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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.


Part - 22



Part - 23


After two days Yash nd Rashi wr back nd Maan created drama again , he openly said Yash - Rashi to choose one ,, Dadima took Maan's side ,, Yash -Rashi wr helpless nd Geet was tight lip , listened all d arguments with lower head ,, she saw how disheartened was Yash on all this matter nd if she said anything about that awful act what wd happen to him ? She knew Yash's love nd care for her nd he had bore DM's taunts many times but ignored for d peace in family ,, she cn't hurt him any more.

Dadima: yash ab bahot ho gaya , apni dosti ke liye tum apne pariwar ko tod doge kya ? apne hi bete ko ghar se jane doge ek parai ladki ke liye ,, sun lo agar wo gaya to hum bhi Maan ke sath ye ghar chod denge .

Yash / rashi : maa .


Geet: nahi Dadima mere liye apna ghar matt todo ,, mai hi chali jaungi ,, uncleji plzz ,, maine aage study ke liye apply kiya hua hei , bas mere final result ke baad kuch formalities ,, jana to mujhe hei hi aaj nahi to kal ,, fir abhi kun ahi ,, esme galat kya hei ? plzzz uncle ,, Dadima plzz , bas kuch din .

At this time Yash nd Rashi wr in a fix ,, Dadima adviced to sent her if she want , it wd be better for all ,, Rashi too added her willingness saying that if she wanted to go for study then sent her nd at last Yash agreed unwillingly coz he wanted Geet in KC , but when Geet didn't want to live here nd all wr against her so let it be .

Days started passing ,, Geet remained in her room all d time ,, preparing for her exams ,, she went in kitchen nd took her meal nd came back ,, after that day d atmosphere of KM was heavy for few days nd then all became normal , only Rashi spoke with Geet nd that was very often when yash visited Geet ,, he find her busy in her study so didn't disturb her more ,, yash was sad sending her away like this.

Geet completed her exams nd started her admission process ,, her two class friends with whom she prepared for GRE nd gave exam together wr also applying ,, there wr many Uni nd Geet choose 1 from 3 Uni which was giving her 80% scholarship ,, there wr many formalities but main was that she need a amount or assets in her account or name but she didn't have any ,, there was very lil amount in her ac which she got from school nd scholarships but that was not enough ,, she needed this help nd requested to Yash ,, that was a big amount for her but nothing for Yash ,, Geet didn't want any big help but she was helpless nd needed ,, she went nd asked from Yash nd Rashi with wet eyes .

Yash: why r u feeling bad for asking me anything Geet?

Geet: it's a big amount ,, I don't want to burden u .

Yash : u r not a burden on me Geet , never ,, I never said this before but today i'm saying that u r my lucky mascot ,, my business bloom after ur entry in KM ,, so don't feel bad ,, this is nothing to me

Geet: i'm sorry if I hurt u uncle .

Yash : u never beta aur baccho se kai baar galti ho jati hei ,, Geet mai janta hu ki maan tumhe pasand nahi kerta lekin beta tum ku uski life me enterfere ki ,, wo tumse age mei bada hei , apne doston ka usse jyada pata hei , tum bahar jyada nahi jati , kisi se nahi milti to tumhe kya pata ? usse bhi bura laga hoga aur mei usse kho bhi nahi sakta ,, wo bhi mujhe tumhari tarah pyara hei .. it's OK ,, ho jata hei kabhi ,, mujhe bura nahi laga ,, mai janta hun meri Geet mujhe kabhi hurt nahi kar sakti .

Geet: thanks uncle .

Yash : aur haan , tum mujhse kuch bhi mang sakti ho .

Rashi: Geet beta family mei kai baar chup rahana padta hei , eska matlab ye nahi ki hum galat ko support kr rahe hein ,, bas halat majboor ker dete hei , tum khush ho na ki tum aage aur padhne ja rahi ho .

Geet: ji aunty , nd thanku so much . ( yash nd Rashi hugged her lovingly)

She came back in her room ,, YSK opened a new account for her nd deposite d required money in that ,, her all requirements wr done nd now she was waited for her visa nd joining date in college * few more days slipped in her shopping, arranging things nd she got her visa nd then date nd ticket .

Everything was set from her side ,, her date of departure was coming close ,, not only she but Yash nd Rashi also going before her * Annie was in UK nd it was her Bday after a week ,, she was admant to celebrate her Bday with her parents in UK nd demand her own house in UK ,, she didn't want to live in hostel now ,, now she was going to enter in LSEM for her master degree ,, Yash nd Rashi too think that it was good if they had a house in London ,, they visited many times there so better to have their own ,, they met to Geet before leaving nd assured her for all arrangements , Yash checked all her papers wished her good luck ,, he said that he wd be in touch with her all d time ,, he parted with a heavy heart nd went ,, after 3 days Geet was ready in mid night to go .

She met with all d servants , then went to meet Dadima who was sleeping that time ,, she silently went in , touched her feet nd came out then she peeped in Maan's room ,, he was sleeping hugging a pillow ,, she looked at him last time nd move back .

Yash driver was there to drop her at airport ,, she bid bye to Nakul nd Satish with wet eyes nd sat in d car to go ,, No body was there to say her a proper good bye .

whole journey she was shedding tears nd consoling herself ,, it was a very long journey for her ,, she was sleeping in her chair nd wake up feeling d tap on her shoulder ,, she jerk opened her eyes nd found d air hostage there who was waking her to tie her seat belt as they wr going to land ,, D plane landed with a jerk nd all shook at their place .


$$$

Geet body too get a shook nd she opened her eyes ,, she looked that manu was sitting on bed nd shaking her body to wake her calling her mommy ,,mommy ,, she instantly sat nd held manu in her lap ,, trying to get d things all around then remembered that last night she was recalling her faded past nd didn't know when went in deep slumber ,, she checked d time .. God they wr late .She took Manu in her arms nd rushed to finish their morning work with Manu's nonstop talks nd after an hr both wr on their way to go .


Precap --- A search for Jojo ...

Part - 24


Note.. maan'll remember that night after some time...




Sorry for d mistakes ...






Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


😊 updated ..Pg...41

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

ok..me too going to sleep


🤗 Hi dear..

kya karu..? lappy hang ho raha hei..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Without any fault of her, she has suffered a lot.

Nice ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hope maan remembering that night...
Let's see what happens in India ...
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Posted: 10 years ago



I'm waiting for Maan to remember that night
I want to see
his reactions ...its gonna be a blast for sure


Edited by taahir004 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part..
loved it..
feeling bad for geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
so emotional ud
geet left all alone wen her
on parent doesn't bother
then khuranas r angel in
front of her owns
who at least educated
and sympathy with her
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Posted: 10 years ago
I don't know but I didn't like when yash said that geet shouldn't have interfere in maan's life...He should have asked geet what made her to say those words to maan's friends...but he didn't......Maan is a complete jerk...I really hate him...In ur stories geet always forgive maan soon , but here I don't want that...He should suffer for his sins...Looking forward to yash & geet meet...

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