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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monikaarora

amazing update dear...just loved it... ❤️ .. ..continueee sooonnn ..can't wait for next part..

thanx dear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Welcm dear.🤗
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Originally posted by: vandy28

as u wish ma'am😆😆


That's cool.😎
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I m gong to sleep,whn it 'll be updated,pls tell me.😃
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Nowadays workload is getting too much...lots of project to be submitted when me n maan were completing them in library ...when suddenly my friend rasha asked me n maan for some help...she was surfing project related matter on net...when both went there n helped her then she offered the PC she was sitting on for our work ...v both got settled then next thing infront of me took me back to my last few week thinking for which I was confused n don't know what to do... ...pc wallpaper has one quote ...

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When I was thinking about it ...i felt maan was to gazing the screen too seriously...

I asked him...do u agrees with this...?

Maan was shocked...may b not expecting me to ask him such thing that too directly...he looked at me n then at desktop wallpaper...may b...m not sure

U not sure about soulmate or about letting them go...I asked my doubt as not getting any reply from GD from last three months were scaring me...does this mean its end of our friendship n my one sided love...or m letting him go...not doing enough effort as in past had done lots of mistake...but I think maan was more confused than me...he in return asked me than answering me...

What u think geet...before I can answer... comes our savior rasha ...she answers our doubt...

She said..."what to think so hard about it...If u think that someone is special then don't let them go atleast try ur best n tell them ur feeling n thoughts n let them decide what they want...u just never neglect them or give importance to ego and anger...even if he or she is not ur soulmate but u can have very special friendship in ur life...what say guys..."

There cum her devil gang, vandy n amna... vandy asked her...kya baat h rasha kab se tu itni badi baat karne lagi...rasha replied... humesha se as i m best...n I m too good n showed them her invisible collar ... ...bt amna replied...credit goes to us devil...because u r our friend...n amna n vandy hi fi...

But they answered all my query...I just left from there n told them will continue rest of work tomorrow to my surprised even maan agreed n left...

I decided to go home n think what to do next...

After reaching home...rasha talk keep playing in mind... tell them ur feeling n thoughts n let them decide what they want...so I decided...i will drop him a mail telling about my feeling for him n I logged in...n surprisingly that day he is online too...yes...GD is online after so many days or say months...n both typed mesg together n sent

sorry GD n Sorry moti...

n i started laughing seeing this...n later i cried...various time in past it used to happen this way...we both used to mesg same thing at same time...this make my fear vanishes away...our friendship is still same nothing has changed...

again v typed same mesg...i need to tell u something imp...

u say frst

nhi u say moti...

geet: i want to meet u...i know u r from Delhi n me shifted to Delhi too...

GD: what n u hides it from me

g: actuallly i wanted to surprise u ...i know u watch all world cup match in xyz place...so thinking to surprise u there n see your reaction as world cup in starting from next month...

GD: hm...so want to wait till world cup or u want to meet this weekend?

geet:this weekend...

GD: ohk...meet me tomorrow at abc place around 4pm...thats ohk with u...?

geet : yeah thats cool...direct metro from my place...

Gd: ohk...i missed u

geet : i missed u too...

Gd : gtg now...dadi calling talk to u tomorrow...bye

geet ; ohk bbye


yey yey...me meeting him...tomorrow me gonna meet my GD...i will confess my feeling for him tomorrow itself...

i reached their 10 min earlier to the time...n when i entered pizza hut ...i bumped into someone...I looked above...n he is maan

oh god agar GD ko pata chala he will get angry again but how can i avoid him too...

I said hi...u here... he replied y i cant cum here...i said no...i mean u alone or cum with friends...he replied my friend is coming... what about u ?

Meeting my friend too..ohk...chlo will c u then...n I left from there


I sat on empty table n checked the time...I already logged in on gtalk n told him I m already there...waiting for him...he told me... he is there too...n asked which corner i m sitting on n what's me wearing...I replied m near window side...m wearing...black jeans n white top...he said he wll cum

i was nervous so to distract myself ...m looking out of window when someone tapped me...my heart beat gone high..I take long breath n turned...n then...

U

U...a sound echoed there...

u r moti...u r gurudutt...

we both were shocked because infront of me is...khadus...aka maan singh khurana who is my gurudutt...god m confused...so many name of same person

v r still standing n still shocked... n than v both composed n sat in front of eachother...v keep looking at eachother as if seeing first time but fact is v r not able to digest the fact...v were always together in college ...always on chat...still this...

after few min ...he asked me with shockin expression...u called me khadus...n listening to that I laughed uncontrollably...he also joined me...that awkward wall break between us and v r back to being moti n GD... n we talked alot about college n classmate...

Then suddenly i asked him...how u can stop talking to me like that...aisa b koi krta h...

he looked at me n said...geet i will frank with u as I m with my moti always...I was hurt that day...that somebody else is taking my place... u used talk about your khadus too much...n from long i was hiding my feeling which was geting hurt in this process...i love u moti...evn without meeting u ...without seeing u ...I fell in love with u long back...but I was not sure but when u used to talk about khadus i got scared ...my only friend...my first love gonna b snatch away from me...n rather than confessing my feeling ...I opt to stay away from u ...but then that library incident make me realized my love is so strong for u n deserve a chance...that's y I wanted to confess my love for u...i love u lots...please give me a chance...i don't want to lose u...

I was shocked...when he tapped my hand...i said maan u can talk for so long...never heard this much from u in past 5mnths...

He was shocked...n angry too...then I realized I said wrong thing at wrong time again...making puppy face i looked at him n said...sorry guru...oops...maan

now can u reply...

i grinned n forward him a card...he looked at me n open it...


i planned to confess today my feeling for u...but u did before me...

even i planned d same ...maan smiled

so u were planning to propose me without any gift...how kanjus...u r kanjus too n here I made card myself for u...i said to him

Who said i don't have any gift for u...n y u behaving like typical gf...asking for gift always...maan replied

bt u didn't gave me any gift yet...n u know i like remembrance of that moment...m not asking gift guru but a remembrance...waise b now that u confessed me about ur feeling then automatically I become ur gf so i will behave like one...give me gift or i will think about being ur gf or not...i pouted after saying that...

maan grinned like fool and start laughing....i asked him what happen...y u laughing...

nahi ...m just thinking whom u r trying to over smart...i know u more than u...u r never into gift...u just trying to change the topic...but i do have a gift for u n that too i made it myself...

n he opened his bag pack...n their come a book type thing...but first page is too decorative...geet just snatched n got shocked seeing the cover...

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It was beautifully decorative cover written OUR STORY...when she opened...she got another shocked...it was full of their memories...

World cup pic on first page...second page has pic of their fav rajma...n similarly there r all beautiful moments or memories which bind them together...in last there were beautifully written mesg...

Life is not about a hot girl by ur side, bt about a pagli friend with whom u can discuss all silly thngs ...it's about goodmorng n gud ngt mesgs who show u r remembered by sum1...it's about their longing to talk to each other even after chatting for hours...it's about not talking for 3 months but about checking each day mail to c her mesg...it's about missing her daily in every minute of ur life...Life is all about d small moments...-which is special only because u have special person with u ...with whom u wanted to spend ur life with...be mine forever...moti...(written by me...no net😆😆😆)

i was just speechless after reading that mesg n tears start to roll down...i just looked at maan...n just held his hand tightly n said...

Zindagi ki har suba tum se shuru hogi aur har raath tum par khatam... me only urs ...maan ki geet...

I love u maan...u r mine... my gurudutt...

maan was feeling out of world...he never though his love will be reciprocate with same feeling n love...he hold her hand n said...geet this is best moment of life...just perfect...n he clipped the card on last page of scrapbook...n said now our story is perfect too...


The End



Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb part Vandy dear.🤗 Loved the cute frndshp of Maan(gurudutt) and Geet(moti).😛 They are so innocent and true lovers,just didn't undrstnd their feelings early.😊I knew Maan was not that khadus and Geet ws super cute.😳 I love Rasha's words,👏 So devil gang is also there.😆 Pics are awesome.😃You have written a beautiful story dear Vandy,loved it.😳
Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
updated n waiting fr ur commnt😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey yaar I will give u detailed comment tmrw...😳😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

wohahah first again

And me second😛🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ferii

Hey yaar I will give u detailed comment tmrw...😳😉

thts ohk bt jus read startn of updte nah... tell me abt tht nah

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