DIWALI DOUBLE DHAMKA...:D :D

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Posted: 10 years ago
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DIWALI DOUBLE DHAMAKA

This is a special OS for all my readers...!!all those who are missing me..and my updates...!!plz do not get confuse..seee their color code..properly..!!!

MAAN(i)= maan form my story ishqiya

MAAN(otdf)= maan from on the dance floor

MAAN(SL)= maan from scared love

Similarly

Geet(i),

geet(otdf)

walk a little faster.not in ur usual snail speed.maan(i) scowled at geet(i)..i don't intent to be late..chasmish

yess..geet(i) nodded. Both climbed out of the car..and walked to the bungalow.

Maan(otdf) welcomed him ..hey maan(i) nice to meet you m glad u came he said embracing him...maan(i) grinned at him..offcourse who would deny an invitation from you huh.

Hey...this is ur beautiful wife...right .maan(otdf) said gazing geet(i). she smiled warmly at him..adjusting her glasses..welcome my dear Bhabhi..he said offering his hand..geet(i) took his hand...

Maan(i) rolled his eeys...fliriting with my wife..great and maan(otdf) led both inside.

Aapke ane se...pure sama mai..chand chand lag gaye..maan(otdf) said charmingly..

Maan(i) was irritated now...where are the others??huh...

Ohh..maan(otdf) turned his attention to maan(i)...bhabhi...u enjoy the party..i'll take ur husband with me...geet(i) nodded..

Both the men...moved to a corner..

Well maan(sl) is ce;lebrating Diwali with his chiku..so he wont be able to come. ..maan(otdf) said handling a drink to maan(i)

He took a sip..dont tell me..he still dint confess his love to his chiku...narrowing his brows..

Maan(otdf) laughed...yay..god knws when will we see..both of them together..dont worry I will surely give him some tips...how to pro his chiku and winked..

Maan(i)- well..u should give them to sweta..i guess she is not planning their milan soo soon...

Maan(otdf)- yaa...maan u knw..meri kitni band bajayei...ayan se..o god..upar se..mujhe ab tak...geet(otdf) k sath ek bhi hot and sensuous scene nahi diya..not even a cozy dance he cribbed..

Maan(i)- meri halat toh unse bhi..kharab hai..mujhe toh do time khana bhi naseeb nahi hua..he said frustratingly..

geet(otdf)- hey called geet(i) who was looking around..

Geeet(i)-Hey...

Geet(otdf)- hey...I m geet maan(otdf)'s dance partner..from sweta's on the dance floor

Geet(i)- I m geet from ishqiya...oo..wer is ur ayan..i have heaed a lot about him..she said making her eyes big in excitement..

Geet(otdf) smiled brightly..yaa...ill call him..ayan..baby...

Ayan came running...and hugged geet(otdf)...

Awee..he is..soo cute..geet(i) said..

She went on her knees and cutely pinched his cheeks..helllo ayan m geet...Ayan looked at both of them..

Momma...geet(otdf ) came to his level..ayan baby say hello to her..

Hiee...ayan said in baby voice..geet (i) smiled and kissed his cheek...hiee..sweety happy diwali..

Ayan too wished her by kissing her cheeks..geet giggled

Both the ladies...along with ayan..spoke about their ongoing stories...

Mommaa...plz..ayan wants to play na..i want a rocket...plzz..mommaa... he pleaded to both of them..

Both the men ..walked to them...and heard ayan..

Sure after all..diwali mai...yeh toh banta hai...maan(otdf) said...ayan raised his brows and looked away..Maan(i)...grinned and..whisprerd..bete...tujhe to bohot mehnat karni..ayan k peeche..

Maan(otdf) nodded in agreement..

Maan(i)- challo ayan..i'll help u..with that what say

Really aap ayan ki help karoge,...

Maan(i) nodded...while maan(otdf) elbowed him..and leaned whipering...tu apne wali ko samal..mere wali k peeche kyu,,hai..ayan ko patina mera kaam hai.. he whinned

Uncle..ayan called maan(i)..by pulling his kurta..

Yaa..he bent to ayan's level..happpy Diwali...ayan said and kissed maan(i) cheek..

Maan(i) smiled and kissed his cheek..wish u the same..boy..

Maan(otfd) he was just staring geet(ptdf) she was looking absolutely breathtakingly beautiful...hmm...he thought of something and called geet(otdf)..partner..

Hmm..she turned to see him...maan gestured her..to come closer...she confusingly leaned... forward to him..maan moved to her cheek and pecked..her..making her completely shocked...happy Diwali he said huskily..and smiled..

Geet(otdf) held her cheek...and gazed maan who was staring her with a small smile on his face.

Both maan(i) and geet(i) ..smiled at them.

Chalo...tum bhi Bhabhi ko wish karo..ab..maan(otdf) said diverting the topic..

Geet(i) dipped her head ...and clutched the end of her sari..

Happy Diwali..maan(i) said...looking straight..not eving glancing her..

Maan(otdf) sighed and shook his head..

Ayan pulled maan(i)'s kurta again..

Not like this..uncle u odnt knw..we wish happy diwlai by kissing...like how I wished u he said proudly..he thought this is a new way of wishing!!

Yay..maan - Maan(otdf) joined ayan..

Cmon wish her..like the way we all wished..cmon..he probed him further..

Okay..he gritted in anger and strolled to geet quickly pecking her cheek..and stepped back.

Geet felt butterflies in her tummy whne his lips..grazed her cheek..she had red hue on her cheek..which dint go unnoticed by any one..maan(otdf) smiled...

Chaloo ab ayan k sath baha maze karte I have bought lot of fireworks..

Wow...yipee...ayan said in happiness..

Geet(otdf) whispered...to geet(i)..u look more beatutiful with these red cheeks...and giggled..while geet(i) blushed furiously..

Wait..guys maan(i) said..lets wish them..isliye toh sweta wrote this OS..this is for all her readers who gave her immense love and support..

Maan(otdf)- yaa..lets wish them..nahi toh ab pata nahi kis se pityai karwayegi..he thought..

All of them..canme forward...

HAPPPY DIWALI...TO ALL U GUYS...

This is small tribute to all my sweetie pies...for their support!!

Love

Sweta

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chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
So cute
Here also ishqiya maan can't behave
Poor maan geet is still not impressed
Well he gotta impress little ayan first
Geet sweetie slap that hubby of yours from my side
He is asking for it
Good you make these maan suffer they asked for it
This was funny
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Hey dat was so sweet..Happy Diwali dear...

poor Maan got to 1st patofy Ayan to reach Geet ...hwww bechara..bt d other rude nd arrogant... as i said in earlier comment of Ishqya...let him starve witout food for 4-5 days...tab akkal tikane aayegi kamine ka...bechari geet...

lovly...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
OS dear👏👏👏
Maan(i) as usual he ignore Geet

Maan(otdf) is flirting Geet(i)😉

Awww Maan(otdf)is kissing his partner Geet(otdf)😳

Ayan is so cute❤️❤️
👍🏼👏
for the PM dear😃


🤗🤗

Edited by jayshu17 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
its sooo sweet...





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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Happy Diwali To You Sweta

Uff Maan (I) still the same ...atleast he picked Geet' cheeks
and Chiku's Maan still has'nt confessed while Maan (otdf) also got
a perfect chance to wish his Geet


Really Fabulous OS
Loved the Humour
& spank of it

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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww it was so cute
Maan (i) is as same as the story akdu, but in ending he kissed Geet (i) Thanks to Ayaan baby and Maan and Geet of ontf
haayee the Maneet ( ontf ) were superb and the way Maan kissed her and Maan of ( i ) teased him by saying he have to work hard with Ayaan and Maan whined seeing Maan (i) offered help to Ayaan and he readily agreed
in short it was awesome Os with everyone in it but not Maaneet of SL
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Awesm.OS baby iss bahane maan(i) geet ko kiss tho kiya aur maan(otdf) me apni waali geet pe chance maara
wish u happy diwali baby nd 2 ur family
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
awesome OS & happy Diwali 2 all
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
i still get confuse...i read it 3 times to understand ...awesome os...its different and unique...happy diwali in advance

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