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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



yehi par hoon mahi


kya baat hai?



nothing just want to say hi ye rantna di kaha hai
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan



nothing just want to say hi ye rantna di kaha hai



patha nahi mahi. ek message bhi nahi chodi usne.


avi tujhe patha hai kya ratna ke baaremein?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111



patha nahi mahi. ek message bhi nahi chodi usne.


avi tujhe patha hai kya ratna ke baaremein?



bahot din bola tha her father is not well uske baad koi pm nahi hai
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my dear friends 🤗

updating


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part 49
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4228650/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-6-updated-pt-53-pg-136-30th-nov



Part - 50

Geet was startled nd turn a lil,, she gave a confusing look to him ,, she felt a churn in her tummy when find Maan behind her holding her dupatta ,, she looked in his eyes which wr full of emotions .

Maan came close to her nd knelt near her which startled her more ,, she was staring at him with open mouth ,, Maan garnered his courage .

Maan: Geet , there wr many Qs which wr eating me nd only u cn solve them .

Geet didn't react , only staring at him .

Maan: Geet , I know i'm pestering u , but I cn't bear any more ,, plzz solve this puzzled .

Geet composed herself : what do u want to know from me ?

Maan: it's regarding our unpleasant past ,, I .. I know it's hurting u but plzz trust me it's hurting me too .

Geet: Mr Khurana , I told u earlier too , plzzz don't ask any personal Qs from me ,, I don't want to talk about them,, sorry I don't want any talk on that part of life .

Maan: but that part of life affecting d present nd giving pain .

Geet: I don't think so nd if ur past life affecting u then I cn't help u , that was ur life nd u have to solve ur prob ,, plzz spare me , i'm not interested .

Maan: i'm doing that Geet , i'm trying to solve but every doubt ended at u .

Geet rudly: Mr Khurana ur trying to invade in my life forcefully ,, I won't bear it ,, i'm bounded coz of uncle nd aunty nd attending u , but it doesn't means u started interfering in my pvt life.

Maan: I know Geet that u r bearing me coz of Mom nd dad but it's also true that ur pvt life had affected by me, there wr many doubts nd only u cn solve those puzzled related to our life .( Geet gave a confusing look to him but her heart felt a fear )


Geet: i'm not interested in ur doubts Mr Khurana , nd now onwards plzz stay away from us ,, let me go.

Maan: No Geet ,, u have to reply me , I won't let u go .

Geet: i'm not in KM any more Mr , nd u cn't force me to act on ur wish .

Maan: i'm not forcing Geet , i'm requesting u ,, for god sake plzz solve this mystery which is eating me day n nyt ,, plzz Geet , I beg of u.

Geet shuddered ,, a shiver run through her body seeing him pleaded like this ,, he was not like this weak,, what he wanted to know now ? kahin... No,,, Be brave Geet.


Maan got up nd held her shoulders : Geet u have to reply me this time .

Geet coldly : what do u want to know ?

Maan looked painfully at her nd brought her in his bedroom ,, opened his wardrobe nd took out a pack ,, opened that nd there wr few things which shocked Geet ,, her heart sank nd she felt weak at her feet thinking how he got these things nd why he was carrying them with him ?


Maan: do u recognize these ?

Geet composed : yeah ,, my old bed-cover nd dress ,, why u carrying my old dress here , they r useless nd I dumped them with my old stuff.

Maan: don't u remember anything related to them ?

Geet gulped : there wr lots of things mr Khurana , what is special in those to remember ?

Maan opened her kurti : how it torn Geet ?

Geet: I din't know now ,, it was very old so it cd torn , what big in that , don't u have or saw any torn clothes ?

Now Maan shows his wallet to her nd gave a questioning look to her ,, he was reading her all expressions .

Maan: esse pahachanti ho ?

Geet: no.

Maan: it was mine .

Geet shrugged her shoulders : so , what cn I do in this ? Why r u wasting my time Mr Khurana ? let me go plzz ,, i'm not interested in ur crap .

Maan: i'm not wasting ur time ,, but u r hiding d fact .

Geet: enough Mr Khurana . ( she tried to go but Maan held her wrist nd pulled her to him ,,, trapped her between his arms he looked directly in her eyes)


Maan: u cn't go without answering me Geet ,, why my wallet was with ur clothes in ur cupboard ?

Geet gave a confusing look to him ,, she didn't know about this wallet but she felt a shiver with his sharp nd determined words ,, he was adamant to know .

Maan: bolo Geet , mera wallet tumhari cupboard mei tumhare kapdo ke sath kaise mila ?

Geet mumbled : mere kapdo mein ,, mai samjhi nahi ?


Maan looked deep in her eyes : Geet , I lost this wallet 3 yrs back ,, d day when I scold u in college nd u run away ,,, remembered ,,, he closed his eyes nd gulped hard in shame ,, there was pain on his face ,, Geet face turned pale remembering that day ,, she gave a teary look to him ,, left a deep sigh .

Geet: I don't want to remember anything ,, plzz let me go .

Maan: u have to Geet bcoz there r many things which u know but I don't ,, things which scattered u that time nd now me ,, u have to tell me what happened that night ?

Geet shuddered how cd she say what happened that night ? He was putting her in same pain again ,, how cd she tell him that he tore her , broke her entirely ,, he didn't remember but how cd she give words to her disaster ,, tears rolled down from her eyes ,, Maan's heart sank seeing her in tears ,, there was no need of words her tears wr enough ,, made him more guilty with this fear that he deffo hurt her deep ,, she was pouring out tears but he didn't has courage to console her nd to wipe her tears ,, his doubt nd fear stole all his strength nd he slumped on his knees near Geet's feet ,, his eyes wr wet , ashamed, he looked down nd asked in broken voice .

Maan: ,, kya mera doubt sahi hei ? Kya maine apni limit cross ki Geet ?

Geet was num at her place ,, words stuck in her throat ,, fleshes wr running in her mind ,, tears wr pouring down nd falling on Maan's hands which wr on his knees ,, he hide his face in his palm nd cried out .. How cd I ? how cd I do that ?

Geet sniffed nd wiped her cheeks ,, composed herself ,,she was not that weak Geet now ,, d sufferings nd hardship of life made her tough ,, she cd bear any pain now.

Geet: don't scrub old wounds Mr Khurana , it gives only pain to all ,, live ur life nd let me live mine peacefully.

Maan: I was arrogant , wrong nd egoistic but I never thought low like this ,, how I stoop so low ,, why did u bear it , why didn't u accuse me ,,why didn't u kill me that time Geet ,, God!!! There is no forgiving of my sin.


Precap---- Geet's outburst ,, Maan shocked ...

Part - 51
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4228650/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-6-updated-pt-53-pg-136-30th-nov



sorry for mistakes ...






Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan



bahot din bola tha her father is not well uske baad koi pm nahi hai




haan aur maine uski bday par wishes bhi bheja par reply nahi diya
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111




haan aur maine uski bday par wishes bhi bheja par reply nahi diya



hu how r u di
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice updte... eagerly waitin for nxt one
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111




haan aur maine uski bday par wishes bhi bheja par reply nahi diya


maine bhi msg kiya tha.. no reply..

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Posted: 10 years ago

🤗 Hi Mahi...

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