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lovely update loved it maaneet care 4 each other awesome

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Awesome part..
wow their dance can't wait for that..
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maan egerly wting 4 geet ,,,angry
bt usko dekhke sabbhul gaya,,,,😆😆
passionate dance,,,,😉
lekin dance ke baad family reaction ,,,,dhamaka hoga kya,,??,,,😆
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hi babie ,,,haath kaisa hei,,??
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi babie ,,,haath kaisa hei,,??


🤗 lily dear...
kuch theek hei,,
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updating

Thanku so much





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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 88


Part - 89

It was a soft music , he held her hand nd placed that on his shoulder circling his other hand in her waist nd started swaying on rhythm ,, Geet was still perplexed at his behaviour nd looking at him nd then all around ,, she find many eyes at them which made her more weak ,, Maan sensed her hesitation nd fear in her eyes which pained him .

Maan: Geet don't look nd think about others .

But Geet was tensed nd her body language was showing that she wanted to run away from there ,, she never thought that he cd do this in public ,, her body was shivering ,, Maan was feeling that nd pressed her hand which was in his hand .

Maan whispered : Geet , relax baby ,, don't look all around nd talk to me ,, look at me Geet .

Geet in a shacking voice : mujhe jana hei ,, plzz ,, sab dekh rahe hein .

Maan: dekhne do ,, mai bhi ab tak sabko dekh raha tha ,, unke bare mei ku soch rahi ho jo tumhe janty bhi nahi ,, relax nd dance .

Geet pleaded : nahi chalo yahan se , plzzz .

Maan swirled her nd came in back ,, she was in his arms feeling more weak nd embarrassed ,, Maan was losing in her proximity ,, her closeness nd touch was affecting him ,, he was lost in these beautiful moments nd don't want to come out from them ,, Geet tried to move away but he pulled her more to him looking deep in her eyes .

Geet whispered: jane do mujhe .

Maan: ku,, darr ku rahi ho jab mai sath hun .

Geet's fear was right ,, all eyes wr at them even DM,Rashi nd Yash too noticed Maan's mood swing ,, they told him to dance but he didn't nd now he was dancing with Geet nd looking very happy ,, d girls who wanted to dance with him earlier burning nd feeling insulted ,, mr Raichand nd his family too was curious to know about that girl who was dancing with Maan ,, they noticed her with a child which was in Maan's arms nd then with that Mexican couple .

Mrs Raichand : mrs Khurana who is that girl ?

Rashi: amm ,, she is Geet Singh ,, Mr Khurana's friend's daughter .

Mrs R: who is that kid ?

Rashi: that is her son ,, she is settled in US nd came here for some time with that couple .

Mrs R: oh ,, means they r Khurana's guests .

Rashi: yes .

Mrs R: ur son is looking very comfortable with them .

Rashi: yes , they r living with us mrs Raichand .

Mrs R: Oh , OK ,, then it's possible .

The music had changed nd Geet tried to move from there ,, it was going hard for her to bear all eyes on her , nd more importantly what wd DM think ? She never like this .

Geet: plzz , durr raho mujhse aur apne guests attend karo apni family ke sath .

Maan smirked : mai ab bhi to family ke sath hun .

Geet looked at him angrily : that is why I don't want to come ,, why u r making things tough for me ,, it pained me .

Maan: nd ur indifference pained me Geet ,, OK don't spoil ur nd my mood ,, I m very happy now ,, go , manu is waiting nd have ur dinner ,, thanks a ton for this beautiful company nd dance.

He smiled nd gestured her to go ,, Geet quietly came near U&A Sam with lower eyes ,, she was fearing to face ppl's eyes

They parted nd Maan went to bid bye some of his businessmen guests who wr leaving ,, Geet quietly took her dinner nd fed Manu ,, she finished quickly nd asked U&A Sam to move back home ,, they came early so agreed ,, most of d guests went nd few Rashi's friends nd Yash friends wr there nd talking with each other ,, DM was also with them ,, U Sam took Manu nd they all came near Yash to take leave ,, U&A Sam thanked them nd congrats them again .

U Sam: now we have to leave Mr Khurana .

Yash introduced U&A Sam with his friends nd then Geet nd Manu ,, after formal greet Geet came out ,, they met with Maan in mid way .

Maan: Geet ,, U sam ,, r u going ?

U Sam: yes son ,, nd thanks for this warm hospitality ,, d party was awesome nd congrats again son.

A Sam: congrats son , god bless u all d happiness .

Maan thanked them nd looked at Geet ,, who was avoiding to look at him ,, Maan loved manu nd told him that they wd play TM coz next day was sun ,, Maan called his driver nd they all settled in car to move back ,, Maan told Geet to inform him after reaching KM .

Maan went in nd joined his Dad ,, there was no option to go any where ,, rest of Yash nd Rashi's friends wr started to take leave inviting them to visit their homes ,, Raichands wr d last to move from d venue ,, he was showering extra love on Maan nd praising her daughter too in between ,, thanked Khuranas nd invited them to meet again ,, Geet msg Maan after reaching OH ,, Maan checked that replied relieved.

Miss raichand

Maan was least interested nd shunning ,, he noticed mrs Raichand nd her daughter's eyes on him but ignored . The party went well nd Yash nd Rashi wr happy ,, they too moved back ,, Maan joined DM nd his Dad-mom came in their car .

It was very late nd all retired to their respective room directly wishing GN to each other ,, next day was Sunday nd all wr free.

All slept in their beds but few minds wr occupied with Maan nd Geet's dance images .

Maan was thinking about those moments with a sweet smile ,, Geet's face was coming in his eyes when he closed his eyes ,, he was still feeling d touch of Geet's hands in his hand ,, her fragrance was fresh in his senses ,, he felt ticklish in his heart ,, hugged his pillow nd tried to sleep .

There Geet was also restless ,, remembering those moments in Maan's arms,, d fragrances of his aftershave nd perfume was fresh in her senses , she touched that place on her neck where she felt his warm breaths,, his touch on her bare waist ,, she felt shivers in her body ,, she closed her eyes nd images of her dance with Maan started flashing in her mind along with d piercing eyes of ppl ,, she didn't want to face these type of situations nd that is why she was trying to keep a distance but Maan was spoiling all her efforts ,, she decided not to attend any more gathering of Khuranas .


Precap ... Maan nd Geet ... hurt nd huffy ...


Part - 90


sorry for mistakes ...







Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
babie haath kaisi hai? pain kam hua?

pm check karo
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hai babbie

kaisi ho??

dard kaisa hain ab??
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😃

hi Barbie doll 😃

waiting for the dance
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