MG~ FF~The Jinx ~ THREAD-6~ UPDATED Pt 53/ Pg 136/ 30th Nov........ - Page 39

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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part 46
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Part - 47

They wr checking nd listing d thing which he want nd manu was curiously watching all d things nd touching them ,, Geet was stopping him but manu was in his uncle Maan's house who gestured him to enjoy ,, they wr in d washroom nd Geet was checking d cabinet nd listing d items ,, her back was towards maan nd manu ,, Maan was looking at Geet nd in that period manu did his job ,, he turned d knobs one by one ... disaster ....Oh S*** ... OMG!!! ... Mannuuu ,, baby ...

There was water from many sides ,, shower , hand shower nd tap ,,, Maan held Manu in arms nd turned off d knobs but d damage had done ,, Geet was wet , d shower nd hand shower's flow drenched her ,, though she rushed away but got wet ,, bewildered she looked at manu nd then at maan who was holding manu after closing d knobs with shocked expressions ,, manu made a sad face nd was going to cry sensing that he did something wrong ,, Maan nd Manu's clothes also got some showers

Geet gave angry glares to Manu ,, she was stopping him again nd again but he did d blunder .

Geet: manu ,, what ...

Maan: Geet plzz don't scold him ,, see he's going to cry nd feeling sorry .. he's just a small kid ,, plzz .

Geet: mr Khurana , don't spoil him ,, u r pampering him too much .

Maan: Geet ,, plzz if u want then scold me ,, it was my fault who told u to help me ,, na mai kahata , na tum aati aur na ye sab hota ,, meri galti hei .

Geet was staring at Maan ,, is this d same man who didn't left any chance to scold her nd cursed her ,, what made him like this humble ,, today he was saving her kid nd asking to scold him not to manu .

Maan pleaded again nd whispered Manu to say sorry to mommy nd manu meakly mumbled ,, solly ,, solly mommy .

Geet came in reality nd gave a helpless look to Manu nd then to Maan who also mouthed sorry ,, Geet huffed nd looked for a towel ,, got that from towel rod ,, wiped manu's face nd hands ,, forwarded to Maan to wipe him ,, Maan took that but he saw that Geet's shirt was fully wet nd stuck to her body ,, Geet to felt embrassed nd turned her side ,, she cn't go out like this nd to her house is next to impossible in this state ,, Maan too realised her misery .

Maan: Geet , i'm bringing my shirt ,, change in to that nd hang it to dry .

He went out having Manu with him ,, opened his cupboard nd took out his white shirt ,, went back to washroom nd handed to Geet ,, having no option Geet changed that .

There Maan was changing his shirt nd Manu was sitting on d bed quietly with saddie face .

Maan: manu don't be sad baby ,, it's OK now , but don't do it again nd obey ur mommy.

Manu: mommy is angly .

Maan: no , she is not ,, u said sorry .

Maan sat near him nd cupped his face nd pecked manu's forehead ,, u r a good boy ,, mommy won't scold u now ,, now smile my baby ,, Manu gave a faint smile which pleased maan's heart ,, he took him nd come out from room ,, after few min Geet came out ,, Maan saw her nd skipped few breaths ,, their eyes met for a friction of sec ,, Gosh !! she was looking so s*** in his shirt with wet open hair ,, he gulp hard nd smacked his head inwardly ,, scold him for thinking like this for Geet .

Geet too felt odd ,, she saw something in Maan's eyes which made her restless ,, she gathered her courage nd spoke slowly .

Geet: wo ,, manu too need a change ,, I have to go home .

Maan: huummm , lets go , nd we'll come back after informing U&A Sam too .

They wr out in porch where maan's car too parked ,, he didn't touch that .

Maan: Geet leave ur car here nd take mine ,, u cn take it back at night . lets take a drive in that ,, it's left handed nd take some time to me to be habitual .

Geet: OK ,, let''s go ,, we r getting late .

All settled in Maan's SUV .. Manu was in Maan's lap ,, Geet took d driving seat nd they wr in her house in 2 min .

Maan: manu baby, do u like this car ?

Manu chirped : yeah ,, it is so big .

Maan: really ,, thank u .

Geet went in taking manu with her ,, she changed his lil wet cloths ,, maan went to meet U&A Sam ,, he informed them that Geet nd manu wr going to help him in his new house nd hell bring their dinner on time .

U Sam: u don't worry son ,, we'll manage here .

Maan: no uncle plzz ,, i'm just lil away from u at walkable distance ,, plzz , don't trouble u nd aunty ,, i'll be here on time .

U sam: thanks son ,, u too r like Geet , very caring . God bless u son .

Maan: thanks uncle .

Maan's eyes burn nd turned wet ,, U Sam praised nd compared him with Geet , but he was nothing infront of Geet ,, she was an angle ,, very caring nd loving ,, he only gave pains to her nd his family ,, he shied nd went to Geet's house where Geet was keeping few things in a bag for manu after changing his dress nd now manu was playing with his cars sitting on sofa in living room .

Maan: ready manu ,, Geet ho gaya , chalen ?

Geet: haan , let me informe U&A sam.

Maan: I did that nd told him that i'm bringing their meal .

Geet: u , why ?

Maan: it's OK Geet ,, they knew me now ,, come ,, lets go sunny .. a treat from me too .

They wr back in Maan's house ,, all wr in big nd btful kitchen ,, Maan gave his ipad to manu to play angry birds ,, settled him on chair near them in kitchen ,, Geet took our d things from fridge nd instructed Maan ,, he was helping her nd watching how she was doing ,, they made many things ,, Geet packed for U&A Sam nd Maan nd manu went to hand them by walk ,, Geet secured d kitchen behind them , with in 10 min both wr back ,, Geet served for all nd they took their dinner in Maan's new house ,, Maan was feeding Manu too from his plate ,, after dinner Maan didn''t allow Geet to wash dishes nd he did that in dishwasher ,, Geet only instructed him .

Maan: thanks a lot Geet ,, I think i'll be perfect in few days in ur good training ,, one more thing ... washing machine .

Get smirked ... Maan Singh Khurana .. d rich brat , learning household works form d girl which was a nothing for him ... it's true .. Time is powerful .

Maan: I know u r laughing at me i'm a bad learner na .

Geet: no , lets go ,, Maan Singh Khurana is d best nd choose d best ,, who cn say u bad ?

Maan felt her taunt but that didn't hurt him ,, he was happy that she was responding , no matter how ,, her anger nd taunts r enough for him ,, Manu slept in sofa nd maan told her to make him sleep in bed room ,, he let d door open ,, if he wake up in mid sleep ,, they wr in kitchen nd Geet showed him how to use WM ,, she took a pen nd paper nd wrote few imp steps for some works ,, stuck that on fridge to remind Maan ,, d major things wr done nd now d time of saying Good Night .


Precap ---- Maan met with Prem nd Heer ...


Part - 48



sorry for mistakes ...


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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at least manu happy
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😊 Updated ..Pt 47...Pg 63



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😃
Haiye mera Maanu😆

aissi masti roz kiya karo😆

mast tanna mara Geet ne👍🏼

yaar Babs, kitna kaam karwati ho Geet se😲

bohut ho gaya ab ha.. wo waha kaam nahi karegi😲

Let Maan do some work now.. mujhe accha lagega if he overflows the washing machine😆

nice one
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wow awesome update time is really powerful. Maan meeting Prem and Heer hopefuly he will come to know more about geets trouble while she was alone and pregnant with manu..
Edited by change12 - 10 years ago
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Congrats for new thread...
Maan like her but can't say..I think Manu bring them together..
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Nice update. Maan is slowly falling for Geet
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awsemm update geet helping maan and maan drooling on wet geet

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