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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome & lovely updates loved it geet want 2 be away 4m km but maan cant say away 4m geet & manu
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geet is changing...

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finally we are getting to see some soft moments between maaneet
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 86


Part - 87


There was no doubt that their day was full of fun nd they visited many places of Delhi ,, U&A Sam was very happy ,, they only heard about india nd now got d chance to explore it ,, they like it very much spcly they wr impressed with MSK's hospitality nd praising him ,, Geet too felt a warmth in her heart ,, she cdn't overlook Maan's care for them ,, he was doing everything perfectly .

When they wr back find Maan waiting for them in d lawn ,, it turn lil dark nd cold ,, called Geet at eve asking about where wr they that time ,, when they reached there Manu was sleeping ,, he took him in his arms from Geet talked to driver for few min nd then all went in ,, settled manu in bed nd then all set in dining area where Satish was ready to serve them hot coffee,, He asked about d day nd U&A Sam thanked him for his arrangements.

Geet was quietly listening but gave a dimpled smile when Maan looked at her ,, his heart jumped with joy seeing her happy nd promised himself inwardly that he cd do anything to make her smile like this ,, he returned in KM after spending some time with them nd reminding Geet to send Manu after dinner .

In KM Maan was taking dinner with all nd talking with Yash on business matters ,, DM nd Rashi wr quietly listening ,, then Yash informed Maan about d party .

Yash: Maan I m planning a party for u ,, u r doing good nd stablished our business roots in US , so to make aware our business circle with our success nd future plans I planned this party ,, all our business friends nd close friends r there to invite.

Maan: hummm , it's good dad , tell me where nd when u want d party i'll look after everything .

Yash: this is for u son , so i'll handle that .

Maan smiled at his dad ,, Yash looked at Rashi nd DM thoughtfully nd they gave their willingness with a smile .

Geet didn't come in KM nd sent Manu with Satish ,, they played nd spent time together like previous night Maan brought manu back when he slept ,, playing with manu became a daily dose for Maan,, he brought him back in OH nd settled in his baby cot .

Geet was in her blanket nd busy with her work but closed her lappy seeing Maan with Manu there ,, Maan came near her nd sat on d edge of bad lil away from her,, she sensed that he wanted to talk her .

Maan: so , how was ur Delhi Darshan , koi prob to nahi hui ?

Geet composed : it was good , thanks for d arrangements , koi prob nahi hui .

Maan smiled : huumm ,, thanks to u , MSK ka smart idea like kerne ke liye .

Geet smiled thinking that really his idea was perfect ,, he was not giving any chance to complain .

Maan: fine , now what is ur plan for TM ?

Geet: aamm,, depends upone U&A , if they'll comfortable then i'll plan but not for whole day ,, day after TM I have to join my new office .

Maan: OK, no prob , TM is sun nd I cn join u all , inform me if u plan ,, did u check d pool covering ? is that fine ?

Geet: yeah , all r fine , thanks .

Maan: Geet har baat ke liye Thanks kahane ki jaroorat nahi hei ,, ek aur baat tum office jaogi to Manu kaise rahega , tum to eve mei aaogi , wo raha payega tab tak ?

Geet : wo U&A Sam ke paas rahega ,, usse aadat hei unke paas rahane ki ,, U&A handle ker lenge usse .

Maan: Geet keep Satish full day here ,, he'll be a big help for U&A nd i'll tell Mom to find a good nanny ASAP.

Geet smiled : OK , any more instruction ?

Maan smiled : haan .

Geet: kya ?

Maan: esse hi muskurati raho ,, tumhari smile bahot pyaari hei Geet .

Geet: accha , aapki bhi .

But next moment she realised what she blurt out in flow nd to whom ,, chewed her lip nd turned her face losing her smile ,, Maan liked her reply .

Maan: thanks , kuch to accha laga tumhe mera ? GN Geet , see u in d mrng .

He got up nd went out to give her space ,, 1st time she praised him nd he felt a tingling in his heart thinking that she noticed his smile nd adored. A sweet smile crept on his face ,, Rashi saw him smiling while he was going to his room .

Rashi: aree Maan kahan se aa rahe ho , aur etna ku smile ker rahe ho ?

Maan startled but composed himself : nothing mom , I went to leave Manu in OH ,, wo Mom I want a favour from u .

Rashi: what favour ?

Maan : cn u find a good nanny for Manu ,, Geet is joining her office nd we need some time to search a good play school for him ,, after school he need some one to look after him rest of day ,, U&A Sam won't be able to handle him all d time .

Rashi looked at him awed ,, this was a diff Maan ,, there was a time when he threatened her not to bring Geet in his school for admission nd today he was worried for Geet's son nd asking a good nanny for him ,, searching a good school for him .

Rashi: Maan , why do u love Manu this much ? Is this bcoz of sympathy or guilt of hurting her mother ?

Maan felt a blow nd looked at his mom hurt ,, wanted to say that it was not sympathy ,, it was his fatherly love for him but he was tongue tight ,, Rashi saw pain on his face nd took his care nd love his guilt for hurting Geet .

Rashi: don't worry Maan , i'll search ,, Maan think about u too ,, we have many dreams for u .

Maan gave a faint smile : i'll mom , GN .

He went back to his room thinking about his mom's words ,, he said to himself ... Maan one day u have to disclose d truth breaking all d trust of ur parents nd DM ,, He sighed nd opened his lappy to finish his remaining work .


Precap --- Geet joined office ,,, party for Maan ...

Part - 88




sorry for mistakes ...


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Oh ho!

Kya baat hai!
Kuch toh hua hai😃
smile acchi lagi
chalo aaj ke liye ye kaafi hai😃
waiting for the party..
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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Congrats aavi.. Aap first ho gye.. Me second...😃
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Babbie.. Socho.. Apna manu sabko patang chkane lekar jaaye.. Or manu k mom dad ka terrace romance.. Hehee...😉
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🤗 Hello kiddo...
how r u dear...?
😲 kahan gayab ho,,, ?
i m angry with u,,, mere msg ka reply nahi diya...
missed u,,,
Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mauaa

Babbie.. Socho.. Apna manu sabko patang chkane lekar jaaye.. Or manu k mom dad ka terrace romance.. Hehee...😉



😆😆 tummbhi kya-kya sochti ho ,,,

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