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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 81


Part - 82

It was right ,, Maan was very happy coz Geet nd Manu wr in KM , thought they wr lil away from him but he was relieved that they wr near him nd he cd reach them in a blink ,, now they wr not alone nd cn get d family love ,, there Rashi nd DM shared a thoughtful look ,, Rashi was lil apprehensive from DM's side ,, she thought that DM didn't like Geet's stay in KM for long .

Rashi: Maa don't u like Geet's stay in KM ?

DM: no it's not like that Rashi but I m thinking about Maan ,, he was still in d effect of past nd in his guilt he was becoming over adherent for Geet nd Manu.

Rashi: it's quiet natural Maa ,, he was living in d burden of hurting Geet nd his Dad form long nd now wanted to bring all close ,, that is why he requested Geet to stay here otherwise Geet didn't want to stay here ,, she was still maintaining d distance ,, she is still bearing d bitterness of her past ,, this time for Maan&Yash's happiness plzz accept her as a family member .

DM: Rashi trust me , I m not having any bad feeling for Geet now ,, time prove me wrong nd I m regretting for hurting her nd Yash feelings.

Rashi: then why r u looking worried after coming Geet .

DM : I was thinking about Maan's change behaviour ,, he was heart broken nd living in remorse ,, Geet was also broken , dejected nd alone , some time pain nd sorrow become a base of relation ,, sympathy nd care buttress d broken hearts .

Rashi : matlab ?

DM: Maan ki sympathy or care ek limit tak rahe to accha hei .

Both became silent for few min lost in their thoughts ,, Rashi too was sensing Maan's closeness with Manu nd care for Geet ,, they quietly went back to their respective rooms .

Maan got up after 2-3 hr nd got ready ,, came down nd asked about his Dad nd Rashi replied that he had left for office .

Maan: Mom send someone to ask about Geet nd U&A Sam's BF ,, she won't tell anything .

Rashi u don't worry , i'll see nd check them .

Maan: Geet knew what U&A Sam like to eat so make sure that they get everything perfect , rest i'll see after coming back from office ,, let them take rest today.

He called Nakul nd Satish nd ordered them to take extra care coz of Manu ,, he fell sick last time ,, Rashi felt that DM was right about Maan ,, he was becoming very attached to Manu nd Geet .

He left for office nd Rashi send Nakul to OH for checking that they wr wake up or not ,, he came after few min nd informed her that they all wr up nd Geet herself prepared coffee for them ,, DM nd Rashi felt odd listening that ,, she went to meet Geet who was busy with Manu .

Rashi: GM Geet , u wake up beta , nd why u made coffee here ? U cn order Nakul on intercom .

Geet: GM aunty , it's OK nd I didn't know about Intercom ,, U&A Sam have lil diff taste nd I brought things from US as per their taste ,, I have coffee maker nd they need it many times in a day ,, both r very fond of coffee in winters .

One more request Aunty , plzz don't mind it ... I want to cook here myself .

Rashi: what ,, no beta ,, servants r there ,, u nd Mr&Mrs r our guests ,, why r u troubling yourself ?

Geet: aunty plzz , Mr Khurana forced me to live here nd accepted ,but I don't want to bother u nd I m here for long nd have an elderly couple with me ,, they have diff taste nd habits , so it doesn't look nice if I burdened u for all of us ,, plzz I did everything there nd I cn manage here too ,, aunty plzz try to understand ,, now I have a sep life nd have some responsibilities .

Rashi: ur uncle nd Maan won't like it Geet .

Geet: they'll , i'll talk to them .

Rashi : Geet, tum bahot dur chali gai beta ,, tum DM ki wajha se to essa nahi ker rahi ? wo ab badal chuki hein .

Geet: aunty , agar waqt ke sath wo badal gai , to mai bhi to badal gai ,, I have a family nd responsibilities now .

Rashi sighed : abhi to tum sab aaye ho atleast aaj to hume care kerne do ,, aur mujhe nahi pata Yash aur Maan kaise react kerenge ?

Geet: OK , nd don't worry , i'll manage them.

Rashi: tum nakul ko bol do BF aur lunch mei kya chahiye , aur mai ek servant bhej deti hu tumhari help ke liye.

Geet: ji , thanks aunty ,, Satish ko bhej do wo Jojo ko bhi dekh lega aur Manu se familiar bhi hei.

Rashi: OK , get ready nd come for BF ,, we want to meet Mr & Mrs Sam properly .

Geet: fine , we'll be there .

Rashi was surprized at Geet's formal behaviour ,, d pain nd dejection she faced here yrs back was still there in her heart ,, it was all clear that Maan forced her to live here for giving her respect which she didn't get bcoz of him ,, it was all Maan's guilt , nothing else .

She told everything to DM to clear her mind nd DM too was shocked that Geet was behaving so indifferent ,, she felt guilty that it was all bcoz of her mis behaviour nd it made her more guilty in Yash's eyes ,, Maan was better than her nd making efforts to reduce d burden of his guilt ,, now Geet's rejections started opening her eyes ,, she wanted to talk Geet but her ego was stopping her .

Manu get up lil late nd find his darling Jojo waiting for him to play ,, it was very cold outside so Geet kept Jojo too inside ,, Geet was busy setting d things in cupboard nd helping U&A Sam too ,, she set some required things of kitchen which she brought with her nd then set her nd manu's things .

Manu : Mommy ,, whele is uncle Maan ?

Geet: GM Manu ,,he is busy with his work baby ,, U&A r there ,, go nd wish them ,, I m bringing ur milk ,, then we'll go to Mrkt for some shopping .

Manu: OK, come Jojo ,, mommy cn I take Jojo ?

Geet: OK , go .

Manu: bling milk fol jojo too ,,, OK.

Geet: Ok , fine . nd don't go outside ,, it's cold there .

Manu held Jojo's rope nd went in U&A room ,, they too became familiar with Jojo in few min ,, prepared Manu's milk nd pour some in a bowl for Jojo nd gave them ,, all have a good time after along tiring journey .

Maan called Geet nd asked about all then talk to Manu for some time nd assured him that they'll play nd go for a drive at eve ,, Nakul informed about their BF nd they went KM after few min ,, Geet took a big paper bag which has gifts for Rashi nd DM nd handed that to U&A Sam ,, they wished Rashi nd DM nd gave them that gifts , all settled in dining hall .


Precap --- settling down ... something wrong with Maan 😛


Part - 83





sorry for mistakes ...




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