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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#191

maan geet k samne kuch nehi kar sakta...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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flowing_river

@flowing_river

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#192

he loved the angry bird but not the raining queen

This is the best line for me to describe his changing feelings

same for geet..maan has made her feel some new emotions which she left behind in past...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#193

hi thanks 4 da pm n brilliant update! well written! Maan falling hard n fast! his inner turmoil well portrayed! she does well! Maan js admires her! Dev impressed n so is Maan! bt Maan decides 2 b subtle bt dev spoils it! Geet annoyed! update soon

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Fabulous Update

Maan trying his best to ignore Geet but seems when she stood on stage to present her solution about the project Maan could not keep his eyes off her and he too appreciated the fact that her plan of the building was good but how could he appreciate her so he does what is best by telling her not to interfere with others work and that really made Geet angry but when she was talking to Maan tears just spilled out she could not understand why the tears and Maan did not like seeing her sad

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Awww this was awesome

Loved the updt

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#196

superb update maan is very rude she was helping him but how can egoist man bow down infront of her how much he tried geet is affecting him unknow to geet maan also affecting her page loved the part thnx 4 update

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Fabulous update.. Maan's ego didn't permit him to appreciate Geet's work..But when she reacted, he couldn't see her tears..Both are getting affected..Loved it..