Distorted Lives..... FOUW...Link to Thread 2 Updtd - Page 58

Originally posted by: swapna.p

read in a go
its amazing ...

thanks dear she is my friend ha 😃

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Wonderful update.

aditii she is with me from my first story

Originally posted by: aparna3011

brilliant update

chan watali na story ,mast lihate follow kar hila aditi ye meri city dost hai 😆

Originally posted by: tabby999

marking to read soon

yes mark it u would going to enjoy

part 11 - beautiful part & beautifully written, as usual, aditi. loved the way you emoted the feelings of each relationship. loved man to man talk. maan still worried about sam. all were so entangled with each other. brij still felt bad to let go nt. he is right he could have found some middle way to make all of them happy so that his life would have been better. liked sam here. brij was right that she let him go easily. liked their talk. sam accepted that whatever dev did with was far more worse than what she had gone thru'. seems brij & sam will find solace in each other's company, hopefully. geet was guilty in judging sam. she thought sam also like dev. but she was happy that she found a friend in sam as both were hurt and suffered a lot.

part 8-11

u have showed everyone pain maan geet Sam brij everyone done their own set of mistakes ,but I don't compare GEET with meer,what GEET and MAAN did was wrong but sure enough GEET cannot b meer but what dev and meer did was disgusting

Originally posted by: meravigiliso

Aditi,this is the finest piece nd brilliant work in maaneet forum .Every tym i read the update ,i want to understand the complexities of relationship. As we say every dark tunnel had ray of light at the end ,the morning after stormy night had brought a little sunshine in hearts of sam ,geet nd even brij too . Everybody had given a thought why this had happd ?

I loved maan's concern for sam nd brij assurance to maan. Sam had taken out her pain by crying hope now her heart will show the right path . Geet thoughts r so real na,we always think "mere saath hi aisa kyon hua ,unke saath aisa kyon nahi hua " .normal human tendency . But she is ashamed since she can feel that pain what sam,is undergoing . Loved her thoughts on maan .

Aditi ,my most favourite story ,u r showing the mirror of human emotions . Ur writing is so mature nd deeply concocted ,it makes the readers to think on these lines .congrats to u

Thanks a lot dear!!😊😊I am so happy with the lovely compliments especially since I have no personal experience with being married or anything. I just write what I feel is right. relationships are always complex and I am glad you are enjoying this.