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shree2

@shree2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Awesome OS...

U have written tis story in a totally different style... i loved it...

Merry Christmas to all.

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mhappy

@mhappy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

This maan

oh I am sorry our very own santa also wanted to protect his geet from the freezing cold just like politician maan

😉😉😉😉😉

haaye

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Maan the personal heater 😳😳😳😳

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

hi FROSTY

once again u proved ur calibre ...applause for the wonderful piece of writing ..

its so different ..

love maan santa and his geet ..

the story though unreal but surely awesome in each sense ..

love it

thank u for superb story ...

MERRY CHRISTMAS TO U AND UR FAMILY ...

Edited by tabby999 - 10 years ago

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

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Aphrodisiac

@Aphrodisiac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

I was reading a Fairy Tale or what !👏 cannot even begin to point what I liked to loved as the entire thought was magical . Unbelievable sync of Santa to this couple that I love . How they met

his angry young style since kid

their fights , love , marriage and

parting . Undoubtedly the narrative of Geet was cherry and to think Maan as Santa without paunch was hilarious 😆
Amid everything the underlying sorrow of separation hit me so much ... being so close yet so far surfacing clearly all kudos to Geet's monologue {and your penning}

beautiful gift of Christmas