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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 14

Nice part...

Geet adamant to go away

Maan adamant to help her.. and let her live with him...

So now coming up with another and probably last offer..

waiting for Geet's decision

thnx for pm

cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 14
suprb update babu...loved it
geet maan se dur jana chahti h but maan ko tho apne bacche ki padi h...grrr selfish maan ek baar b hospital aa k dekhne ka time nai tha. usk pass
geet hospital se discharged ho gai n wo city chod k jaane ki taiyaari kr rhi h...maan aa gaya geet ko rokne k liye...sirf baby k liye wo geet se shaadi krne ki baat kr rh maan ko tho geet ki koi parwah hi nai h
dekhte h geet kya decision leti h
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART - 15


MAAN was determined to kept her with himself at any cost. He can't allows her to leave in such a delicate state, risking her own health and baby. So he gave her a last offer which wasn't easy to deny. But Geet's fear is much bigger. She was staring him with her blank eyes. Righy now she won't able to decide whether she will accept his offer or not. Maan's proximity definitely effects her. She was struck in the dual between mind and heart. When she do not replied for a long he clutch her wrist and luggage both, dragging her along with him outside.


"Sir leave me", she screamed in pain but he unlisten her.

"Shut up and now listen to me very carefully. I m not going to bear your any trantrum understood. You are going to stay with me and that's final." His glare made her numb and strong voice trembled her.

"I won't come till you make me a promise." She put condition but in a meak voice. Maan nodded and signaled her to proceed. "I will come with you. But promise me you will not snatch my baby from me." She almost whimpering.


Maan stare at her innocent eyes. fear of loosing the baby is clearly evident in them. He inhaled sharp. "Fine I will not." He promised and she sat inside the car. Both moved to his mansion. He took her inside. Glory and luxury can attract anyone. She was amused seeing his mansion but not affected. He introduced her with all the servants, as from now she is going to command them for everything. He send her with nakul who introduced her with everything there and also showed her room where she was going to stay.


Geet was not looking comfortable but for her baby's sake she trying to make up her mind. Maan left her alone.

Geet don't know what she do now. As alk worked already done. "Mam what you want for dinner?" One of servant asked.


"Tell me about the routines of Maan sir first. Then I will decide." She asked about his taste and what he usually took for his meals.


"Mam sir to ab kal morning me hi aayenge." He told.

"Kyu?" She asked briskly.

Servant looking at her in confusion, felt awkward telling the truth to her. Geet glance at his lowered lashes and she got her answers. "It's okay. Umm I would like to cook for myself." She demands and he left. Geet wants to spend time so she decided to cook for her atleast, whem Maan have no time for them. He was as usual busy with his personal life.


And exactly same happened. Maan don't returned home in night. He was busy with some random girl and arrived at 6am.


All servants are busy in doing their jobs as par their daily routine. Difference is Geet was with them. She not giving only instructions but preparing breakfast for him.


Maan went to her. "Geet what are you doing?" He asked strongly.


Geet glance at him. His appearance told her everything. Her heart sore but she calmed herself. "Its ok Geet. Aadat daal le ye to ab roz hoga." Though her mind knows these things before but experiencing such things before her eyes proved painful. She tried her level best not to look at him till he fresh n up.


"Geet I am asking something." He roared.

"Sir I think you need to fresh n up first. Apko firr office b jana hai.", she avoide looking at him.


Maan fists her arm and stirred her. She bumped on his chest. The fragrance of his scent having an essence of female scent. She wants to push him away, but she was so feeble to do so. "Jo puchha pehle use uska zwab do." Maan pulling her more without realizing what she was going through.


"I am not doing any hard work. Just cooking meal for us." , her face slanted to other side ang she replied quickly to get rid from him.

"Exactly my point. What need of doing this when I hired servants for this." Maan argued.

"Then sir you don't have need of me there. I can't sit like a stute for whole 9 months."she wants to leave right now.

Maan won't let her go. "Geet you need rest."


"Itne se kaam se kuchh nahi hoga.", she snap back.

"Ok fine but promise iske alwa or koi kaam nahi karogi."


"Hmm." She nodded and he freed her.


Geet mixed up with all servants. All are very helpful and polite. They quickly manage breakfast table before his arrival. He came and asked her to join. She denied first but when he forced she sat near him. She served him.

"So how's your first day? Would you like my mansion?", he behaved so polite then usual.


"Umm its nice.", she repliedi briefly.

"Just nice. Common is ghar ka architecture world k best architects ne design kiya hai and u said its nice.", Maan annoyed with her remark.

"Fayeda kya hai sir? I agree you buyed all expensive and exclusive things but for whom? Ghar ki keemat uske ander rehne walo se hoti hai. Or yaha to aap khid sirf kuchh ghanto k liye aate hai. Apke liye ye sirf ek hotel hai jaha kuchh der stay kiya or chal diye. Aapke pas apke apno k liye time nahi hai unke sath aap nahi rehte to itna sab kiske liye hai? Kya value hai in cheezo ki jab inhe yaha dekhne wala koi nahi hai." Her words shaked him in a sec. Again he don't have any answer to her question. He just passed a glare to save himself and tart scolding servants. "It's none of your businesses. I won't stay with them because I don't want their interference in my life." Maan justified his actions with agressiveness.


"Sorry sir", Geet apologies.

In Khurana Mansion:

Dadima was out of town and when she arrived Dev awared her about the incident took place in office. Dadima was hell angry on Maan. She first won't able to decide whether she act angrily or talk with Maan calmly. She doesn't want Geet suffered because of Maan's lust.


She went to office and straight entered in his cabin. Maan was engrossed in his work. Daduma knocked and came inside. Maan tilted his head to glance up. Seeing her stern face, Maan got the matter she wants to discuss. "So Dev told you everything." Maan said in annoying voice.

"Then what you want I won't know anything till baby arrives?" She snap back.

"Dadima now what you want?", he argued more.

"Maan apko zara b sharam nahi hai. Geet masoom hai. Aap uske sath aise kaise jar skte. Aaj tak aap jo b karte aaye hai humne usme bolna band kar diya tha kyunki aap pe kisi ki b baat ka koi asar hota nahi hai. Par Geet k sath hum apko khelne nahi denge. Sunna apne. Apko Geet se shadi karni hogi or apke bachhe ko apnana hoga." Dadima send glares to him. She recent on him.


Maan damped on table and retorted back. "Ye baat aap jake Geet ko samjhaiye. I agree I commit mistake but I tried to solve the matter and that's why I asked for marriage but she denied completely."


Dadima not able to believe on his words. She stared him suspiciously. "Geet ne mana kiya?"


"Je haa. She denied it."


"Fine I will talk to her. But promise if she agrees you won't change your mind." Dadima was confused so she want to make sure that he will stick to his words.

"Sure dadima. If she say yes then I will marry her.", Maan frowned and said strongly. Dadima is moving but Maan stopped her. "Dadima ek or baat. Now she is staying at my home as a caretaker." Maan informed her about her whereabouts.

Dadima made disgusting face. "Aap itne inhuman kaise ho skte hai?"


"Dadima I won't had a choice. Doc ne use saaf kaha hai she needs care. Or wo orphan hai. Bina rishte k wo ghar chalne k liye ready nahi thi. Isliye mujhe ye drama karna pada." Maan justified his action and he had no regrett on that.


Dadima stared and left his cabin. "Ab hume hi Geet se baat karni hogi. Ye jo kuchh ho raha hai wo sahi nahi hai. Maan se to koi umeed karna hi bekar hai. I only wish k main Geet ko samjha pau." Dadima think while coming out of the office. She commands her driver and he drove towards Maan's mansion.



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Posted: 10 years ago
Me first yupiiieee
Geet kya me ye jawab deti hn Geet ko nh krni chahye ye marriage maan dont deserve her..abhi usko yahan se chale jana chahye apne bache k sth Maan ko sirf baby ki fikr h but he doesn't change a bit b night life tu chal rhi h uski ye tu wo bat hogai chit b meri pat bhi meri...Bacha b mil jaega n kbhi attract hwa tu nam ki biwi bhi..I dont want any relationship between them until maan change a bit ...I know I know tu bolegi phr se bhashan de rhi h dekh mere bolne se kya jata u kne better about ur characters so tu behtar hi kregi but I just put my POV n I trust u wd the story richu ...THANKs for the update :*
Edited by xolfiya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
mummyyy Richu tu na sach mein devil hai 😭 u make me cry tujhe jara sa bhi tarash nahi aata na geet aur hum abla readers pe itna aatyachar kar rahe hai es kameene khota donky monky maan ke sath milkar grrr i wanna choped him so very muchh 😡 maan is difficult to understand i don't no wase he belongs to which planet 😡😡 i don't thinks so wo earth saye belong karta hai bcz he doesn't behave like humen he behave like some creature wid no emoticons...
geet agreed for maans offer maan is so disgusting he wont change 😡 at all
geet feel bad to see maan spending night with girl ye maan aur karo ayse kamene saye pyaar 😭😭 poor geet maan only cares about baby but not for geet 😡😡 what geet said to him was so true whats use of this house mate you are never there and its a house not home...
dadi came to know about maaneet will dadi made geet agree for marriage wonder what will dadima do now...
Edited by brandgurti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
MERRY XMAS TO ALL
really why should she marry him
no reason i see
is it fair to waste her life with this man
he wont change
till he stops being the way he is no point to it
after all she has her self respect
seeing him with different women every day its better that she not marry
why make her heart bleed more
dadi do you want that for geet
no naa
and what geet said to him was so true
whats use of this house mate
you are never there
and its a house not home
oh boy what will be their future
well as long as baby is hers
and he wont try to snatch it
he better not
or geet wont sit quite
but then no mother would
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update babu
hmm tho geet maan k saath jaane se phle condition rkhi ki maan geet se kabhi uska baby nai lega...
mujhe wo scene bohot accha laga jb brkfst table pe geet ki baato ka maan k pass koi answer hi nai hota h
tho dadi wapas aa gai n dev ne unhe sab bata diya n dadi angry h maan pe
ab dadi geet ko manane jaa rhi h but mujhe pata h koi kitna b samjha le par geet ready nai hone wali shaadi k liye...
eagerly waiting for nxt

n MEERY CHRISTMAS babu 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
geet not liking maaan gesture , asking to fresh n come
now she gets to know his personal life
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update di geet was confusd aft hearng maan's offer😕
maan just draggd geet wit him witout waitng 4 her ans😡
bt den geet took promise 4m maan dat he ill nt taked baby away 4m her nd maan agreed👍🏼
geet saw d mansion bt was not affectd 4m its royalty nd setteld herself der😊
geet was preparng bf nd maan got angry wit dat nd geet state was nt gd 2 c her love spendng his nite wit random gals😭
when maan askd abt mansion 4m geet her ans was superb👏
daadi came 2 knw geet 4m dev she went 2 meet maan nd der maan tld her evrything nd nw daadi is on her way 2 talk wit geet
waitng 4 nxt part di update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice
happy that geet answering back to maan
aadi ma is confuss when maan told her that geet is not ready for marriage

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