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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n excellent update! brilliantly written. Yash is upset n leaves 4 the office! Geet getting Manu ready n Maan comes! he admires Geet! she is looking pretty! HE offers 2 help bt Geet adamant! She says he can handle it! Maan gets his way! The leave! Manu spends time with Maan while she is busy at the embassy! Manu asleep! Geet asks if he was fine! Maan says all ok! Maaneet go n have lunch! Manu want coke! Maan goes to get it! he drops coke on Sam! Manu upset! Maan angry n rude 2 Sam n her hubby! Maan gets coke 2 Manu! Maan is relived Geet was nt der! Want to know abt Maan n Sam's past! Seems like she hurt him! update soon! terrific precap
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The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part 31
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4210147/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-4-updated-pt-36-pg-120-9th-nov?pn=41

Part - 32


If it was another situation he didn't know what he had done but now he was with manu nd Geet so buried all his anger nd venom in his heart ,, soon these cuties' togetherness sooth his burning heart ,, he enjoyed d lunch with them,, feeding manu with his hand having him in his lap was d most precious n enjoyable thing for him nd soon he forgot with whom he was collied .

Day passed ,, Geet did her lil shopping nd all came back after few hr ,, Geet changed manu's dress , gave him milk nd made him to take rest for some time befor going to function ,, Geet took out d gifts which she bought for all ,, She handed Rashi a btful clutch nd a chanel perfume for Yash ,, she liked both nd thanked her kissing her forehead lovingly ,, Geet showed her Maan nd Dadima's gift ,,, a Rolax watch nd a hand purse ,, she brought giftes for Nakul nd Satish too with lots of swiss chocolates for their kids ,, Rashi was overwhelmed with Geet's affection for all ,, Geet handed her Dadima's gift to give her .

Rashi: beta tum khud do na unhe

Geet: nahi aunty mujhme himmat nahi hei unhe kuch dene ki ya baat kerne ki ,, plzz aap hi de do .

Rashi understood her hesitation n fear to talk Dadima nd agreed ,,both talked for some time nd then Rashi left telling her to take some rest ,, Maan went to his study nd got busy in calls nd conference meeting ,, he instructed for d next day to Adi nd Shasa ,, it was eve ,, he checked d time nd came to ask Geet at what time she wanted to go for d Mehndi function .

When Maan entered in d room nd find Geet ready,, she was looking very beautiful nd he cdn't stop his heart to adore her inwardly... Beautiful ,, a sweet smile crept on his lips ,, she was keeping things back in d bags nd arranging d room.

Maan: r u ready ,, at what time u want to leave Geet ?

Geet: bas thodi der mei .

Maan: manu kahan hei ?

Geet: apni glanny ke paas ,, she smiled ( Maan too add his smile in that )

That lil cutie filled d KM with happiness in a day ,, he nd his Jojo run all around in d house ,, all wanted to talk nd play with him but manu didn't know hindi ,, poor souls started to speak in their special Hinglish nd Manu looked t them O to get d meaning ,, it was tough for this lil kiddu too.

There in room Geet forwarded Maan gift to him with a weak smile ,, she was not sure that he wd like that or not .

Geet: aauumm ,, this a small gift for u .

Maan: for me , but why again ? u bought many things for us when I was there nd didn't take money for those.

Geet: that was nothing in front of that which I got from here ,, plzz take it ,, I don't know u like it or not ,, Manu choose it for u bcoz u gave him lots of toys.

Maan smiled , took that with a thanks nd opened d box ,, his smile widened .

Maan: it's beautiful Geet ,, I love it , but this is very expencive , why u ..(she cut his words)

Geet: it's OK , nd thanks if u like it , u too gave me a costly one .

Maan: if Manu choose it then it'll be precious for me ,, aammm,, mei bhi ready ho jata hun .

Geet: mr Khurana aap ku...

Maan: no argument Geet .

She kept quiet .

Maan came close to her nd held her hand ,, Geet startled with this nd looked at him puzzled ,, a fear engulfed her .

Maan: Geet though these words r not able to erase all d pain of my bad behaviour towards u , but I want to apologize .. I'm Sorry Geet , I'm really very Sorry for everything .

Geet was staring at him , trying to absorb his words , did he say Sorry to her , But why ? What made him to change his mind for her ?

Maan: I know u won't believe it after facing my ill treatment through d yrs when u wr here but it's true that I regret,, my behaviour hurt u nd dad nd I realized it later ,, plzz mujhe Maaf ker do Geet .

Geet was chocked nd hardly gulped down ,, she tried hard to control her emotions , composed herself nd spoke in a shacky voice.

Geet: ab is sabka koi use nahi hei Mr Khurana ,, jo hona tha ho gaya ,, mai thi to ek outsider hi na ,, a burden on ur family ,, my family descarted me nd Uncle cdn't send me back ,, it cd hurt his respect nd dignity ,, he was helpless to keep me here nd bore his family's hard words , though he loved me nd cared for me ,, keep his words , but d reality cdn't change ,, u wr right that I was a curse for this family nd divided d family .

Maan: no Geet , u r not curse , plzz don't say this ,,I accept that I was wrong .

Geet: it's OK now ,, plzz don't say sorry to me , i'm obliged nd buried under d debt of this family nd Yash uncle ,, there is no need to say sorry nd plzz forget about all ,, go nd get ready .

Maan felt that Geet didn'twant to talk about d past ,, with heavy heart he went to his room to get ready nd Geet took out Prem nd Heer's gifts , her purse , manu's bag nd came down ,, she cd be late so kept things for Manu's to feed him .

Maan came down nd called Manu to go out ,, he took him in his arms , manu bid bye to Rashi waving his hand nd all went out .

They reach at d venue ,, Geet intro Maan to Prem ,Heer nd their parents ,, Prem's recognized Maan nd welcomed him with all respect , Manu met Prem & Heer after many days nd both loved him ,, d function was well organised ,, Meera told Geet to apply Mahandi on her hands but Geet denied coz she had to take Manu ,, Maan too insisted her nd assured her that he wd take care of Manu , but she didn't .

Prem got busy with his relatives nd friends nd Heer was surrounded by girls of their family friends ,, Maan was with Manu nd he was d eye tonic for d young girls nd they wr sighing nd whispering in each other ears ,, Heer nd Geet wr laughing seeing their drooling session ,, after spending a good time there Geet made manu's milk nd fed him ,, Maan took him in a lone corner ,, sat there nd tried to make Manu sleep coz he was playing with few small children nd now feeling sleepy ,, Geet brought their dinner in 2 plates nd both had ,, it was going late so Geet took leave to go ,, Next day was haldi in d morning then marriage in afternoon in d presence of close relatives nd friends followed by a grand reception at night.


Precap ---- Geet got some truth about Maan ...

Part - 33



sorry for mistakes ...

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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😆 So cute...
🤗 Hello dear..
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



hello babbie

kal ka mera mess padha bhi nahi...

how r u


😃 Hi lakshu...🤗
how r u ..?
sorry kal mai late aai..
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babbie tum ho ya update dene gayi?
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thodi der baat karke jaathi

ab aur nahi ruka jaatha... eyes are closng...

byee ... good night
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Posted: 10 years ago
Babbie pm check krna mt bhoolna.. Good night!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Babbie
kal pucha tha kuch hum ne
jawab nahi diya?
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No update yet going to sleep

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