MG STORY *TAINTED ANGEL* updated part 8@102 18.4.15

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

h na😳

that's a nice name..yaar.! thanks ...!!

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: flowing_river
yeppie...sweta u did an exceptional job..⭐️
i can't believe it..u r so fast..itni jaldi likh bhi diya...
loved ur twist...now waiting for rest parts..
and yeah thanks for dedicating it to me...
as m not in to writing..but now attaching with this, m feeling very happy...😃

hehehhe u r welcome ..bas hogaya..concept tera hi tha..just maine thoda twist dala hai..!!!

and name bhi suggest karo

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flowing_river

@flowing_river

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta

that's a nice name..yaar.! thanks ...!!

yes trapped angel is perfect...liked it...
wht abt trapped angel and her savior...
dekhte hai or koi suggestion..verna ye sahi hai...

Edited by flowing_river - 10 years ago

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December04

@December04

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nice one sweets
And abt the title i found this in ur prologue :
Time out
or
burden or gifted

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

sounds very interesting..Pls cont soon.

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

congrats swetaa.

geet is bar dancer because of her step father. ab maan uske peecha pada hai😉

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

it seems intense story
loved the prologue
geet is bar dancer she became bar dancer because of her step father
she saw same man who following her because of him she left two bars and joined this bar..she walked past him with the fear and that man followed her but stopped by manager he asked the manager about the girl and came to know her name...he thrusted bundle of notes in manager hands and told him that he want that girl and he also dont want to see any one near her for ever
eagerly waiting for the story to unfold

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gunjar

@gunjar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Congrats on the new story sweta...
wow great concept yaar 👍🏼
geet a bar dancer...😲
she shiffted 2bars due to man following her butvhe reached here also..
omg the man is none other than MSK😲
ho god sweta the concept is just so unique..
eagerly waiting the story to unfold...
superb prolouge dear..👏
continue soon sweta..

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

nice prologue
waiting for update

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Mayuvani5

@Mayuvani5

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

New story keliye congos sweety...Nice concept.👏..Geet works in Bar because of her step father,,,,,,,,,,maan tho aisa follow kar raha hain Hutch ad ki tarah...where ever you go go, my network follows...

Update jaldi dena...😃