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Read d entire thing in one go...
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congrats on yr new thread...nice update
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At last sam's true colours are out.
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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part 37
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4220267/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-5-updated-pt-43-pg-121-17th-nov?pn=10


Part - 38

Maan became furious at her blunt replies nd most imp she was openly refusing him ,, he felt insulted in front of his family even she was saying that was not serious in their relation ,, his mind spun nd thought that how fool he was ,, expected nd boasted so much ,, he was a high headed arrogant person nd her behaviour hit his ego .

Maan: means ur wr playing with my emotions from start ?

DM,Yash nd Rashi wr watching silently nd understood that here Maan was wrong to choose a wrong girl ,, he didn't know anything about her nd decided to move on with her .

Sam: correction , it was u who start this game ?

Maan: what ? game ,, u r calling it a game ?

Sam : yes , it was u who bet with Dev that u wd win my heart nd make me ur GF ,, d most bful girl of college ,, m i wrong MK ? Don't say no ,, coz after accepting ur confession of love he paid u d money 20K nd a champagne bottle as reward ,, now it's my turn to play .

Maan got a shock , he never thought that his lil friendly challenge turned like this .

Maan: that was a friendly challenge with Dev , I like u from start ,nd I was serious.

Sam: forget it , but i'm not ,, 20k na now u'll pay me 2 cr .

All: what !!!

Sam: esay ,, esay ,, kam hei to badha deti hun ,, tumhe kya lagta hei bas tum hi khel sakty ho , huuhh .

She opened her purse nd took out an envelop nd forwarded to Maan with an evil smile .

Sam: it is ur choice that u want to see them alone aur with family ,, I cn post them on FB to make u famous in a day .

Maan looked at her nd then at d envelop , opened that nd there wr their pics in a very compromising conditions ,, he kept that back shocked nd looked at her bewildered ,, she was smiling at him raising her brows .

Sam: what do u think , others r puppets nd dance at ur finger ,, now show ur power nd money nd don't try to play smart MK , ur one mistake nd d pics wr on net ,, it doesn't matter to me ,, give me only fame nd I cn cash that too ,, I cn accuse u for molestation nd drag u in women cell .

Maan groaned in anger nd raised his hand to slap her but she raised her finger at him nd threatened .

Sam: don't MK , if u try to harm me , i'll make u rot in jail .

Yash too scold Maan , he was sensing d gravity of situation ,, d girl was full planned nd took advantage of Maan's foolishness ,, Yash asked Maan to give him d envelop but he step back nd refused ashamed.


Maan: no dad plzz ,, plz I cn't give these .

He step back turned nd went away from there defeted with lower head ,, Rashi nd DM looked at him pained nd then at d girl with disgust but their son was also at fault ,, Yash understood d intention of d girl nd came in a businessman mod.

Yash: OK , miss now have a clear talk ,, what do u want ?

Sam: simple business , give nd take .

Yash: how much ?

Sam: I already said 2 cr .

Yash: where r all d rest pics nd hard copies ?

Sam: I'll give that hand to hand .

Yash what if , u started to cheat again ?

Sam: don't worry , I won't cross ur path nd u mine ,, but what if u nd ur son try to harm me after some time ?

Yash: I don't want ur shadow near my family ,, better u leave this place .

Sam: why sd I ? I cn assure u nd u have to trust me .

Yash: OK deal , aur if u try to play smart then keep it in ur mind , I won't live u alive,, so it is better for u to forget MSK's name forever.

Sam: done .

She got up , took out a slip from her purse nd kept on table .

Sam: this is my a/c number nd phone number,, when all money come in my ac , all d things will be in ur hand in an hr .(she came out with a winning smile ,, called some one nd said ,, completed last shoot)

Yash: remember , no smartness.

She nodded nd went out giving a smirk to Rashi nd DM ,, both wr toungue tight ,, what to say nd to whom ? Yash was sitting lost in thoughts , disheartened ,, pindrop silence prevailed there ,, DM nd Rashi wr fearing for Maan ,, Yash deffo scold him for this , but they wr drown in guilt after listening Yash's saddened words.

Yash: my Geet was right ,, she was right nd tried to save d dignity of this family but all accused her nd discarded her ,, now think who was a jinx for d family ? hope u all'll enjoy this ignominy,, i'm too responsible nd sent her away .

Yash got up, took d slip nd went to his study with hang head nd shoulders ,, Rashi nd Dadima wr looking at his retreating figure with wet eyes ,, DM was tongue tight , she was d strong supporter of Maan nd favoured him always ,, for her he was d heir of Khurana Khandan nd loved him blindly ,, she was equally at fault like Maan.

Rashi got up nd went to study nd find Yash busy in his laptop ,, he was checking d amount from where he cd transferred d money,, he wanted to close this shameful chapter d very next day ,, Rashi placed his hand on his shoulder nd pressed that to make him calm ,, she always supported his decision but became weaknd mum once nd choose her son over Geet ,, she knew that Yash love Geet like his daughter but gen kept quiet to keep peace in d family ,, he brought Geet with a high head but seeing DM nd Maan's reaction he was disappointed ,, he cn't send her back or to any orphanage ,, it was against his self respect nd ego , but today all wr feeling guilty not trusting her .

Rashi: Yash , i'm sorry .

Yash: why Rashi ?

Rashi: I disappointed u .

Yash: u don't , I know u wr also helpless in front of Ma and ur son like me , u too tried to balance d things for d family ,, he patted her hand .

Jao aur dekho usse, kahin gusse aur josh mei kuch aur galat na ker baithy aur baat hath se nikal jaye ,, jo hona tha wo ho chukka mujhe shanti se ess matter ko solve kerne do , mujhe aur koi galti nahi chahiye.

Rashi understood nd went out to check Maan ,, she tried his phone but he was not picking d call ,, she checked his room , gym nd sent servants to search him in d house , but he was not there ,, d servant informed her that his car in not in KM ,, rashi nd DM panicked ,, they wr fearing that in his anger nd disturbed state of mind he cd do anything wrong which wd put d family in more trouble ,, Yash was already very disturb nd broken ,, both wr trying his phone again nd again but result was zero .

There Yash called Adi gave him d ac number of sam nd narrated him how to transfer d money in that ac from his nd KC's diff accounts d very next day ,, rashi fearfully informed him about Maan nd this thing made him more tense ,, he thought that Maan deffo creat some prob in his rage nd that shameless girl got d chance to play with his respect ,, he too tried to contact him to make him understand but Maan didn't reply ,,

When Maan didn't come nd reply for many hrs all became restless ,, Yash was a very soft heartened person nd this was enough to broke him ,, he became tense nd started sweating ,, Rashi nd DM became panic ,, brought him at once in hospital nd admitted him ,, they wr trying Maan again but useless ,, Yash strictly refused to contect police coz they dug d roots nd some awful things cd come out .


Precap ---- an awful defeat ...


Part - 39





sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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hi js read Pt 37 nw! Thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Superbly written! sorry 4 late likes n comments! Blast into the past! Maan wanted his parents choose between him n Geet! They were helpless! Dadi supported Maan! Geet made it easy! she left! Maan joining KC ! He was serious abt Sam n wanted 2 marry her! Sam wanted to b a model n actress! Maan introduces her to his family! Sam arrives in a mini dress! Maan stunned n questions her! Maan takes her 2 his family! Yash disgusted! Dadi n Rashi shocked! Sam rude 2 Maan! she doe snt want to get married nw! She wants 2 wait for 5-6 yaers! Maan surprised! Everyone wonder wt Maan saw in her! update soon!
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ye kyaa maaneet hai? chasing each other?😆
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babbie, red kyu ho? kachua maharaj is PRASANN? ohh noo...
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Originally posted by: mauaa

babbie, red kyu ho? kachua maharaj is PRASANN? ohh noo...


🤗 Hi kiddo...
red.. nahi to...
fir se check karo...😊

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🤗 hello indu nd Avi...

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