MG~ FF~The Jinx ~THREAD-8~ UPDATED Pt 78 / Pg 118 / 31st Dec....... - Page 6

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congratzz for te new thread
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wow lovely heart winching emotional update..te way my maaneet sleeping in each other arms was lovely blissful moment..te way geet admiring my maan ki each features and my maan was caressing her was lovely..but wen both realize wat they doing, they were shock,omg geet ki gussa and her words which piercing his heart like thousand needles was lovely heart winching..te way my maan ki outburst showing how much he repenting in his guilty..te way he even ready to die in his guilty but geet ki ignorance was killing him..te way my maan was adamant to leave his angels wen they need him most was lovely emotional..i love te update so much
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superb update... Maaneet r fightng.. Geet s hurtng maan by words.. Continue soon vl b waitng
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WOW!! awesome update...loved it...

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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 66



Part - 67


Maan's heart cried seeing her like this ,, he didn't want to hurt her but situation forced him to behave that way ,, she was cursing herself without any reason ,, it was he who was at fault ,, she was only bearing pain coz of him nd he wanted to save her nd Manu from all pains nd worries ,, he was ready to bear anything for them nd this anger of Geet was nothing ,, he wd bear all her wroth but he wdn't leave her nd Manu alone ,,, never ,, he sat near her .

Maan: Geet , don't curse urself ,, i'm here nd pour out ur anger on me ,,but don't say anything bad for u .

Geet plz get up ,, u r not well ,, u r operated nd had fever whole night ,, think about Manu ,, he needs u Geet ,, why r u tourturing ur self ,, Geet plzzz let me help u nd Manu ,, at least think about Manu , who is here to look after him .

Geet trust me ,, I just helped u to give some relief from cold nd pain ,, I didn't cross my limit ,, I didn't know when I slept ,, u wr in fever nd Manu was alone ,, how cd I leave u both in that condition ?

Geet didn't react ,, she was sitting with lower head nd tears wr flowing from her eyes which aching Maan's heart ,, this stress nd tension was not good for her .

Maan: Geet plz utho yahan se ,, esse khud ko exhort matt karo ,, u need rest nd care ,, plzzz Geet for u , for Manu ,, plzz tumne dusron ke liye etna compromise kiya thoda apne aur apne Manu ke liye bhi ker lo ,, plzzz Geet .

On her helpless state nd situation she cried out loud .. ye bebesi meri hi kismat mei ku hei ?

Maan heart sank on her broken state ,, he engulfed her ... G e e t,, plzz don't say this ,, shant ho jao ,, tumhari ... Manu ...

His words struck in his throat listening Manu's cry ,, he woke up listening Geet's cry nd their convo ,, seeing her Mommy crying badly he too started crying in fear ,, Maan left Geet nd rushed to Manu to calm him ,, took him in his arms nd tried to pasify him .

Maan: Manu ,, SSShhh ,, baby ,, don't cry .. What happened ?

Manu sobbed : mo mmy ,, mo mmy .

Geet came in sense seeing Manu crying ,, he frightened seeing her like that ,, she wiped her eyes nd garnered herself ,, Maan brought Manu near her ,, she gestured manu to come in her arms but Maan stopped her .

Maan: Geet 1st get up from floor nd sit in ur bed ,, it's not good for u to sit like this ,, u wr shivering with cold at night ,, come nd sit in ur bed with manu ,, i'm going to bring his milk ,, come, give me hand .

He held her hand to give her support ,, Geet tried to snap him but Maan tightened d hold .. G e e t plzz .

She got up nd sat in her bed ,, manu was sobbing ,, Maan covered her with blanket nd brought manu to washroom , he woke up nd need to freshen up .

Maan: sshhh ,, don't cry baby ,, see ,, mommy is fine now ( he wiped his eyes nd pecked his cheek) ,, 1st my baby freshen up nd then he'll take his milk ,, Ok.

He settled Manu near Geet in blanket nd went to prepared his milk ,, he made coffee for him nd Geet nd filled Manu's bottle with milk ,, came back in bed room nd handed manu his bottle.

Maan: here is my baby's milk ,, Geet ur coffee .

Geet didn't budged Maan shook his head helplessly nd requested her again ,, he understood that he had to face her rejection .

Maan: Geet ,, u have to be cure fast to look after Manu so plzz think for him not for me ,, have ur coffee .( he forwarded d mug nd she took that silently having no option )

Manu was throwing d blanket with his legs nd Geet was covering him back but he did again ,, Maan was sitting in sofa nd smiling at his cutie .

Manu: mommy ,, no blan ket ,, it's walm .

Geet covered him again nd started sipping her coffee ,, she was sitting silently nd avoiding Maan not giving him any look nd even didn't thank him for coffee ,, Manu stopped sucking his milk .

Manu: mommy why al u clying ? u have fevel ,, pain ?

Geet sniffed but didn't reply ,, what to say to a baby ? but something caught her eyes when Manu threw d blanket again feeling warmth ,, 2 blankets ..? matlab kal raat wo sach mei uski tabiyat jyada kharab thi aur Maan ko apna guest room ka blanket add kerna pada usse thand se bachane ke liye ,, reality hit her ,, she didn't remember d whole thing coz of meds effects , fever nd body pain ,, she only remembered that she was shivering with cold nd fever ,, she asked for meds nd Maan gave her ,, few talks with him nd then nothing ,, means she was not well nd he was with her to take care of her .

She was muddling with her mind nd argued .. but why he shared d bed nd came close to her like that .. God!! They wr sleeping gluing to each other ,, it's aweful ,,

She was sick nd was not in proper sense, but he was in sense nd aware , then why he came close to her ,, it's so disgusting sleeping like that ,, she felt a shiver in her body remembering their positions ,, she was lost in her thoughts nd didn't reply Manu .

Maan knew that she was disturbed ,, he too was feeling awkward remembering their closeness ,, he smacked his head inwardly for his carelessness nd cursed him ,, he wanted to make things normal between him nd Geet but here he destroyed everything in his carelessness ,, she was hurt again nd now he was again on square ,, even he scolded her nd threatened her ... Maan , u cn't do anything right ?

Manu: uncle Maan ,, milk finish ,, Mommy ,, talk to me ,, al u angly ? ( he made a puppy face)

Maan: no baby ,, she is not angry with u ,, she has fever ,, manu won't see ur gifts ? Today is Christmas baby ,,, Merry Christams my son . ( Maan pecked Manu's cheeks nd Manu returned him with a cute smile nd then to Geet)

Manu jumped down from bed at once ,, yeee ,, my santa gives me gift ,, he saw d gift on table nd grabbed that ,, brought that near Geet nd show her with joy ,, mommy ,, see my gift .

Geet sadly : yes baby ,, open it .

Manu: uncle , my gift .

Maan: yes baby ,, come nd opened it ,, let me see what ur santa gave u ?

Manu brought d big pack near Maan nd both opened that ,, manu saw d pic of car on d box nd shouted with joy .

Manu: yeee,, my big cal ,, mommy big cal ,, mommy it is like Alex's cal ,, see.

Geet gave a fake smile : yeah , ur big car like Alex ,, open d box baby .

Maan felt bad seeing Geet like that ,, she was not responding heartily to manu ,, not enjoying her child happiness .

Maan: Geet , share manu's happiness heartily ,, he is just a kid nd wants to share his happiness with u.

Geet didn't reply nd remained like that ,, manu opened d box nd took out d car ,, he jumped with joy after seeing his new big red car ,, showed Geet nd Maan again nd again ,, Maan showed him d remote nd told him to operate with remote ,, manu tried that nd shouting with joy ... booommm ,,,, boommm ,, go,,,go ,, he was moving behind his car nd started playing with that .

Maan smiled at his happiness nd took a breath of relief .. at least d lil kid was away from all pain nd got some happiness ,which soothe their hearts too .


Precap - illation ..


Part - 68






sorry for mistakes ...




Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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o babbie

kahaan hain

update karne gayi kya
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

o babbie

kahaan hain

update karne gayi kya


😊 nahi ,, bhatak rahi hu...
tum kahan ho..?
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Originally posted by: singh24


😊 nahi ,, bhatak rahi hu...
tum kahan ho..?



kisi ek jagah ruk aur thodi baat karke jaa
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



kisi ek jagah ruk aur thodi baat karke jaa


OK,, dil se per aao...

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