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Posted: 10 years ago

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thand mei bahar nahi jana chahiye,, back pain ho gai,, chilled weather hei..


meri bhi..

ofc mein kaam karne ka mann hi nahi ho raha hai.

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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 98


Part - 99


The truth is that , it hurts bcoz it's real . It hurts bcoz it mattered . And that's an important thing to acknowledge to yourself.

It was a very complicated situation for all ,, all wr ashamed at their places hurting Geet,, though Yash nd Rashi had tried to give her all care but at many places they wr bounded coz of DM nd Maan's behaviour ,, she bore this much humiliation nd they wr unaware from all this ,, she quietly left this house broken , insulted nd hiding her pain in her heart ,, she didn't find anybody to share her grief ,, yash heart was crying for Geet ,, he was blaming himself for this condition of Geet ,, he brought her here to give het protection , love nd good future but his own son had destroyed her life nd he didn't know ,, he was failed in his responsibilities .

Rashi too was sitting near him with wet eyes nd ashamed ,, she disappointed Yash ,, to maintaing peace nd happiness in d family she helplessly compromised at many places but she never thought that Maan cd do that in his anger ,, she was shocked that he himself didn't know that what he had done ? They wr at fault who didn't ask from Geet that time ,, she remained quiet when DM nd Maan wr blaming her for insulting his friends nd threatened yash ,, Geet didn't open her mouth bcoz she had lost all her trust in them nd decided to leave this house for ever ,, she did all that only for Yash nn her ,, she didn't want to hurt them .

Rashi looked at Yash who was lost in thoughts ,, she was fearing for him ,, this shock nd tension was not good for him ,, it cd put his life in danger again ,, she gather her courage nd spoke .

Rashi: Yash , I m sorry ,, I was failed ,, u cn blame me but don't hurt urself ,, plzzz,, it's not good for u ,, now we have to think about Geet nd manu .

Yash: not we ,, only me ,, why I forgot that I brought her here nd she was only my responsibility ,, it was all my fault ,, I m failed to protect her ,, now I won't trust anyone .

Rashi: Yash , I m sorry ,, i'll do whatever u said .

Yash: Rashi u r saying this now after knowing ur son's misdeed ,, before that u wr blaming Maan for liking Geet , but like Geet I m also saying that now u r saying this coz of guilt .

Rashi: Yash , didn't u feel bad when Maan mention that he likes Geet ?

Yash: no ,, nothing wrong in that if a man cn move on with a child then why not a girl ,, what was her fault if someone cheated her? Geet nd Manu deserve happiness ,,, Rashi agar sach ko bina jane tumhe maan ka Geet ke bare mei sochna galat laga to ab bhi lagana chahiye ,, aur maan ko bhi mai yahi kahunga ki apni guilt ke impression mei Geet ke bare mei na soche .

Rashi : lekin ab sab kuch jan ker hum usse akele kaise chod de ..?

Yash roughly : jaise pahale choda tha .

Rashi: Yash ,, mai manti hu hum sab galat thy , lekin ...

Yash: to galti ki saza bhi saho,, aur koshish karo ki Geet hum sab per trust kare ,, uske baad hi wo hume apna samjhegi , aur trust kern eke liye hum usse force nahi ker sakty .

Rashi: lekin ...

Yash: bas,,, wo humare liye chup rahi aur hum uske liye rahenge,, koi usse Majboor nahi kerega .

There Maan was muddling with his mind nd heart ,, he clearly accepted that he wanted his life with Geet , there was no 2nd thought but Q was how Geet wd trust him nd his family ,, she took their all care as sympathy coz of his guilt for hurting her.

How I make her understand that I want to be with them bcoz they r mine nd I love them ... Love manu nd Geet .

These words hit Maan nd he started arguing with himself ... Maan u love Manu 1st as he was a sweet kid , then related to Geet nd now u got he was urs ,, it was quiet natural to love own child , but what about Geet ... Geet , with whom u didn't share any good rapport nd empathy ,, only hurt her nd she still maintaining a distance ,, but u,, u realized nd felt warmth near Geet ,, her closeness affected u , even many times she made ur sleep butful enduring in ur dreams nd u enjoyed that closeness ,, which word u use for these feelings ? R u not attracting towards Geet ,, this is not liking but something more then that,, u know one more thing Maan that it's very hard to get Geet's trust .


Trust ... takes seconds to break , years to build nd forever to repair .


Maan understood that in this struggle he was alone nd his dad won't support him ,, even he threatened all to keep quiet ,, he had a very less time in his hand coz Geet's departure time is coming close , then what wd he do ?

His Dad had cleared him to bring her back in Khurana Family after gaining her trust nd love , even he ordered all not to open at Geet that they knew d truth ,, he was again on hanging condition ,, Maan was turning nd tossing in his bed restlessly thinking how to pave a path with love nd trust to walk with Geet .

It was not easy to express his feeling in front of Geet coz he very well knew d result nd that was shock nd incredulity followed by repudiation but d question was what after that ? He had to think after that ,, he cdn't force her nd not even manipulate her taking Dad - mom's name coz if his Dad got that he was doing something like this he cd get more angry ,, Maan sat back in his bed frustrated , combed back his hair leaving a deep painful sigh nd mumbled ... Maan ur one side is clear now , d truth has opened at ur family nd u has said clearly that u cn't live without Geet nd manu , now ur mission is winning Geet's trust nd love ,, think like MSK Maan ,, u cn't sit back defeated Man .


Precap ----- Mission Geet ...


Part - 100
Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
will u not update today plss rply then i will sleep ... plss rply
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsemm update yash stopping all maan thinking how to win geet
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Hello my dear friends

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Maan going to make geet trust on them
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome... hope maan will get success in his mission of getting back Geet & Manu in his life
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Posted: 10 years ago
VERY NICE N EMOTIONAL
YASH NOT ACCEPTED SORRY FROM ALL
HE SAID THAT HE IS ONLY WITH GEET ALSO ASK STAY AWAY FROM GEET
MAAN IS ON MISSION GEET

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