MG~ SS ~The Bliss - UPDATED Pt 8 / Pg 130 / 24nd Mar.................. - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago


The Bliss


The simple things of life can be blissful, if you can take the time to enjoy it. There is love in the air, everywhere... you just need to feel it, embrace and enjoy all that life has to offer.

Every moment that is enjoyed, treasured and relished is a store house of memories, that you can draw out, enjoy and smile with love. It is bliss..


Oh sweet bliss how did you find me in the dark with all my troubles

collecting like copper pennies in a fountain,
under pain concrete form,
a flower breaks
through the crack of my once solid shell.

Stay with me bliss ,
never leave me again,
for my need is great and my patience is plentiful.
Oh lessons I need not learn again,
forget where I have been.

Let me walk in the sweet embrace of a Sunday's morn
and not forget it tender kiss of compassion
for God had granted me another day with you.
Hold me in the arms of your unfolding grace
and we will put back all the fallen stars in the sky...


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Note..

This a fiction , all incident , medical terms , professional terms nd places r imaginary ,, plzz don't relate them with reality .


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.









Part - 1


She was sitting in d plane watching out from d window ,, d plane was above d clouds ,, there wr only stars in that dark open sky in front of her window,, in her childhood she read in her fairy tales that there is a world beyond d clouds which was very beautiful nd there was a diff world of stars , fairies nd angels ,, after living d human body ppl become stars but now she had crossed all d clouds nd there wr only stars then which was her mom , a weak smile crept on her lips nd she mumbled ,, everything is an illusion .

She shut d window, closed her eyes ,, her plane was going to land after an hr at Chennai airport ,, her destination was C**&H Vellore.

In d same city it was a very big cottage lil away from C**&H ,, a person was laying on bed nd his attendant was trying to fed him but he was not opening his mouth ,, turned his face at other side nd was looking blankly on d wall ,, all d family members wr standing there nd looking at him helplessly with teary eyes.

Dadima: Maan beta plzz kuch kha lo , humre liye ,, apni dadima ki baat to mann lo beta .

Yash: Maan Drs fir se drip laga denge , wo theek nahi hei ,, plz have food

Ruchi: Maan , beta ku tum khudh ko bhi aur hume bhi takleef dete ho ,, tum jantey ho tumhe esse dekh ker hum sabko kitni takleef hoti hei ,,tum nahi khaoge to koi kuch nahi khayega ,,pllz thoda sa kha lo .

Maan: nahi dekh saktey to mar jaane do na mujhe ,, nahi chahiye mujhe ye life ,, ye koi jeena nahi hei ,, aap sab ku meri takleef ko aur badha rahe ho , mujhe nahi chahiye ye saanse ,, I want to die ,, plzzz.

Yash: chup ... Bilkul chup ,,, kitni baar mana kiya hei tumhe ye sab sochne se ,, tum humare samne ho yahi kaffi hei humare liye ,, at least hum tumhe daily dekh to rahe hei .

Ruchi started crying hiding her face in yash's chest ,, Dadima too started shedding tears .

Dadima: maan tumhe humara bilkul khayal nahi ki tukhari in baton se hume kitna dukh hota hei ,,essa ku kahaty ho?

Maan: to aap hi kaho mei kya kahu , ki mai bahot khush hu ess life se ,, mjha aa raha hei esse jeene mei ,, aap sab bahot khush hei mujhe esse dekh ker,, boliye kya ye sab sach hei ?

Yash: beta kismat ko hum badal nahi sakte ,, jo diya hei wo sahana hei ,, koi bhi maa-baap apne baccho ko ye nahi kaha sakte ki tum ... tum jaise bhi ho mere bete ho aur tumhari har saans ki hifazat karna mera ferz hei .

Maan: aur mera ferz ,,, mai kya de raha hun aap sabko ? Kuch nahi ,, bas dukh , takleef aur aansu ,, nahi hota mujhse ye bardast.

Dadima: maan plzz essa mat kaho , insaan ko umeed kabhi nahi chodni chahiye beta ,, waqt ko badalte der nahi lagti ,, bhagwaan ne tunhe saanse di hei to age bhi sab kuch ussi per chod do .

Maan gave a mock smile : Dadima app peechle 2 saalon se yahi kaha rahi ho , kuch nahi badla aur kuch nahi badlega ,, jaiye aap sab yahan se mujhe ye jhooti umeede matt do ,, live me alone , don't come here nd try to live without me ,, I don't want to talk nd don't want to see anybody ,, go ,, plzz.

Helplessly all came out with wet eyes,, Yash called to Maan's Dr nd told him everything ,, after half an hr a Dr came there ,, talked to Yash nd came in Maan's room ,, started d drip nd instructed d attendant ,, he talked to Maan but he didn't reply him ,, he gave him an injection nd came out disappointed .

Dr: now what happened Mr Khurana?

Yash: as usual , his same demand ,, let him die ,, he don't want this burden life ,, he don't understand how cd I do that ,, he is my son nd i'll fight for his life till my last breath .

Dr: I can understand Mr Khurana but he is d sufferer nd depressed ,, he lost all his will power .

Yash: I don't know anything but I can't leave him to die .

Dr: u r right at ur place nd we all r praying nd trying our best ,, all reports r normal but don't know why d medicines r not responding ,, he is getting d best treatment ,, d team of doctors from abroad checked all d reports , they find nothing nd recommended d same treatment ,, now everything is in God's hand ,, we r doing our work nd can pray for his blessings ,, we r doctors not God Mr Khurana nd we never give 100% assurance to anybody nd leave 1% on God bcoz it is he above all , so plzz pray to him .

Dr left from there ,, he was a well known (neuro) Dr nd treating him from start nd now became d family Dr ,, he visited twice a week to check Maan nd in emergency like this when Maan became rigid nd depress.

It was d first day for Geet in d college ,, she settled in her hostel room ,, came to her HOD's office nd gave her intro nd documents to him ,, he checked all nd gave all d instructions ,, she met him before at d time of her admission but that time there wr many scholar from all over India for counselling .

Dr James : Dr Geet , congratulations nd u r welcome in this insti. Ur prof is Dr Dev Mahajan ,, he'll guide u in ur research work ,, there wr few more scholars with u who r Sr to u ,, hope u'll co-operate with them ,, u all'll work in same lab so co-operation is must ,, rest Dr Dev'll explain u ,, aamm one more thing Dr Geet , if u want u cn join hptl as part time ,, all d very best .

Geet: thanku very much sir ,, i'll think ,, Good Day sir.

Dr James called his peon nd sent him with Geet to Dr Dev's lab/office .


Precap---- Geet's 1st day in med college/lab ...


Part - 2

sorry for mistakes ...


Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hello babie. main aagayi hoon
singh24 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago



😊 Updated...

Pg,,, 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice start Babie.. and I hope that it is having some different concept from your other fFs..
maan here is bed ridden and depressed and Geet is doctor..
So are we going to get a love story of a doctor and patient?
M very excited to read it

.ye kahne ki zaroorat to nahin ki update soon tum pahle hi soon update de deti ho😆😆
Edited by Rashmi... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
my first story of yours..
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional start and I love the portrayal of characters di
maan is bed ridden and doesn't want to live
well I can understand , he has lost his will power to live

geet is a doc
great
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
very painful update for 2 years maan is in bed he is very depress he feels he is a burden to his family n just want to die feel bad 4 him n his family they r happy atleast their son is alive lovely start thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
100th like to ur prologue is mine



😉 😆


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Posted: 10 years ago
quite interesting and intriguing part

waiting for more

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