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pinku04

@pinku04

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#441

geet dev ko maan se baat karne ko keh rahi hai.. but he is scared...
but that call?? what was that??? 😕😕
and maan babu is still in his lala land of geet... 😳😳
oops!! do din me sari info... wo bhi uski jiska na naam hai na hi pata... bit he is MSK... kuch bhi kar ke dhoondh to lega hi...
dev ke cabin me female perfume... 😆😆
and plzzz dear do not close this fiction... plzzz
\update soon... will wait for next update...

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mauaa

@mauaa

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#442

Geet dev n maan r playing hide n seek..lol.. Vv nice update..

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Vidhi24

@Vidhi24

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Seriously I dont like dev and geet together, geet hamesha maan ke saath hi acchi lagti hai, well what is geet upto here, is she plotting against maan using dev, well its upto you to answer, anyways nice update...
Thanks

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ns.1

@ns.1

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#444

very nice update dear😊geet and dev together as a couple 😡ho hi nahi sakta and even if its true then maan will never let that happen 😛because he is so restless already just by seeing her once and is also dreaming erotically about her😳😉😛 geet wants dev to tell his brother about them but dev is really scared of his bro😊but who called geet and why did she say its not so easy, is she planning something against dev😕eagerly waiting to know and also to see maan and geet meet😃what will happen then 😉 maan and geet's hide and seek part was very interesting 😃 and i loved it...please update soon and richa please don't stop this story 😭 if you want then shift it to your blog but please don't stop it😭we love reading your work and I always like and comment on your updates,so why should your loyal readers suffer because of some...continue soon and shift it to your blog if you want..

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#445

hi richa

nice update

maan dreaming abt geet ..

geet dreaming abt dev but i am confused is geet cheating on dev ..

dev hell scared of maan ..

thank u for update

waiting for next

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xolfiya

@xolfiya

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#446

Kitne jhatke degi beta tu mjhy chal dev n geet is in relationship I have guessed it already but yeah kya tha geet kid se bt kr rhi ti itne secretly don't tell me she is using Dev for something... maan sahab ki tu band Baji hwe hai n Dev ye loser ka loser hi rhy ga *Darpok* :P thanks for the update Richu waiting for Maaneet meeting!!

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#447

awesome part dear...geet pressuring dev to talk about them to maan...dev don't like this fearless geet.. hihi...afterall he very well know his bro...maan is not in calm state.. only want to see geet ...eagerly waiting for their maaneet meet...continue soon dear...

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#448

Superb update , geet dev loved eachother.maan is totally mad for geet and also search for geet. Geet want to me devs bro.finly maaneet meet waiting for next part

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zornitsa

@zornitsa

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#449

Maan very arrogant...

Instantly.. Started lusting geet when see her in rain..

Dreams of her..

Dev scared of Maan...

Dev and geet are in love..

Geet urge Dev to speak about them.

Geet comes office..

Will maan meet geet as Dev's love..or just as end of his search...

More interesting.. If meet as Dev's love...what will arrogant MSK will do?...

Very different than ur first one season.which I finished reading

A story of friends being together.. And how they accidentally get married.. Maan how he broke her .. Geet realize her love for maan .. broken beyond repair... Even though...surrender to her love..armaan and riddima..part so supportive..making maan realizes what he lost... That was superb story...

This all parts in go..awesome...plz do cont...all ur stories are of different flavor of maaneet...