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The Jinx
An object or person that brings bad luck.
It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.
Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...
Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.
Part 48
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Maan nd Prem wr playing with Manu in lawn ,, U&A Sam wr also sitting lil away nd watching them ,, after some time manu got tired nd A Sam took him in her lap ,, talked to him nd gave choco to eat ,, Maan nd Prem wr slowly wakling in d lawn nd talking on business .
Prem knew that Khurana's wr Geet guardians nd she was with them befor coming to US ,, for him nd Heer too Manu's father was a mystery ,, Geet told them too that he was hr Sr nd left her when they got d fact about her prag yrs back ,, she didn't share her past with them too ,, seeing Maan love nd caring towards Geet nd Manu Prem thought that it might be possible that they knew about her relation , so decided to ask .
Prem: Mr Khurana , if u don't mind I want to ask something about Geet .
Maan looked at him curiously ,, his heart skipped a beat ,, he knew Prem nd Heer wr very close to Geet from start nd defo knew many things about her,, he too wanted to knew about her .
Maan: yeah , sure .
Prem: Mr Khurana ,, I knew Geet was like a family member for ur family nd spent many yrs of her in ur family ,, she grew up with u nd it was quiet natural that u knew many things about her , means her real family nd friends .
Maan: what do u want to ask mr Prem ?
Prem: aawwmmm ,, actually I want to ask about her BF ,, do u have any idea who was in her life when she was in college ?
Maan's face turned white ... What to say ? Geet had given a +ive note regarding his family to all but that was half truth ,, he nd DM never accepted her as their family member nd knowing about her life nd friends ... a big blow for him ,, he was in short of words .
Maan: aawwmm,, not much ,, she was a reserved girl nd spent most of her time in study ,, I was in hostle in diff college , so I don't have any idea about her friends , did she tell u something about that guy ?
Prem: no ,, she never shared that thing with us ,, Heer nd I asked many times but she refused to talk about him saying that if her own family discarded her then why not he ,, nd all ppl thought that she was a jinx , so it's better to live away from all,, she had her own small family now .
Maan heart sank thinking about Geet's pain , but he tried to get some dots which Prem knew about Geet nd Manu.
Maan: Mr Prem how do u know Geet nd from when ?
Prem: Heer was her classmate nd I was Sr to them in same uni .
Maan: OK , u know Geet coz of Heer ,, did Heer know about her preg from start ? Did Geet face something bad coz of her preg in college?
Prem: Not actualy ,, nobody knew about her preg in college in start ,, she left hostel after 1st sem ,, we came to know in her 3rd trimester ,, that time was tough for her with study , job nd preg ,, she requested her proff nd classmates to help her in last month nd after preg ,, she heard all d lectures on phone nd some details Heer nd other CM mailed her for study ,, she worked from home most of d time nd went once in a week to her office ,, she had good Co nd coz of her hard work all helped her ,,U&A Sam wr a big help for her ,, they brought her in college in their car ,, A Sam held manu in car in parking when Geet came for exams ,, after 2nd sem things became easy ,, things r diff here in US .
Maan: hummm, but it's very tough with a small baby to servive alone ,, thanks u all wr with her .
Prem: I thought u knew about her ?
Maan: no she didn't say anything about her preg .
Prem: don't know who was he , but i'm surprised why u nd ur family didn't know about her preg ? She was preg when she came US .
Maan's heart skipped few beats nd felt restless with this truth that she was preg when she came here , how ? Again he desired to know nd only Geet was d source who cd solve all his doubts , but she was not ready to talk ... What to do ? he excused himself nd came back to his home saying that he had some imp work at home ,, he loved sleeping manu in A swing near aunty Sam's nd came back quietly,, Prem went in to join Heer nd Geet , Geet asked about Maan nd Prem replied that he went to his home for some work .
Geet felt odd , Maan went without saying her nd didn't stop for lunch ,, she sensed something wrong in his behaviour nd decided to call him later ,, she sent lunch for U&A Sam nd brought Manu with her ,, they all took their lunch ,, Heer nd Prem left for movie after lunch nd Geet got busy in her work ,, she called Maan who picked d phone after few rings .
Maan: hello .
Geet: hello Mr Khurana ,, is everything fine , u left without taking lunch ?
Maan: yeah , i'm fine , wo I remembered to reply some imp mails so came back ,, sorry I didn't inform u nd came back .
Geet: did u take ur lunch ?
Maan: no , I was busy , but don't worry , i'll made something for me , thanks .
Geet: don't trouble urself , I had made for u too nd coming to give u.
Maan: Geet , it's OK, i'll manage , plzz don't trouble urself.
Geet: Mr Khurana , i'm bringing ur share of meal which I made for u ,, we r coming.
Saying this she cut d call ,, packed d lunch for Maan n,, she nd Manu who was up now came out to go Maan's home ,, Manu was super happy holding a small bag in his hand carrying a box in that for his uncle Maan ,, he was excited to go Maan's home .
There Maan became more restless ,, he wanted to cried out loud to know d truth which was eating him ,, he was on d edge ,, if he forced Geet he cd loose Manu nd Geet for future OR if he didn't then it wd eat him ,, d result was worst in each case '
He was sitting in his newly set basement for exercise nd Tai-chi ,, he did vigorous exercises to reduce his inner pain nd tension ,, Geet nd Manu came in ,, kept d bags in kitchen ,, Manu ran shouting uncle in his bedroom ,, Maan heard nd came out from d gym ,, lifted Manu in his arms ,, gave a painful look to Geet.
Maan: why u troubled ?
Geet: what happened ? u r not looking well ?
Seeing him like this she sensed that he was tense ,, d pain was clearly visible in his eyes ,, Maan turned his face nd started talking to manu.
Maan: my baby brought lunch for me ,, Thanku sunny ,, come i'll give u chocolates.
Manu: uncle Maan , ice-cream .
Geet: no Manu .
Maan: we'll baby, Geet plz.
Geet: don't spoil him Mr Khurana ,, it's not good for him .
Maan: what's wrong in that ,, he's only asking for an ice cream ,, babies like these things.
Geet: but these things making him demanding ,, which is not good .
Maan: Geet , u r thinking too much ,, i'll handle him ,, manu is a good baby nd never trouble his Mommy , right Manu ?
Manu: yeah ,, manu love mommy nd manu love uncle maan ,, he spreaded his arm and pecked maan's cheek .
Maan smiled nd Geet nodded disappointed ,, she was worried that this closeness nd pampering from Maan was going to trouble her ,, she had a very set life till now but now things started changing after meeting Maan ,, she was in a fix ,, one side she was bounded with favours of Khuranas nd other side her child's happiness ,, every mother wants to give all d happiness nd security to her child which Manu was getting now , but this thing cd hurt her deep ,, refreshed her wounds which she didn't want ,, only distance was a good option .
Geet: manu baby, come we have to go home now , i'll give u ice cream in home .
Maan: Geet, I have here , let him eat .
Manu gave a sweet smile to Maan nd Geet ,, Maan made him sit on d sofa ,, started his fav cartoon show T&J nd brought a small tub of choco-chip ice cream for him ,, Geet huffed nd sat on a chair ,, Maan gave a pleading look to her ,, Maan forgot his all pain seeing them near him ,, he opened d boxes nd gave a smile ,, served in a plate nd started eating .
Maan: Geet , if u didn't feel bad bringing meal for me then why u making issue over an ice cream , which is nothing infront of this favour ,, don't u like it , if I do or gave something to Manu ?
Geet fumbled: it's not like that mr Khurana but u r fulfilling his every demand nd this thing cn spoil him ,, i'm a single mother nd have my limitations ,, u r a millionaire , this thing nothing for u but after leaving u I have to manage alone ,, I don't want him to think beyond our capabilities ,, it's better to remain down to earth ,, aapke sochne aur jeene ke tareeke alag hein , aur humare alag ,, aapki life alag hei , humari alag .
Maan gulped hard knowing where she was hitting ,, he was a brat nd did whatever he wanted ,, she lived a life depend on his family ,, no demands nd choices even he made her life hard coz of his high ego ,, he cleaned his hands placing plates in sink ,, gave a look to Manu who was busy in TV nd enjoying his ice cream ,, Geet got up nd moved to collect d boxes to go back home but Maan held her dupatta's corner .
Precap - onset ...
Part - 50
sorry for mistakes ... *
Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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