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Posted: 10 years ago
awesoem .. got some maneet moments

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hi babie,,,,
finally reed all prts,,,,patting my back ,,,,😆😆
maan ne galtee bohut bdi ki ,,,nw rpenting
geet ko km le aya ,,,ab sachai samne aatee hei
to dm kya fir se geet ko blame karegi,,??
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vibrant Update

Daadima realizes now why Geet is distanced but her ego will not let
her speak to Geet .
Geet doing everything at the outhouse and it hurts both Yash and Maan
but I just feel Geet should not do anything that hurts Yash and Rashi
I like how Maan stands behind Geet and she bumps into him and he says easy baby that was so cool

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
loved it
geet made food herself in OH..
yash was hurt with her distaning herself
maan went to talk with her
she clearly asked him not to forece her futher
eagerly waiting for the next part
Edited by _Chinmayi_ - 10 years ago
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DI...WAITIN FOR NXT PART...
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 83


Part - 84

Maan felt that there wr many things which he had to change according to Manu ,, he was small nd need care all d time ,, he didn't deal with any kid before this so didn't know much about their requirements in a home ,, Geet was a mother nd knew all tiny mini things .

Maan: don't hesitate to tell me ,, I don't want to take any risk ,, check everything nd tell me if u want any change .

Geet: no , for now this is enough .

Maan: where is manu?

Geet: sleeping in bedroom .

Maan: mai le jau usse apne sath ? I didn't meet him whole day .

Geet looked at him ,, how deeply he was attach to manu ,,it's so hard to hurt his feelings .

Geet: so raha hei ,, mai le aaungi dinner ke baad .

Maan looked painfully at her nd then nodded his head ,, with heavy heart he went to meet U&A Sam ,, talk to them nd convey his dad's msg for sharing a drink ,, U Sam accepted that but for next day ,, both wr feeling tired ,,, Maan agreed for that ,, he came in Geet's bedroom nd look all around to check all d things ,, satisfied he sat on d edge of bed near sleeping Manu ,, Geet was opening her office bag nd setting d things on table looking now nd then at Maan.

Maan caressed manu's head lovingly ,, a sweet smile crept on his face seeing him after many hrs,, he bent nd pecked manu's forehead ,, Geet felt Maan's longings .

Geet: wake him .

Maan: haann ,, ku ?

Geet: wake him ,, he was sleeping for long ,, talk to him ,, he was also missing u .

Maan was staring at her ,, Geet smiled faintly nd came near bed ,, called Manu 2-3 times nd ruffled manu's hairs .

Geet: Manu ,, baby get up ,, see ur uncle Maan is waiting for u ,, get up baby ,,, Manu .

Maan : Manu ,, see I m back sunny .

Manu heard Maan's voice nd opened his drowsy eyes ,, Uncle Maan u come .

Maan: yes baby ,, come on get up ,, we'll play .

Geet made him sit nd manu crawled in Maan's lap ,, hugged him from circling his small arms around Maan's neck ,, Maan pecked his cheek .

Maan: come let go to fresh nd then we'll play .

Geet: after dinner ,, not now ?

Maan glared at Geet ,, nd manu at Maan with a pout ,, both met after long hrs nd now Geet was bossing them .


Maan: hum to US mei hi acche thy .

Geet rolled her eyes ,, he was behaving like a kid ,, , was this same MSK , who was very arrogant nd high headed ? Maan took Manu to WR nd came after few min ,, now manu was fully up nd talking to Maan ,, giving him all d report of shopping nd his visit in Mall.

Geet: manu come , have dinner nd then we go to meet dadu nd u cn play there ,, ur Jojo is waiting for u ,, won't u give him food.

Manu: yeah ,,, come uncle Maan ,, we feed Jojo . (now jojo was also settled in OH with Manu)

Maan: OK ,, come .

They gave Jojo's food nd Geet went to call U&A Sam for dinner ,, Geet hesitantly asked Maan to have dinner ,, he looked at her for few sec nd then replied sadly.

Maan: no thanks, dad is waiting for me there ,, I m going nd don't forget to come after dinner ,, he pecked Manu saying that he was waiting for him .

Maan left nd Geet served dinner for all ,, U&A Sam wr habitual to take wine nd some sort of drink with dinner ,, it's quiet common in abroad nd Geet knew it ,, she placed s beautiful red wine bottle on dining table for them ,, they had their dinner ,, Geet fed Manu nd took her ,, finishing her work she prepared manu's milk nd kept in a bottle warmer .

U&A Sam got busy in watching TV,, Geet informed them nd covered Manu ,, took a small shopping bag caring gifts for Yash ,, Manu took Jojo's rope nd made him sit in his bed ,, Yash left for his study after dinner nd Maan was waiting for Manu nd Geet in living hall ,, Rashi nd DM wr also there watching news ,, Maan beamed seeing Manu there nd rushed to take him in his arms ,, he was missing him badly ,, Rashi nd DM wr amazed at his eagerness ,, Geet wished all nd asked about Yash ,, Maan said that he was in Study room nd Geet excused herself to meet him .

Geet: Manu come ,, won't u meet dadu ?

Manu: yeah mommy ,, uncle Maan , dadu .

Maan: Ok ,, let's go to meet Dadu , then we'll play in my room .

Manu: OK ,, clicet .

Maan: fine.

They entered in Yash study ,, Geet wished Yash but he was angry with her so just replied coldly nd turned his face ,, Geet sighed nd looked at Maan , who too turned his face showing her that he was also angry ,, Geet gave manu d paper bag which she brought for Yash nd whispered him to wish Dadu nd gave him d gift ,, Maan made Manu stand on his feet nd Manu went near Yash.

Manu: dadu ,, Good eve ning ,, dadu gift fol u .

Yash's heart melted down seeing Manu close to him nd talking to him so cutely ,, how cd he ignore that bundle of joy ,, he took t gift nd placed that on table nd took Manu in his lap ,, pecked his cheeks .

Yash: GE my child nd thanks a lot ,, how was ur day ?

Manu: dadu ,, I went fol shop ping ,,, ate pizza .

Yash: wow!! Nd where is my pizza ?

Manu looked at him nd then Geet ,, now what to say ? Geet smiled nd said .

Geet: manu say , that u'll go with Dadu nd both eat again .

Manu: leally ,, when,,? TM ?

Geet: I don't know ,, ask to ur Dadu when he'll take u ?

Manu: Dadu when we go ? TM ?

Maan smiled that how smartly Geet sticked Manu to his Dadu to divert his mind ,, now Manu won't left him .

Yash: aammm,,, OK,, i'll try to come early ,, hummm,, but I won't take ur mommy with us ? I m angry with her .

Manu: angly ... mommy dadu angly with u ,,,, say solly .

Geet: of course baby .

Geet went to near Yash chair nd knelt near him ,, placed her hand on Yash nd pleaded .

Geet: I know u felt bad uncle ,, I m very sorry ,, but I told d reason to aunty ,, plzz try to understand from my side .

Yash : u hurt me Geet ,, u didn't think it ur home .

Geet: plzz uncle don't say this, but I m not that Geet who was alone ,, I have some responsibilities on me nd only I want to do that ,, plzz try to get my point ,, I m really very sorry that I didn't tell u before ,, we cn talk now nd I hope u'll understand why I m doing this ,, meri jagah aap hoty to shayad aap bhi essa hi kerty .

Yash gave him a thoughtful lookto her nd then to Maan ,who was standing there with lower head nd listening Geet ,, he already knew d reason .

Manu: dadu ,, mommy said solly ,,, no angel .

Manu nodded his head in a No cutely nd then smiled .

Yash: I m not angry now ,, OK baby .

Manu: OK ,, good Dadu

That lil kid erased all d pain nd anger from hearts nd brought smiles ,, Geet to felt relief that now she cd make Yash understand her side ,, she looked at Maan who sighed nd nodded helplessly knowing that she was all prepared


Precap --- some lovely moments ...

Part - 85



sorry for mistakes ...





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Hi Babbie😃
thand kam hui ya nahi?
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