what Maan sir will do to himself," Adi's voice rang in her ear,

Geet looked at Maan, "No, I won't let you hurt yourself, you helped me and it's my turn to help you, my life is already a hell, anyways he is not the first man, if in some way I could bring an little peace in your life, I will, even if that means stepping back into that hell" Geet thought as she held his hands close to her face and looked at him, she wondered why she is didn't meet him before her marriage, why didn't he come to save her than, only if she had seen him before, her life would have been totally different and safe,

And she would have married him, Geet thought and the thought made her shocked, what is she thinking, Marrying him, is this what her heart thinks, she thought and got up and looked at him and went away from the room immediately,

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The next day started up and Maan only got up at around 10.30 and asked Nakul what happened and Nakul said everything, Maan then went and freshen up and he felt little weak, but he started getting ready to go to the office even after Nakul pleading him to take rest, Nakul then came to the kitchen and told Geet that Maan had got up and now getting ready to go to the office and so Geet rushed to see Maan, Maan was standing with his back to her as he was removing his shirt from Wardrobe,

Geet was getting herself ready to say her thoughts when Maan turned suddenly and hit on Geet and tripped up and fall on the bed, Geet was safely on Maan, Geet soft body was pressing Maan's hot hard frame and their breathe mixed up, Geet tried to get up and for support she kept her hand on Maan's chest and try to get up and Maan was looking at her closely, her clear face, she golden eyes, her trembling lips, he can also feel her soft self against his hard chest and it made him hot, Maan then held Geet's hand shocking her up,

Maan looked at her, forgetting himself and Geet didn't know what to think, Maan slowly pulled Geet close to him more, and for a second she thought he is gonna kiss her, but Maan suddenly turned around and pushed Geet away and stood up and Pulled Geet up in an quick action, "What are you doing here" Maan yelled and Geet signed that she came to talk to him and Maan asked what, Geet signed that she will go, Maan looked at her for a second closely, "you are leaving" Maan asked as his heart started to beat high and Geet nodded a no, "then" Maan asked and Geet repeated her sign,

"You are going" Maan asked shocked, and he started to get an tensed up, "you want to leave the house and go" Maan asked shiver up, and Geet nodded an no, "Then," Maan asked and Geet suddenly took the paper and pen form the table there, but she didn't know to form an sentence, she was just learning to write simple words, yet she decided to give a try and Maan looked at her puzzled, she wrote "I" and "Go" and showed to Maan, "You are going" Maan formed the sentence and Geet nodded and then wrote "Him", Maan saw it, "you are going Him, means, you are going to him" Maan joined up slowly and Geet nodded up an yes,

"wh,, whom" Maan asked slowly, Then she got the paper and wrote yesterday, "Yesterday" Maan said and frozen up for a moment, "no, it can't be right, she is saying something else and I am" Maan thought and looked at Geet who was looking at him with her innocent face and deep eyes, Maan first trembled up and after an long seconds he asked, "Ra, Ra, Rakesh" Maan asked fumbling up and Geet nodded an yes, shocking Maan to the core, "do you have any idea what you are saying" Maan yelled as his anger hit his brain,

And Geet nodded and cried up letting her tears roll down, Maan held her arms and pushed her up on to the wall and looked at her tear flowing face, "Why" Maan asked somehow angered by her decision and Geet don't know how to say, "Yesterday you were running from him, you were trembling and shattered and now, why" Maan yelled and Geet looked at him but don't know how to explain this, Maan then pulled away from her and took the paper and pen and gave to her, "write something, why, why" Maan asked tensed,

And she wrote only one word, "You" and gave the paper to Maan and went away and Maan looked at the Paper and stood frozen up, "Maan sir" Nakul came in with his coffee shaking Maan up and Maan thought for a second, "Did Adi come here and say something about what happened in the office" Maan asked and Nakul said an yes, "Adi" Maan growled and looked at the paper in his hand, "so she understood, and" Maan couldn't even think that and slowly went towards Geet's room where she was on the bed crying high, burring her face into the pillows,

Maan went in and touched her shoulders and Geet freaked out for a second and as she saw Maan, she got up and wiped her tears up, "you are this scared, even with my small touch, yet you are ready to go to him" Maan asked and Geet nodded an yes, "For me" Maan asked and Geet nodded an yes, "why" Maan asked looking at her but his voice didn't have the hardness or anger, but he looked for some answers, Geet then smiled and pointed to his face and smiled big, "my smile," Maan asked, and Geet touched her heart and smiled, "Happiness," Maan said and Geet nodded up an yes,

"For my happiness" Maan asked and Geet nodded an yes, "why, what will you get from my happiness," Maan asked almost his voice breaking down and Geet smiled and pointed herself and touched her heart and smiled up, "your happiness," Maan said, and Geet nodded up, "My Happiness, will bring you happiness" Maan asked and Geet nodded an yes, Maan suddenly held arm and pulled her close to him freaking her a bit and looked into her yes, which screamed an truth, he looked deep into her eyes, searching for something, and pushed her away and turned around,

"Look, You don't need to go to anyone for anything, understand, it's my deal, and I will handle it, I did an stupid mistake of taking you there, but will not do that again, you don't have to lose your pride and virtue for me," Maan yelled up and turned around and held her neck around in his right hand and pulled her close, "you are not going anywhere, clear, I will not bear even his breathe touching your skin, understood, not until I am alive" Maan said his true feelings as left her and went away,

Geet looked at him and she started to cry more, "Pride, Virtue, what is there in me to lose, you wants to safe guard something which I don't have Maan, it's too late, if only you had seen before my marriage, you could have save me, but now, there is nothing in me, nothing," Geet thought crying up holding her pillow,

Precap: Maan and Geet's Passionate dancing... An new start?