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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Mahimaan

beautiful

the way u write geet thoughts and kashmkash
that is speechless kabhi kabhi apne sath nahi hote
lakin unki yaade jo humare dil main reahti hai
usko sabhalker rehana hi to zindgi hai
yaade yaade jo
deti hai hume jine ka
hosala ,jo reahti hai hamesha
huamre sath


Thankyou mahi...

u said right...one has to move on with their memories...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: love2_soma

m liking but not happy...coz i love to see maaneet together...


i know dear..thats why i completed in one shot...Thanks for reading...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Emotional update

Geet har jagah jati hai jaha maan ki yaad hai...
Smile for me!!!...bahut achha laga...

Yaadein, yaadein, yaadein
Duniya mein hum saare
Yaadon ke hai maare
Kuch kushiyaan, thode gham
Yeh humse, inse hum
Yaadein, o meethi meethi yaadein
Khatti meethi yaadein
Nagme hain, shikwe hain
Kisse hain, baatein hain
Baatein bhool jaati hain
Yaadein yaad aati hain
Yeh yaadein kisi dil-o-jaanam ke
Chale jaane ke baad aati hain
Yaadein, yaadein, oh yaadein


Thankyou dear...I love the song tooo..its a beautiful one...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: gunjar


Vani di it is really very emotional...
i have no words to express my feelings after reading this
just a single line revovlving in my mind "smile for me"
u just taken my heart away..


Thankyou dear...Glad you liked it...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Plz, isse yaha poora mat karna...

Humein iske parts chahiye...


parts ..me confused dear..will try...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta


This was so emotional...

I loved geet's spirit to live..the way u potrayed her emotions and their memories...was amazing di

Though it was a emotional one it was beautiful..!!

Good job di👏


Thankyou dear...😛🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Emotional os..
Had tears in my eyes but still had a smile on my face...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
WOW!! that was so emotional...it was written beautifully...👏...plz do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preeti_Maaneet

sad sad part.. geet remembering all her moments which she had spent with her husband.. she is going to the places where they had been together.. maan dead..how ??


I mentioned that he died of accident...😛 Thanks for reading
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Excellent Start
So she will start her journey from the very first time they met and the place they met its gonna be interesting to go through the journey with her


Hi...It is a one shot updated pg 10...

It is completed...

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