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Posted: 10 years ago
part 88
awesome...
interesting...
everyone is interested in Maan...
but Maan has eyes only for Geet and Manu...
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thy r cmng closer...wtng fr nxt dy whn evryone will ask abt raichand daughter to maan n maans reaction..
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part 89
awesome...
lovely...
Geet was so uncomfortable...
but Maan was so happy...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
loved it
geet is feeling uncomfortable with the eyes on her but maan is enjyoing her closness...all were looking them curiously
party got over and all left from there
maan and geet thinking about the dance
geet decided she wont attend any party of khurana from now onwards

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear⭐️
Loved it 😃👏

Want more maaneet scene👏😉😉
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 89



Part - 90


That dance stirred many hearts , ruffle up many thoughts nd cognizant many minds ,, there was a murk nd nobody was sure what to think ,, all wr confused nd not able to conclude ,, they cd be right or wrong .

Questioning anything with in doubts, will just bring mind to no certainty .

All started their day as usual ,, it was bright sunny day nd Geet planned to go out with U&A Sam ,, there was a famous spring fair of Surajkund in Delhi NCR ,, she heard about that a lot when she was in school n college ,, now she wanted to visit that cultural fair with U&A Sam ,, she liked d caravan which Maan had booked for their last tour ,, that was very comfy , so she decided to ask about that to Maan ,, she called him but he was not responding ,, she took Manu nd went to ask personally .

All d Khuranas wr taking their BF together nd talking about last night party ,, Rashi nd DM wr praising nd commenting on few guests ,, Yash too was giving his feedback nd response of guests regarding their blooming business ,, at last Rashi came on other topic ,, she casually started pointing about d young girls who came with their family nd asked Maan .

Rashi: Maan did u notice mr Raichand's daughter nd mr Mehra's daughter ,, both d girls wr looking very pretty nd cultured ,, what u say ?

Maan looked at her nd shrugged his shoulders : what was there to notice in them ,, all d girls wr same ,, painted dolls nd show off .

The trio elders looked at him disappointed nd then at each others ,, Maan all most rejected all ,, DM tried to take lead .

DM: no , it was not like that Maan ,, they r quiet decent nd pretty girl from good families .

Yash: huumm, mr Raichand is a good businessman nd we have good business relations from last few yrs .

Rashi: Maan I know mrs Mehra from many yrs ,, we r kitty friends nd I met with her family many times ,, all r very nice .

Maan didn't reply nd remain busy nibbling his BF ,, getting no +ive response from him Rashi nd DM felt disappointed nd looked at each other .

Rashi: Maan listen beta , both d families r interested in alliance ,, what u think ? do u like any of that girl ?

Maan startled : what ??? alliance ,, liking a girl ? What is all this mom ?

Rashi: Maan ,, we r talking about ur alliance if u like any of that girl ,, both r nice .

Maan looked at all one by one thinking that again his family started this topic ,, he sighed .

Maan: sorry mom ,, I told u earlier that I m not interested ,, plzz no more talk about this.

DM: But Maan this's d right time to get married ,, think about us ,, we have some dreams nd hopes ,, these r quiet good families nd girls then what's d prob in this ?

Yash: Yes Maan , ur DM & Mom r right ,, think about it ,, we like these 2 girls for u ,, they r nice nd both d families r very respectable .

Their discussion entrapped with a sweet voice ... uncle Maan good molning.

All looked at d door nd find Geet there holding Manu's hand ,, Yash nd Rashi gave a smile , even DM too smiled at Manu but Maan startled ,, he noticed Geet saddened face nd feared inwardly .

Geet who came there to meet him for asking about d caravan's agency number rooted at d door ,, she overheard Yash's words ,, she wanted to move back from there but Manu's voice attracted all.

Rashi/Yash: aree Geet tum ,, aao beta ,

Geet startled : no,, it's OK uncle , i'll come later ,, u carry on plzzz ,, sorry to disturb u all.

Yash: no prob beta , come here .

Manu wanted to go but Geet held his hand tight ,, she was feeling odd .

Rashi: Geet , andar aao beta , it's a family talk nd u cn join us ,, come baby.

Maan came in sense nd felt d gravity ... This talk nd in front of Geet nd Manu ... No way ,,, he at once blurt out ..

Maan: Geet , took Manu to OH , I m coming there ,, Manu baby go with mommy , i'll play with u there .

All looked at him confused ,, Maan ignored them nd looked at Geet ,, he spoke again lil loud ... Go Geet ... I m coming there nd take Manu with u .

Geet herself wanted this ,, she faked a smile at Yash nd Rashi who wr staring at Maan ,, pick Manu in arms nd move back , but she was hurt, very hurt from inside ... This was d reality of her life which she didn't want to face , but her fate made her to face ,, her heart was aching but she cdn't cry .

It was lil Manu who brought her out from her grief nd gave her strength to garner her .

Manu: mommy ,, i' ll play , leave me .

Geet: no baby ,, we r going to see a fair ,, there r swings , roundabout nd many games to play .

Manu: fail ??? I took uncle Maan with me mommy .

Geet: no baby ,, U&A Sam r going with us .

Manu sadly : no uncle Maan ???

Geet: no baby,, he has many works ,, next time .

Manu's face hung ,, nd looked at Geet sadly which hurt Geet more ,, she kissed his cheeks nd consoled him .

Geet: my sweet baby ,, cheer up ,, we all have lots of fun there .

They entered in OH nd Geet gave him ball to play with Jojo , she had to find a caller cab herself so started to search in d monthly informer book .

There all glared at Maan ,, they wr confused over his strange behaviour ,, one side he was showing his concern for Geet nd other side trying to keep her away from family talks ,, Maan too realized that he had hurt Geet sending her away like this , but he had to ,, he didn't want any talk regarding his marriage in front of Geet nd Manu ,, that cd hurt her more nd put him in a tight situation ,, he was sure that she overheard something .

Yash nd Rashi became angry nd looked at him annoyed .

Yash : what was all that Maan ? why u sent her back like this ,, it was so insulted for her nd us .

Rashi: yes Maan why u did that ? I m not getting ur behaviour ,, What'll she think ?

Maan: Sorry ,, for that ,, i'll talk to her but I don't want any talk in front of her ,, in fact I don't want to talk about that matter too .

DM: Why ? any reason ?

Maan: sorry DM , dad nd mom ,, plzz stop this matter here ,, no more talk about this marriage stuff ... Excuse me .

Maan got up nd went out leaving all in confusion there ,, they wr hurt nd clueless about his wired behaviour .

There Maan at once rushed for OH ,, he was fearing for Geet reactions ,, She was not ready to live here at 1st place nd agreed very hardly but see what he had done ... hurt her again ,, don't know what'll she think ?.. God ! plzz be with me . he shoot a prayer nd entered in Geet's room .


Precap ----- Maan showing his authority ... 😛


Part - 91




sorry for mistakes ...






Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part
maaneet thinking abt dance and geet decided that she will never attend a khurana party
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Posted: 10 years ago
Babbie🤗
How are you today?
Hi Gappus😃
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is everything fine , waiting for the update dear

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