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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
wowww..
was soo happy to see ur pm.. i hurriedly opned the msg.
with it name. i was like bring it on man. all set to read another dhinchaaakkk story from u.
super excited.
will be reading it.
dn my cmnt.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
wow u are writing after long time...
i absolutely love your works..
nice part..
please continue soon!!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
finally read the updte...
hayeee i can alwzz say tht i jst luv ur work n way u write n portray evrythg.
u know na i love for this.

ishh!!!!!! i jst read evry dlgs 3 times.. my habbit in ur work.
its like i imagine them, ervythg revolve infront of my eyes.

hmm both engaged. maan g attitude vaale, bt now geet wanna show, tht she is too no less.
maan fully flattered in 1st meeting itself, now geet showing attitude. hmm cool.
bring it on yr.
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Woww awesome ss
Loved it
Maan full of attitude


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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
omg like it update soon seems like a new story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
oh i have read it long back and i was dissapointed to see it's incomplete
thanks for thinking to continue this story
loved it
geet parents and maan parents decided to marry them but never talked with geet even she tired to talk with him he didn't even see her pic he thought she might be some spoilt birt..but geet proved him wrong ..he was shocked to see her beauty and her intellegance
geet wanted to call off her engagement but maan decided to go with the engagement for that he gonna win her
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Looks like a fun ride.
I am on-board.
Bring it on! 😉
Edited by srikrithi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Interesting Teaser waiting for update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99

msk / f eisty geet
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Posted: 10 years ago



Chapter 2




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Annie aunt laughed out loudly hearing Maan's confrontation with Geet. Her cheeks grew more pink and the soft wrinkles around her eyes gave a cute look even in the age of 50. She must have received many proposals in her time.

Finally my nephew met his match. She is perfect.

How can you say that? You haven't met her.

Something can be felt my dear. You are going to be putty in her hands.

Ahaan.. MSK is too hard to tame.

But she will tame this hard rock. My dear child.. Your playboy days are coming to an end. By the way did u say sorry?

MSK never apologizes.

Annie narrowed her eyes at his only nephew. He was the most arrogant and lovely person she has ever met. But the cunningness around the rich lifestyle made him suspect everyone. Geet is a lovely girl. She lied a little when she dint correct his assumption. Annie has met her at the engagement party. She oozed out elegance, charm and beauty. But her witty nature made them bound a little. Annie noticed her wandering sad eyes when she looked for Maan. She felt helpless and for the first time she was angry towards him. But when confronted he politely ignored. For once she is going to enjoy the dose of medicine her nephew is going to get.

So what are you going to do?

Going to use my charm oldie. You just wait and watch.



Geet felt her anger rising when she remembered their meeting. How dare he assume she was going to fall for him. She did a mistake in the past, but its not going to repeat. But her body was telling another tale. Whenever he looks at with those sinful eyes, her traitorous heart starts beating wildly. His not so subtle touches and caresses roused goose bumps all over her body. But what she dint understand was the sudden change in him. He never tried to contact her in the past, but now he wants her. Did he think her as a challenge when she rejected! Whatever!! she is not going to fall for him again!

Geetu.. You have a surprise visitor

Who is it mama?

Nope. You have to come and find.

She dragged her 5ft 4 inches body from the bed and followed Mom. When she descended the stairs the familiar voice made her heartbeat faster. What is Maan doing here??

Maan looked around the Handa palace for the first time. The living room wall is a mixture of black and white combination with modern outlook. The subtle lightings given created a lively ambiance. The pergola ceiling at the centre made the sun rays fall directly like waves. Some Famous paintings adorned the walls. Whoever has done the interior deserves a standing oviation.


Maan instantly realized the instant Geet entered the room. He enjoyed the shock look in her face. His gaze instantly ran over her body, making Geet tingle. She was wearing a sleeveless white top paired with trousers that reached above knees. Trying hard not to feel conscious about her look, she gave a tight smile.

Good evening Geet

Good evening..

Ritu.. let them have a chit chat. We will arrange for geet's bag to be packed.

Packing? For what..

Maan will tell the whole thing. I think his suggestion is best for you to spend some time together.

Geet watched as her parents walked away before she bursted out her anger on Maan.

What the hell is happening?

Oh oh!! So much anger is not good for health cara..

Suddenly she was not able to breathe as he entered her personal space. His finger traced her bare making her gulp the saliva.

You look sexy sweetheart.

She snapped his hand and stepped back to bring her breathing back to normal.

Don't try to outsmart me Mr. Khurrana. What the hell was dad talking about?

Hmm.. let me think.. I may have suggested him to move us together to an apartment.

You did what?

Calm down baby. He said it was a wonderful idea to spend some time together before our marriage. He trusts you a lot.

I know that. But I don't trust you, and I am never going to agree for this arrangement.

And I will make sure you won't say No..

Seething frustration filled Geet. She wanted to kick him, punch him for his arrogance. But then a tiny part of her was excited. And she felt ashamed of it. No, the excitement was because she is going to teach him a lesson for messing with her.

Maan noted the expression that crossed her face. First it held frustration, then she looked embarrassed, but now there was a pure evil look. She may be planning how to murder him. He took small steps towards her making her startled.

What... are.. u.. doing..

Her voice came like a whisper and he smiled at the effect he had. She kept walking backwards until he cornered her to wall. His breath was fanning her face and she moistened her lip unconsciously. Maan's eyes followed the movement making his desired heighten.

Stay with me, otherwise I m gonna kiss you till agree.

I.. No..

A long brown finger skimmed long the quivering line of her milky white throat, pausing to caress the tiny pulse flickering above her collarbone.

If you are saying No to get me to kiss you, then I won't mind..

He eyed her lips and then her eyes. With so much effort she stepped back and glared.

Okay.. I will agree. But beware Mr. Khurrana, your so called plan will backfire. I promise.

And I promise I am going to win your love before the arrangement is over.



For the first time, Geet was feeling nervous. She was able to pass each phase of her life with cool attitude. But this drive to Maan's apartment is making her anxious. Some instinct is saying that this will change her life forever. The thing is after the challenge; nothing is going according to her plan. She has to get the rein back. Maan should realize that he is wrong in his doings. Oh God! Pls help!

Welcome home cara..

Thanku Mr. Khurrana.

Ahaan Geet.. Can we leave the formalities.. After all I am your fianc..

Soon to be ex-fiance

She told sarcastically making him raise his brows.

Seems like my charm is not working. Anyways, I will show you around.

The apartment was sleek and contemporary in style with an elegant living room. She was surprised to see modern art paintings as he dint strike as an art type guy. Kitchen was well equipped and it seemed that this part of the room is not used much. As if reading her thoughts, Maan answered.

Mostly I dine outside or order them. Now we can change that system.

She ignored him and walked towards the bedroom. Strong arms clasped around her elbow making her crash against his chest.

What are..

Shhh.. before you enter that room, I want to say that this is a single bed apartment.

What?

Yup. That means you are going to share my room and bed.

Oh hello!! That's not going to happen. I will use the sofa.

Nope cara. We will share the room, not body. Oh yea!! If you are interested, then..

He drawled making her fume with anger.

Listen Mr. Khurrana. We are not doing such thing even in your dreams.

Don't bother my dreams cara. We are on baby making step there and I know you wont enjoy the sordid details.

You are disgusting and shameless. I am leaving..

NaNa.. Not so easily to be Mrs. Khurrana. Oh!! Now I understand. You don't trust yourself to keep your hands off, right? Don't worry cara. I have enough self control for both of us.

Oh please. I won't touch you even if you are the last person on the earth.

Oh yea? If that's the case, then share my room.




Note: Thanku so much for liking and commenting. Am so happy to see regular readers and new ones. Please continue the support. Also my updates will be once in a week as i wont get much tym after my job. So u have one week to read. So our motto is Like comment and Get another update!!!😉




Edited by Remya_Pillai - 10 years ago

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