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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely start..
Maaneet engaged and both going to meet..
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Congrats on new OS! Y no pm? Awsome title! Fab update! superbly written! Maaneet engaged! Maan calls her as he wants to meet her! Geet shy! Maan understands! They r excited to c each other! They get ready 4 their date bt r confused as they wt to look their best. Dadi n Annie tease Maan! Geeti is ready n Neha assures! Maan arrives at HH! He greets her parents! Geet comes n Maan mesmerised! they leave! update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start...
continue soon!!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

Maan drove her to band stand ,where he can enjoy the waves in utter silence with his love .He opened geet's side of car door and offerd his hand for support and geet shyly went with the moment . maan took her near the beach n said ,"sorry .
Geet gave him a quizzical look
Maan understanding said ," I didn't ask your choice for venue and chose according to my choice
Geet just smiled and said ," ur choice is quite complimenting ... Mr. khurana (naughtily )
Maan ,"ohh thank u soon to be mrs.khurana. (with a smirk )
and hugged geet and kisses on her hair.Geet just blushed hearing it
Maan ,"I love it ! when u blush ...(with a wink )
After listening geet blushed more like an apple and came out of the hug.
Maan and geet didn't realized they were still holding each other hand
Maan was caressing geet's hand and said ,"I am loving this moments of my life ... I never knew life could be this beautiful with you by my side .
On this geet gave a shy smile to him
Maan ,"geet
Geet sees maan
Maan ,"I love you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. I don't know whether its too early or not but I want you near me 24x7... My ears want to hear you words melody ... My eyes wanna see the beautification of god in form of you ...i want you to see, stand by me in my all thick and thin... I want you in my bed next to me when I come to sleep and I want to see u sleeping on my heart when I open my eyes...and I want sooo many things which words cant describe ,only action can. (and wink at her )
Geet got blushy blushy that time
Maan ,"geet say something . I want to hear you dear ?
Geet ," what should I say ?
Maan ," anything dear ... you can say anything to me dear (with a teasing tone) ... do u want me to elaborate ?(with a teasing smirk )
Geet got scarlet listening this
Maan ,"geet ... I want this 3 months to pass fast .
(on this geet smiled to him )
Maan ," do u know why ?
Geet ,"yes ... because for our marriage .
Maan ," yes ... you are very near darling ,but its not the actual reason .
Geet just blush hearing sweet endearments from him
Maan came near geet's ear and said ," do u want to know , the real reason ?
Geet nods her head
Maan nips her earlobe
Geet clutches her suit as this is the first time maan is coming this close to her and caught hold of her breath .
Maan whishpers," due to our first night and licks her earlobe and kiss on her check.
Geet left the breath she was holding and register his words and blushed hearing his wish .
Maan ," geet I feel like only I am saying .(me thinking maan ko geet ki adat kab se lag gai :p)
Geet after seeing the time says ," its already 7.30,don't you think, we should get going ."
Maan ," in this such romantic moment ,you wanna go home . ( in an irritated tone )
Geet ," nahi ... Wo
Maan ," after dinner I will leave you to your home . dnt worry ( in a bit cold mood )
Geet didn't know what to do as maan was getting up from the rocks but they didn't notice still they were holding each other hands .
maan was just waiting for geet to stand but geet got so nervous from his tone that tears came in her eyes ... maan was a bit irritated but cant see geet like this
maan ," now why are you crying dear ?
geet ," why are you angry , I just said we should move home as mama papa will be waiting and its getting dark also.
(that hit his ego )
maan ," geet I have taken permission and what do u mean ? u don't trust me (in a bit angry mood)
geet ," nahi . I was just saying.
maan ," leave it geet ...i think we should get going and moves to his car
geet and maan sat in the car and maan just drove in anger and left geet at her home .
geet comes home a bit disappointed but act as if everything is fine before her parents after spending some good few minutes with them and moves to her room.
maan in bad mood moves to his mansion and that time only he saw dadi watching her favourite serial with annie and that time he hears a line the actress of that seial says to her friend ," why are men so complicated .. they don't understand us that we cant speak our mind all the time ... but uff they cant understand it ...?
Maan's mind register these line and he starts moving to his room still angry with geet .
He started his lappy and start doing his work but his concentration was there ... again and again geet's teary face came infront of him
Maan ," damn !!!!!!!!!!!! now my mind cant think anything other than her
Here geet was very sad not understanding what to do playing with phone in her hand.
And that time maan called her ...


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Edited by goldenmoon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Nice update...
Their confession is out of the world...
Loved Maaneet moments😳

Maan bhi na...aisa kaisa gussa hojatha hain..
maan ki class leni padegi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: svani

Nice update...

Their confession is out of the world...
Loved Maaneet moments😳

Maan bhi na...aisa kaisa gussa hojatha hain..
maan ki class leni padegi...

yes ,we will definately take maan's class but later 😉
thanks for your like and comment ... hope you are enjoying this os 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update maan loves geet n the confession was so beautiful but our shy geet didnt say anything maan is angry with her now poor girl dont know what to do thnx 4 update eagerly waiting 4 next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nice😳
maan is talking too much🤣
ufff...yeh maan ka gussa😒
eagerly waiting for nxt part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome part.. loved Maaneet moments.. oops fight ho gayi..

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