MG SS:Salaam e Ishq#2 *|| Part 57 @ Page 141 ||* 27-Sep-2020 - Page 88

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Awesome update

Yeh maan Aya lakin latev

Here Geet promise to marry

Ohh no yeh Kiya hogya

Maan babu you are in trouble big wala

Hello Everyone,

Ramzaan Mubarak to all my fellow muslims here.

My office has resumed and final exams are starting from sunday ..i will probably be inactive for next 2 weeks.

Also i saw a post for immigrating the fanfiction to fanfiction forum.. do anyone have any idea about how to do this i am short of time to search and don't want to loose the story and threads

enjoy reading

luv ya

sobia

MG FF Salaam e Ishq

PART 53

a familiar touch held her in her embrace and she cried in the known warmth of the person’s hold, she literally let go off all her pain in those tears holding on to the person like her dear life and he too held her ... placing a hand on her head caressing her trying to calm her somehow just wanting her to stop crying …

Sab theek hujayega geet.. tum akeli nahi ho ..mien hoon tumhaare saath ..

That voice … those words.. the realization in that moment shook her and she parted pushing him away from her …

And that’s when they came face to face after good 20 hours he saw her pale, disheveled, her face marked with tear stains and worry, those eyes god there was so much pain it tore his heart in pieces but he saw that hurt changing into anger in matter of second right in front of his own eyes …he stood at lose of words seeing her expression change from that of guilt to fury …from pain to anger..

Geet …I just ..

Don’t …I don’t want to talk to you ..jaiye yahan se …

I am …//

But she walked away from him to stand in the most abandoned corner of the corridor by the window…he stood there perplexed for a second than thought may be she is still angry at last nights’ event, seeing her angrily wiping away her tears he walked towards her determined not to leave her alone …

Geet I know tum .. tum mujh se ghussa ho I understand but mien aise tumhain akele nahi choronga …

Geet turned towards him with a glare that drilled his soul ..making him step back a step ..

Kyun aur kis haq seyeh keh rahe hain aap …lagte kya hain aap mere ..mene aapko yahan rokne ka haq nahi diya Mr. Khurana ..so just LEAVE …aur aapse ghussa nahi hoon mien …aap se related har emotion apne ghar k back side ki us hi street p chor aayi mien kal raat jahan aapko chor kar gayi thi …koi farq nahi parta mujhe you get that … aur ghussa ... ghussa mien apne aap se hoon …

Nafrat hurahi hai mujhe apne aap se soch soch kar k meri waja se yeh sab hua .. mene apni selfishness mien apne mamaji ko iss haal mien puhanha diya .. 5 saal .. 5 saalun sayee ( Shadows) ke peeche bhaagi mien jinka koi wajood nahi tha .. aur aaj dekhiye jin rishtoon se mera wajood hai woh hi mujhse door hurahe hain …

Aur aapko dekh dekh kar meri nafrat barhti jaa rahi hai ..so just leave me alone ..

Maan stood rooted seeing the hatred she had in her words, for the first time ever he heard so much of bitterness in her ..and he wondered did she really meant all that she said …a tear drop fell from her eye making him wince in pain ..he raised a hand to wipe it off but she stopped that in mid air wiping it off roughly …angry at those traitor to have being shown in front of the one person whom she never wanted to cry in front of …

Kaha na mene yeh haq nahi hai aapko… koi farq nahi parna chahiye aapko mere ansoon se …

Maan stood there trying to keep his composure …trying to tell himself .. his heart that its ok ..she is just worried.. and scared of loosing her father figure … she doesn’t mean all she said …

Farq tu parta hai geet.. farq tu parta hai ..

Geet looked straigh tin his eyes with a steel resolve in hers’…

KYUN …

Maan gasped …for a second she thought he is about to answer her question but nothing yet again he failed to give words ..his eyes screamed his inner turmoil but his lips remained silent as if the ability to speak was snatched from his …he tried to speak but words just didn’t came out of his mouth and his heart dipped another notch seeing the pain in her eyes …that flicker of hope and than the anger …

Geet ….//

He gasped his soul burdened by the weight of her anger and just when he tried to speak in the next second she stopped him showing her palm taking a step back ..

You know what …. ab mujhe is baat se bhi koi farq nahi parta k aapko farq parta hai ya nahi ..

Her words felt as the last nail in the coffin… Maan looked away afraid that his eyes would give away his pain ..he didn’t wanted to … he didn’t came here to fall weak in front of her ..

Aur agar kuch karna hai na mere liye tou mujhe akela chor dijeye yahan … yeh mere mamaji hain aur mujhe inka khayaal khud rakhna hai .. iss baar koi distraction iske beech nahi aayegi …mujhe aapki koi help nahi chahiye .. geet aapke bina bhi jee sakti hai..zindagi ka saamna kar sakti hai …samjhe aap ..

She walked away from him seeing a nurse walk out of the CCU asking for some medicines …she took the prescription and left towards the pharmacy …without even looking back at the broken soul she left standing behind …

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You think maan would let her be ...😉

Geet's outburst is her frustration of not knowing what Maan wants. On one hand he denies any relation but his actions speak otherwise.

Geet feeling guilty that she is responsible for her uncles state.

Ab Maan kya karega want to see.

Please continue.

Loved it 🤗

I literally got wetness in my eyes hearing Geet! She was frustrated, angry and Hurt bitterly.. She decided to Pull out all her Anger when she had seen Maan in front of her.. Still she was little Hopeful that Maan will say his heart out But Naah He decided to be Buddu and Couldn't say anything to her... All will Have one Limiting point To them.. If it crosses then they will decide to let Go and Here is the same for Geet... She Totally lost it when he didn't say anything!

Maan was pained by her words and wants to stay with her but he is still in his silent Mode... What he is not understanding still is that his calmness was Hurting Her more... Hope he wouldn't push her Away more than it is!!

OH it means you will update after 2 weeks!!!! Ah I can't wait more.. Can you try to update In a week only if you get time 😃

I think maan should be either let her deal her problems on her own or confess his love. He should understand that he is killing her day by day with his dilemma. If he thinks being with him will kill her then at least he should let her live not kill her emotionally day by day. I hope someone knocks his brain and make him understand that he need to let go of his fears there is something Called destiny and no one change it. If she has die then she will die no matter.

Beautiful update

Maan needs to speak up

Sometimes with actions, words also needed to be heard

Hope maan will open to geet soon

Let see what will he do now

Ramzaan Mubarak to you and your family.

thanks for updating.

Part 53

emotional update. superbly written

Geet's outburst is justified.

can understand her feelings and pain.

sad that Maan was silent....

how can he just let her leave?

hope Maan opens up to Geet soon

geet's outburst hurt maan but dint make him said her place n feeling for geet in words

It's so emotional

Geet outburst is justified the way Maan behaved 5 year's she gave more then enough time to him to confess but now she's realize she being selfish in hr love fr Maan and forget hr family whom worried fr hr future

Maan still can't get courage to say something which show hr he accepting Geet as hr

I think he behaving cowardly he need push from someone like his Dadi to accept Geet and let go his insecurities

Very rarely do I like to see someone hurting Maan and this is definitely one of those ; he needed a shocker to realise the gravity of the situation