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Posted: 10 years ago
Ty

Originally posted by: mauaa

Wonder update...⭐️

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ty dear and wait to know ;)

Originally posted by: zaara2212

Congrats on the new story...
is maan dreaming or 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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waiting for next
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wow congrats for new story
maans entry was supperb
m confused in last part who is with him its his dream or reality waiting for next part to clear picturr once again supperb part
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART - 2


SUN dawn but even its beam wont allowed to disturb the silent sleep of a man who ruling a world from his toe nail. His left arm raised and roamed on his luxurious bed. Those toxic eyes opened with a jerk,like he was searching for something. He was slept in trance and naked body was covered with a black satin sheet only. His jaw clenched hard andbrows knotted in anger. The girl he saw last night was missing and he want to saw her only. He inhaled sharp in frustration and come to from his bed. Truth of reality rosed his anger early morning.


Opening the knob he allowed water cool down his acrid head. But her thoughts not ready to leaving him. Again she was with him like last night,drenching with him and her wet form tempting him to arouse. He slapped a hand on each side of the counter,pinning her. Her lucious lips inviting him and he took them and nibbling to feed his hunger.


The moment with her was so soothing that he forgot wverything else but till he opened his eyes. Again he was all alone and she was vanished.


Maan get ready and came down for breakfast. Everything was in perfect order but he wont glance for once and just waved out. Someone was trying to catch him but he late. Maan already left his palace like mansion.


Trail of cars stopped in front of never ending building. Shuffer come out quickly to open car door for him. He step out and his guards come to cover him. He walked like wild wind who destroyed each and everything coming in his way. His eyes radiating heat of anger due to which no one can able to made an eye contact with.


He signaled and his guards left after opening his cabin door for him. As he entered his PA came inside to remind the schedule. She was shivering like a dry leaf. No one knows when his bad temper destroyed whom.


Suddenly one middle aged man in a three piece suit, entered in his cabin and though without his permission. Maan's eyes spitting fire seeing that man. 'how dare you?' he gritted his teeth.


He rushed to him and bend on his knees infront of him. 'Please Mr. Khurana,show some pitty on me. I will beg you.' He hold his leg and begged. But nothing effecting him. He was stand like a statue.


'please Mr. Khurana dont do this. Just show some mercy on my family. Main to road pe aa jaunga.' he was begging continously and a wicked smile came on his perfect sculptured lips.




'Ye tume mere against jane se pehle sochna chahiye the. What do you think that i will never got about your betrayal.' he was like concerete,fixed and immobile. No sign of forgiveness. 'and you. I think you dont need job any more.' he galed his PA and threatened her.


She got and quickly called the security incharge. He was begging when three men came inside. The clenched him and dragging along them. Same time one tall boy with well shaped form,having a sharp features entered inside. He saw the view and his killing smile which he used as his weapon to charm any girl come in his contact,vanished quickly. He was none other then but a young heir of Khurana's. Maan's younger sibbling,Dev Singh Khurana.



'next time if this happen again then i dont need to explain the consequences.' Maan addressed to her PA and signaled her to leave.


She gulped her saliva and moved out with pace steps. Dev staring him in confusion. 'bro what happened? Mr. Saxena k sath aisa suluk. I mean our company dealing with him from a long time.' Dev asked in a low voice.


Maan smirked as nothing had happened. 'we dont need his services any more Dev,so just forgot it.'


'bro sometimes you scared me alot. Bro dont you think you are so rude to everyone. Aise to koi aise aapke nazdeek aayega?' Dev's heart pounding with unknown fear and tension.


Maan ent near him and placed his arm on his shoulder. He took him to window. 'ye height dekh rahe ho Dev? Everyone wants to reach there but they dont have which i hold. Maan Singh Khurana ko ye height pasand hai no matter at what cost. I want ppl carry my fear so one can courage to came infront of me. And about you. You are very lucky Dev,because you are born as my sibbling. So you dont need to scare of me. I will do anything for you.' Maan said roughly,but in last he gave a smile which was for Dev.


He cares for him but Dev 's heart and mind alerts him. 'i think this not the right time. I have to wait.' he said to himself.


'where are you?' Maan asked seeing him lost. Dev changed his face expression quickly and smiled back towards his brother. 'by the way what you want?' Maan asked sitting on his chair.


'nothing bro.' he replied.



'then why so early in office. Your day start at 12 right? Or today your all girlfriends are busy somewhere else?' his said sarcastically.


'bro...,i leave all this.' Dev defends.


Maan glance up before bowering in his files. 'really and exactly when it happened? Two mins ago?' Maan taunts him again.


'no bro. Bro...' he wants to clearify but same moment his phone rang which only gifted him a threatening glare from his elder brother. 'i am sorry bro.' he apolozised and quickly left his cabin.


He went to some peaceful corner where he answered the call. But its too late. Call ended and whe he tried to call back the other person cut his call.


'aaj ka dinn hi kharab hai.' he remarked and left the office in hurry.


Enchanting music of temple bells. All devotees came and pray. In between the mob a beautiful girl,having perfect curves, sharp features,glowing smooth skin, fair complexison,long cascading hairs till back,peeping through her scarf as she covered her head for prayer,stand closing her eyes with joined hands. Priest singing aarti and all indulge in it.


Dev's lavish car stopped in front of temple. He quickly removed his shoes and cout the steps in full speed. He just manage to reach and stand next to that girl. She opened her one eye to glance him. Dev too joined hand and pass a smile to her but she twitched her lips and turned her face to another side. Both closed there eyes again.


After aarti,temple's priest came to give aarti to all. When her turn came,she took and gave Dev to as he was not use to it. Priest moved to others and she left quickly. Dev followed her but she was angry with clearly reflecting through her gestures.


He too run pacefully after and sucessdedd catching her. He grasped his arm and pulled to him. 'stop it Geet please. Let me explain at least.' He apolozise to her and seeking for forgiveness,but she aint in a mood.



NOTE: GUYS I NEED COMPLETE 200+ LIKES.


I know so many doubts are banging your head. But i cant explain anything right now.


Only one thing which i thought was much needed is that Maan is not casanova. He doesnt have any kind of relation to any woman.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
maan still dreaming about the girl...
what's dev and geet relation . r they are gf - bf???
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was all his dream
Wow what vivid dream
Or was it
Maybe she was there
But she left
Its possible
Till we know .more we can only guess right
Hmmm so maan likes it where he is
Doesn't want others to reach him
Dev what is he hiding from his bro
Geet is his girlfriend
Or is she just his friend
She is mad at him
Like dev said
His day is bad
This was fun but of course so many questions remain
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Posted: 10 years ago
r geet n dev related??
so it was all maan's dream
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Posted: 10 years ago
NICE ud
maan was seeing geet every where

and his bro dev also

interesting

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