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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
congrats for new story
nice cs and prologue

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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Congrast for MIS2
Awesome cs and prologue..
Edited by -Sufi- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
congrats for "MY INNOCENT SURRENDER 2" richa😊eagerly waiting for its start...get well soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART - 1




Its only 7 pm,and whole clouds were darkned like a smoke. Today whole city was drenching under the shower falling from the sky. Roads were conjucted and cars chasing to reached first to their destinantion. It wasn't a rainy season so no one is prepared for this. Traffic jams make life more hell. In this whole a luxurious car came and joined a long que of cars,waiting for light to turn green.



Driver scanned the whole and asked for the permission. 'sir there is a long jam,would i took aother route?' his voice is dim but enough for the one who was sitting on a back seat.


While tapping his long fingers on the keys of his laptop,he granted a permission. 'hmm.' His dark choclate brown eyes were laid on the screen but he was fully concious about his surrondings.


Driver with his permission took another route to reached their destinantion because he knew his boss doesnt liked to reached late. He took the route which is quite lonely,so its easy for him to drive in a pace.


Nature also doing its work. No one can rule her. Suddenly car stooped in mid way. He tried his level best but seems it wasn't ready to start. Those pair of eyes who were earlier laid on the screen of Laptop now glaring from behind. Driver saw the view in front mirror and his throat dried with fear.


'i am sorry sir. Let me check what happened.' He apolozise fearly.


'no need to touch my car. Call the expert mechanic from the company.' He commands rudely. Veins of his forehead turn promenient due to his clenched jaws.


Driver paniced and quickly called the mechanic from the car company. He was frustrated and angry on weather. He loved to rule his surroundings but weather is uncontrollable which frustrate him to its peak.


Maan Singh Khurana is the another name of attitude. Or better say attitude itself has no value infront of him. No one in this whole world had a courage to mess with him. He was coming in the top list most rich bussinessman. Not only in India,his bussiness webbed on whole world and he was struck in mid way because of bad weather.


Suddenly one ball came and splashed against his mirror. It turn muddier and grew his anger which had no limit. His jaws clenched hard and he come out of his car.




Slight stubbled face, sharp nose, dark intense rage filled eyes,perfect sculptured lips and petite form. His appearance grabbed anyone's attention but here no one cares about him. He glance and found one girl,not less then an epitome of beauty,sculpturedd features fare complexion was madly playing with some kids.


Her white suit glued to her wet body and gave him a full view of her curvious body. She came and pick up the ball quickly. 'i am sorry.' She said in a swift moment and stirred like a top. Her long cascading hairs slapped his face and he forced to clenced his eyes for a sec. Her chimming voice echoing in his ears.



Maan's whole anger was flee away like a water. His intense gaze glued to her only. Almost for an hour he stood stand in rain just to stare her.


'sir car is ready.' Driver informed and broke his trance.


Maan turned and Driver opened the door for him. He went and about enter but stopped and slanted his neck back to catch her view one last time. But she was all vanished like a dream. He ran where she was playing but in a flip of moment they all were vanished.


He called to his secratory and told her to cancelled the meeting he was going for. Driver took him back to his mansion,which not less then a palace. Maan entered furiously towards his room. He threw his belongings here and there and went inside his washroom.


In whole route he was only think about that girl. Till date no girl can able to got his attention. His life only revolves around his bussiness. He love power. Power to rule. Power to control others. Girls, love, emotions are not meant for him.


It wasn't that he never got proposal from high profile families but no girl had a charm to woo Maan Singh Khurana. He was of 29 but never had a thought of desire. His only desire was to accuire power. More power then anyone had. But she lignite something which was buried deep inside him. She was not the only beautiful girl he had met but she had something which made him restless. Her every geture was fresh and clear in his mind.

WARNING: 18+

Maan was standing under his shower when her soft palm roamed over his toned body and hugged him from back side.



Sharm hata de jo shab gira le aankhon pe
Pyaas mita de.. wo nami chura le honton se
Main jalti raatein teri
Tu wo subah jo bujha de
Bheeg loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein
Bheegh loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein bheeg loon

Maan felt her warm body rubbed against him. Naked contact of both drive him crazy. Lust swarming in his blood. She step back leaving him but Maan catch her and pulled to him. Her wet hairs covering her beautiful face. Maan raised his hand and caressed with his tips. He puleld back all the hairs and encircled her sleek waist to crush in him. Her baby pink lips inviting him to taste.

Aa honton pe tu khwahish tu bun le
Baaki jo hasrat wo chun le
Bikhre hain jo katre mere[B]

Maan leaned over her face and bite them vivaciously. She moaned in esctasy and he deepend the kiss. She fists his broad shoulder. Her taut peaks stroking against his peaks,begging for his attention. Maan devour every ounce gradually. His tongue played with hers and he suck her saliva. He aroused and found her touch unbelievably erotic. He palmed her one bossom and squeezed harshly. Thumbing the taut peak before kneading them. Maan pulled her up and she quickly encircled her legs around his waist.

[B]Ho.. haan tan se tan uljhale zara
Phir se mann sulga le zara
Chakhne to de tukde tere
Main jalti raatein teri
Tu wo subah jo bujha de
Bheeg loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein
Bheegh loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein bheeg loon

He adjust her against him and elicting a loud moan from her at the depth of his penetration. He began to move inside her. He staring her hungrily. He come out to going even more deeper. Both kissed again and again.

Aa ye raatein lambi tu kar de
Chingari rag-rag mein bhar de
Sharmon se tu sharmo haya
Ho.. haan rakh le tu lab ko labon pe
Main guzru meri hadon se
Thehru kahaan kuch tu bata
Main jalti raatein teri
Tu wo subah jo bujha de
Bheeg loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein
Bheegh loon, bheeg loon
Aaj main teri baarish mein bheeg loon


After drying her he took her to his bedroom and made her laid on his luxurious bed. She rolled to other side,wrapping her in a sheet but Maan wasnt enough of her. Her naughty and gleaming eyes tempting him. Once again he removed the sheet to got her view. His lips taste every curve of hers. Covering her underneath him and kissed passionately all over from her face to cleavges. Nibbling the soft flesh on her neck he moved to suckle her bossoms.


Once again he filled her with him till he exhaust. When he done,she wrapped him in her arms. He rested his head on her soft chest and sleeped peacefully...




NOTE: HI guys, so here is first part of season 2. I hope you all enjoying it.😉 Please give your response. Coz if i wont get good response i will shift it to to Blog and only share with those who are intrested. So please let me know about your views.



And yes let me clear one more thing Maan is not a casanova...



Waiting for your replies...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
what a start with hot update but looks like dream of maan n its really passionate nice to hear he is not a casanova (ES casanova maan is enough 4 me) their first meeting n maan just fall hard first time he felt desire 4 anyone superb part thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Richa it's really very nice part. So maan is a arrogant businessman . first time he saw a girl who captivated his attention. She is totally drenched in rain and playing with kids. Last part was very hot. But I am confused. Who was that girl with maan. was he dreaming. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Sizzling Update

Maan is not interested in woman but when he sees her he cannot move
and when he get back home it seems he is having an erotic dream
about her

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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
wow.. its hawwt & passionate start...

Maan never attracted any girl.. but when he saw Geet.. name i think he still doesn't know.. made him mad by her one look.. i think its his erotic dream abt Geet..

waiting for next update😊 do cont. soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Awesome part richa di..
Maan only wants to acquire power nothing else..
First time a girl caught his attention..
Now he is dreaming about her in erotic way..
Edited by Preeti_Maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
WOWOOHOOO UPDATE ITSELF IS HOT ONE IM SOOO DEADDD 🤢
its haaawwttt & passionate 😳😳
aahhhaaa love at first sight 😆😆GEET made him mad by her one look 🤣 🤣 🤣... maan only wants to acquire power nothing else he is a arrogant businessman if a sy he is full of himself ...
but story mein Richu ka twist hai maan saw first time a girl who caught his attention ...
i think its his erotic dream about geet m i ri8 ??😕
MAAN CASONOVA NAHI HAI YE KIYA THA RICHU???🤣🤣 maan pe doubt kare use pehle tune baata deya ...
awww where is banner yaar tune add nahi kiya ? u don't like it kya nahiii😭
congrats for the 1st part👏 dear ...
Edited by brandgurti - 10 years ago

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