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Part 56

Maan took geet in terrace of out house atmosphere is so beautiful cool braze making this more romantic ,other poor geet all lost in dress and maan know she feeling uncomfortable but it is treat for his eyes to watch her in this dress

Maan make her sit on zula ( ) and sit near her , in light of moon his misty looking so beautiful her face glowing with happiness and prgancy which adding more beuty in her

Maan without any word looking to her ...try to feel she is realy with him and he enjoying all this happiness which is dream for him before 4 month ...till he not meet his kid ... a soft smile come in his lips when he remember their first mit and start of kid kaands other side geet also lost in this 4 month meory so much happen with her and she get so many relaton also including her maan sir babies she smile on their first meet .

And both ask each other can I ask u something both laugh on each other , geet nodded in yes and say bolo maan sir

Maan - geet when u first get about prgancy kya kiya tumne ...

Geet get turn silence with his questions maan feel for while is he ask wrong question

He say hurriedly its ok geet jane do ...dont get sad ...

Geet - I am not sad maan sir bas thodi kho gayi past main , yes I am shake like hell that day u know sir I use 5 to 6 prgancy test kit that day ...aisa lag raha tha koi sapna hai ...dar , agony ,fear ,anger sab emotion play kar rahe the mind main ...koi nahi tha jiske sath share karti apni problem ...main sab ko apna manti thi lakin muje apna mane wale bahot kam the maan sir

That time to muje apna gujara kisa hoga iska tension tha because socalrship is only way of my money source that's why I serch job ...because I know unko jaise pata chalta mera soclership chal jata

Lakin main babies ko kabhi nahi kosa , muje aisa lagata tha ke mera koi nahi tha apna that's why my babji send them to me for me only for me and look I am right they give me such wonderful family including u maan sir , Geet look to maan with such love and respect

Maan side hug geet and mummer geet u r fighter and I love your fighting sprit always maan put his hand on geet tummy , tum log mere pass ane se pehale zindgi bahot udas thi meri abhot jada lonely feel karta tha khud ko ...

Lakin dekho pitchal 4 month main maine mere sare relation dost wapas pa liye including three kid

Geet make pout on word kid , maan nodded in not his kid ...

Maan make her sit on his lap and hug her geet put her head on maan shoulder and maan put one hand on her tummy both sit their with silence only their heart talking with each other with in this silent atmosphere

Moon shoring his blessing along with so may stars in night

On this divine couple who r so much lost in each other who become support of each other

After some time poor maan body start to react on geet closeness thou today he don't want any touchy touch , he want to talk with his misty want to share her past ,her pain so aanewale dino main she get only happiness but this desire dam

First time he crusing on his body reaction but poor boy geet nude leg touching to his leg and that brought wave of desire his hand start to itch to touch her ...he closed his eyes to control his desire

Other side geet get with maan desire because she feel hard...and maan face taling story of his attempt of controlling his feeling she cup maan face and pick on his M shape lips and maan moan GEEETTT

Maan hug tightly geet ...but avoiding presser on her tummy geet smile with maan care geet mummer in soft voice in maan ear babies r ok maan sir but kid ko kuch to de do na ...maan open his eyes with geet word and red hue appear on her face

Maan know she saying for him and he kiss her forehead , u r always ready for my happiness na

Geet look down and say usmain mera happiness bhi hai na so ...

Maan pick on her rosy lips and mummer oh misty

And next moment that pick turn in slow yet passionate kiss maan is not hurry its so slow take geet in other world her whole body set on fire ...next maan hand start to caressed on geet back and that brought geet back and she stand from maan lap and went away in shyness

Maan smirk on effect on geet he went ne ar geet and stand near her so near but not touch her ...same time some one play song may be security lessoning song on radio but it go with maaneet so perfectly

Like maan want to touch her love her and shyness making geet took back herself she look in maan eyes and like that song tailing the thought of geet scared mind

( Jaane Do Naa ) Ha, Jaane Do Na

Hey Paas Aao Na O O O Jaane Do Na

Hey Paas Aao Na Chhuo Na Chhuo

Na Mujhe Chhuo Na Chhuo Na Dekho Chhuo Na

Chhuo Na Chhuo Na

Maan taling with eyes na but give me chance to touch u worship u his eyes turn black in desire he forward his hand to touch geet and geet closed eyes in ...shyness

O O O Paas Aao Na Jaane Do Na

Aao Na Aao Na Paas Aao Na Aao Na

Dekho Aao Na Aao Na Aao Na Ho

O O O Jaane Do Na Paas Aao Na

(Hun... Chhodo Kalaai Dekho Ro Doongi) - 2

Geet open her eyes and make pout like u touch me now I will not going to talk with u

Jaao Main Tumse Nahin Boloongi

Maan Bhi Jaao Meri Baat Sanam

Haathon Mein Rahne Do Ye Haath

Sanam Chhuo Na Chhuo Na Mujhe

Chhuo Na Chhuo Na Dekho Chhuo Na

Paas Aao Na Jaane Do Na

But maan hold her hand with one hand and start to caressed her lips with his long finger like song saying it is story of desierful lips which he want to say to her

(Pyaase Honthon Ki Jo Kahaani Hai) - 2

Paas Aa Ke Tumhein Sunaani Hai

Ye Baatein Main Na Kar Paaoongi

Paas Na Aanaa Mar Jaaoongi

Aao Na Aao Na Paas Aao Na Aao

Na Dekho Aao Na Jaa..Ne Do Na Paas Aao Na

(Dil Jaise Karvatein Badaltaa Hai) - 2

Meraa To Saaraa Tan Jaltaa Hai

Armaan

Jo Dil Mein Machalte Hain Bas Yunhi

Jag Ke Uchhalte Hain Chhuo Na Chhuo Na Mujhe

Chhuo Na Chhuo Na Dekho Chhuo Na Paas Aao Na

O Jaane Do Na Aao Na Aao Na Paas Aao Na

Aao Na Dekho Aao Na Aao Na Aao Na Ho

O O O Jaane Do Na Paas Aao Na Ho

Hun Hun Hun Hun Hun Hun

Hun Hun Hun Hun Hun Hun Hun

So much armaan coming on heart mummer maan in geet ear

Geet trun red in shyness and maan again took her lips for kiss

last part
marriage ya fhir twist 😉
what about sam entry
Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Last part

Maan stop when he feel breathless geet , he again hug her and mummer u making me crazy geet ab ye itne sare dine kaise khatam hoge muje aur kam se kam he pose for while and say at list for 2 to 3 year ...

Geet look with shock to maan and maan read her mind question and maan cup her face , his finger creasing her lips which give Goosebumps to geet she try hard to concentrate on maan word

Maan kiss her forehead and say geet u r small , don't make face in don't call kid I say u r small so we have to wait geet , u r healthy geet that's why u facing this pregnancy smoothly but I don't want to burden u with another 2,3 year for pregnancy and all , .Don't ask about protection ...i don't like that maan say with little shy (Chavi datna mat All mens r dog)

Geet when we united first time I want u without any interference ...all skin to skin this is my fantasy geet

And most imp I want u complete your study geet ku ki I also want to know as husband of Geet khurana . in shadi Wadi we don't forget your future geet ...more than me u better know what is importance of independent to a girl or women either married or unmarried . and I don't u strugel in crrier , married life and baby , in our society husband want wife to his bed all fresh ...fhir wo kitani hi thaki hui ku na ho , in law want baby , with career , like all girls r super women who give birth to child as well as success in careeer , come on yaar take brake ...

Maan stop for while and look to geet face ,she have tear in eyes and smile on lips , she deeply touch by maan word his each and every word taling how this man love her , respect her care her ...she feel herself chocked with emotions

She called in soft voice why u love me so much MAAN

Maan get surprised with her Maan only maan his kid call him Maan , first time

Maan pick her lips and say call me again geet ...with that name geet feel her cheek turn in red color she nodded in no

Maan make puppy face but...next moment geet cried in painful voice MAAAN and next moment she in maan hug maan touch her back he found some sticky he try to look its red color maan eyes winded in shock and he cried in horrer devvv, geet

Geet geet ...all chatting in hall get shuttered with maan cryful voice

And all run to terrace and froze on their place when they found all quite maan and injured geet in his hug , they still in standing position ,dev who come first in reality and run to maaneet ...calling geet geet he called out adi ambulance , meera come fast , stop this blood , dam it meera think as doc not sis try to stop this blood look how it oozing out from her meera

Dev , sasha brought first aid fast ,dev look to meera but she is in shock state , dev shake her with force ...Meera maan will die if anything happen to his geet please look to geet

That work on meera and she took cottan from sasha and push on geet back where she get injury to stop blood flow and within 5 min ambulance come their and all took geet in hospital thou nub maan don't ready to send her away adi and dev somehow control maan and went to hospital

All now sit outside of operation theater waiting for doc they oprating geet ...maan mummering only geet called me maan not maan sir , for maan time stop for there only he stop in that moment only all try to brought him back but he is lost in his geet

half part till evening

I know I am devil 😈

evening wala part

He sit like lifeless or soulless body ...she call me maan , dev so many try to call him but he not coming out from his shock level at last meera ask to another doc to give him a sleeping dose so at last his body get some relax ,sasha pinky try hard to control there tear and dev and adi busy in look cctv footage of out house so they get who went out from outhouse

Dev get that one person going out from house till now police also come in hospital dev show footage to them and police alert all station and give that scatch and to their good luck that person have police record and serch went on one name and when dev, adi heard That name both feel like took gun and shoot that person

Dev- so that bitch play her game again, but this time she going to face verse , that she should face this Dev , bro of geet handa and went from there

Police officer- its not possible sir because sameera in Jail

Dev - smirk on officer and say she is samerra sir and we know her more than u sir but we need help in this please

Officer think for while with help of officer dev make that person to call sam and say her that mission successful other side sam ask in impation realy geet handa died kya and that person say yes and she mummer I finish u msk today I finish u ignore me , till 3 year I wait for your love but u like this kid now whole life u crying and no one can brought your geet back

Office record that call and next 15 min dev along with adi reach to jail

Dev called sasha also there , because dev know when she come in front of him he can not control himself and he don't want to sam took this chance that dev hit her

Sasha waiting for them in front of jail door she is confused why dev called her here

Till reach to sam room adi and dev say her all and when officer open sam room door and before any one getting what is happening sasha hit hard to sam , that punch was so hard blood come out from sam lips she cried in pain u beat...but her words died in her mouth because sasha attact sam like a hurt lioness she use all her punch on sam and sam fail on ground with pain

Sasha pull her again I waiting for this day sam from so many year u play with my buddy life emotions ect ect and now u touch maan love how dare u sam how dare u

In that injured condition also she laugh and oh geet death brought u here na sasha wo msk kaisa hai miss sasha

Just than dev phone beep its massage from meera maan condition turn more verse , dev stop sasha and they run to hospital dev took sam recording with him all reach in maan room there staff maan hand and leg tied with bed so he can not move , dev verge of cry his anger reach to high level he run to maan and start to open her hand ,leg staff want to stop him but he stop when he saw dev so much angry eyes its so scary

next part

in night

Just than dev phone beep its massage from meera maan condition turn more verse , dev stop sasha and they run to hospital dev took sam recording with him all reach in maan room there staff maan hand and leg tied with bed so he can not move , dev verge of cry his anger reach to high level he run to maan and start to open her hand ,leg staff want to stop him but he stop when he saw dev so much angry eyes its so scary

Meera mummer in slow voice he try to suicide but dev angry face stop her to say anything meera make all staff out from room ,dev mummer I want to be alone with maan for sometime adi know now dev is not oing to lesion anyone he took meera and sasha out from room

Dev open all rope from maan hand and leg ...maan open his eyes and saw to dev ...dev get shock with maan emptee eyes like he is not get , usko pehachana hi nahi ho

Maan mummer she called me Maan , she call me maan ...i am so happy ,lakin abhi dekho nahi pass aa rahi hai mere kya wo bhi muje chod ke chali jaayegi like dev ...wo bhi chala gaya tha ,usne bhi bahoot happiness diya tha like her , wo bhi chala gaya aur ye bhi ...tear escape from maan eyes

Main kya karu I can not feel anything for sam ,main drink bhi try kiya ...but bas baar baar bolta raha sam u r beautiful and all but kabhi chu nahi paya ,mera dil kabhi mana hi nahi usko touch karne ko

Dadi ke liye I accept this relation and try 100% to success it but ...for me its marriage and for sam its play a dirty game ...she say I touch her when I drunken me also my mind also go with it , than she say she is prganat ,I m so happy that mera ansh aayega mere liye

But again dirty game , prgancy fake , miscarage fake , and jo mera ansh tha wo to uske pet main pal raha tha ,jab ki main usko pure duniya main serch kar raha tha ku ...

Dev bhi chala gaya sath main kitani sari misunderstanding lake chala gaya , mera aur mere kiddo ka nazzaaz rishta meera ko toothe dekha , prgancy ke time , anjali ke bimari ke time ...koi nahi tha mere sath kisko bolta apna dard dadi ma ko jo guilt main ji rahi thi ki she spoil my life , adi se jiski zindgi main se pinky ke chale jane ka reason meri wife thi ya fhir meera se jo apna sab kuch ko gayi 2 month ke love life main ...ya fhir sahsa ko jo busy thi hum sb tute hui friend ko sambalne main ...

Baad main wo aayi meri life main ,muje happiness dene zindgi main new hope dene , and wahi hua wo aayi sath main mere babies , meri friend ko bhi wapas layi mere life main jo muje akela chod gaya tha ye sab face karne ke liye ... Dev bhi chala gaya muje chode ke muje laga I got new life but forget balck shadow whose name is SAMEERA bhool gaya ...

She called me maan and blood , blood coming from her soft body ...she collapse in my arm ,in this hand maan show his hand ...

Wo aise chale gaye Chode ke mera haat Khali ,

main to bol raha Dkho khusyo se mera agan Bhar gaya ,

muje kya pata tha ke mera chaman hi bikhar gaya

jo tha mere pass ret (sand) ke jaise phisal gaya

Tume pata hai dekho mere haat khali, ma papa nahi , friends nahi , na hi koi sibling , na wife na bache ...mar bhi nahi sakta ku ke dadi ko chod nahi sakta , wo dev bhi cahla gaya aur wo bhi chali gayi she call me Maan ,maan he mummer is sad tone

Dev closed his own mouth with palm to stop his cry , he know maan suffer allot because of sam dirty game , because of his foolishness , but today he get how deeply maan get hurt with all this

But he know he have to act fast he can not lost maan like this no big no he closed eyes and mummer god help ager aj maan kho gaya than nobody brought him back in normal ,same time his hand touch his mobile and within second he start that conversation of sam and shooter and look to maan

He pryaing to god its work on maan please please and its succeed till conversation end he found so many emotions on maan face , hate , care ,love fear ...maan sit on bed and start to look here there like searching something

He closed his eyes and recollect allthere moment on terass and last geet nub body in his arm ,he called out geeet dev geet , wo thik hai na , babies kaise hai

And dev hug with force cried maaan sorry sorry sorry

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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first read upper part than this I give in Night also 😉
😛

last part (A)

Dev hug him like small baby and cried maan thank god u r ok dev crying in maan hug like small baby same time room door get open and meera , sahsa enered with adi they also hug maan they share grop hug,they all lesion maan dev talk or maan talk , each crying like small baby , at last maan took long breath and , now any one going to tale us how is geet ya fhir aise hi bacho ke jaise rote rahoge , come on yaar muje usko milna hai ,baies kaise hai ...

Same time some one tap on maan shoulder and maan open his eyes saw to that person it is air hostess who is saying something ...maan look around oh he again lost in past ,he was in plane going back to India after 1 year today three year get complete that incidence when his get shot with that betch he don't want to take that girl name

His face get harden with past memory , plane going to land and he will reach his destiny within half hour ,noone know that he is coming back

His car stop in front of university gate he rush in ...and took sit of last row so no one look to him there he hear annoucment next act by our topper student with her cuties , u need any introdauction of our chif guest who performing this act

That PLACE fill with sound of honey sing

Kisey kehte hain Hip-Hop Hip-Hop.. (x9)

Shuru kiya maine as a music director

Aaj mere yaar dost bade-bade actor

Waise Bollywood mein aati roz picturein

Par superhit picturon ka Yo Yo X-Factor

Ye main nahi kehta woh khud yehi maante

Koyle ki khaan mein heere ko pehchaante

Middle class boy aaj superstar hai

Chartered mein ghoome aur chaar badi car hai

Isey kehte hain Hip-Hop Hip-Hop

Isey kehte hain Hip-Hop Hip-Hop

Ise kehte hai Hip-Hop Hip-Hop bete

Issey kehte hain Hip-Hop Hip-HOP (x2)

All going crazy with his song and act , he pose for while and say common guys joind me and track get change into

Chaar bottle Vodka

Kaam mera roz ka

Na mujhko koi roke

Na kisi ne roka.. (x2)

Two cuties around 2 and half year dacing with a girl who is in tight jeans and top who is feeting her so perfectely she dacing on song ...

Main rahoon saari raat in the bar

Daaru piyun lagaatar

Ek aadhi sab pee lete hain

Main to piyun botal chaar

Chaar bottle Vodka

Kaam mera roz ka

Na mujhko koi roke

Na kisi ne roka..

I wanna hangover tonight

I wanna hangover tonight

I wanna hangover tonight

I wanna hangover tonight s

All shock how that two small cute boyes also follwing that girl step so easily specialy 4 bottal vodaka

Char bottle Vodka

Kaam mera roz ka

Na mujhko koi roke

Na kisi ne roka.. (x2)

Saari raat daaru, subah nimbu-paani

Party karne waalon ki hai yehi kahaani

Pet bhar ke jitni bhi pee lo

Kisi ki bandi ko bhi hello

Hello baby how do you do?

Ek minute ko khad jaa tu

Pata ni mujhe yeh samajh ni aata

Mere saath kabhi koi club nahi aata

Apne palle se koi ni pilaata

Main pee loon zyada phir koi munh ni lagata

Kyun ki, kyun ki, kyun ki, kyun ki..

Char botal Vodka

Kaam mera roz ka

Na mujhko koi roke

Na kisi ne roka.. (x2)

I wanna hangover tonight

I wanna hangover tonight

I wanna hangover tonight

I wanna hangover tonight

But in all this one soul open in perfect O SHPE he mummer how the hell she choose such song for babies

Sooji-sooji aankhein meri yeh phir bhi dekho

Ladkiyon ko kaise yeh nihaarein, nihaarein..

Agle din uthu main hangover me phir bhi dekho

Lever mera Vodka pukaare (x2)

Kyun ki?

4 bottle Vodka

Kaam mera roz ka

Na mujhko koi roke

Na kisi ne roka.. (x5)

He come here to give surprised but get surprised or say shock of his life , they r dancing on Honey sing song but on song of Drink , he know he have to contol his anger till went to house , his red eyes and tighted face with anger

And that act come to end and beforto back stage they vanish in air

He march to his house ...like lion he entered in with attituted and anger and called in high voice

All rats come out before I counting 5 , and he start to count 1,2,3...

He stop on 3 when his so called rat come om different room with such innocent ,puppy face specially that girl who

Biting her won lips in nervousness

That man ask with anger what r going in my absent ...MRS KID khurana

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Dev and Meera loved each other so much, but because of Sam they fell apart. Maan finding out about this and got angry at Meera.
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Me blushing after reading romance of Dev and Meera
meera doubts dev..but later believes him

loved their talks...emotional...

now maan comes to know about what they did...

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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update dear...dev and meera love at peak...precap to further chapers are very interesting ...continueee soonnn dear...
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terrific update! well written. Feeling 4 Dev n Meera! They love each other so much bt Sam destroyed everything! Dev assures Meera! Meera believes him! update soon! Fab teasers 4 upcoming updates!
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yeah can someone tell me why they have to make love like that
forget it
well it was for them to show their love
and meera needed some comfort
no wonder maan will be mad at her
jaise maan abhi doodh ke dhule hain
if she wasnt pregnant he might have made love to geet too
so this is what happened with meera and dev
it was to console er
like it was for adi pinks
but different situation
though heart breaking for sure
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nice update
waiting for next update
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Part 50-53 read all part together-
romance of maneet
romance of devmeer
sasha meeting her would be
dadima arrange alliance of saha and anounce of engagement in bachelor party
dadi separated girls and boys to get ready for bachelor party and no more meeting till marriage.
maandev's hilarious dostana and geet still believes that.
light moments and fun of everyone with dadima.
everything place so well.
lekin picture abhi baki hai dosto...!

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