Congrats for the new story!!+for becoming an awesome writer😃and sweta di for encouraging u👏
Sweta di...u r doing good job👏
now about the story...
just wowww...😳
entirely new concept!!
maan medical student😃
and he was sent to jail😲 and that too he accepted the crime for saving his lady love😒
and she cheated him😡 chii...
ek min..ek min...is that geet😒 or sm other😡
becahra maan😭
and maan sis...and friend(char)...are new & good choice👍🏼
but me sad di 😒 ...u didn't give part 1...my whole mind will be in this only like...aage kya hoga?..who will be maan's lady love?...
what will maan do...etc..etc..etc😆
All the best for your journey as a writer didis👍🏼
and lot of 🤗
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