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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

hi thanks 4 da pm bt read n commented already! update soon

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

gr8 parts..

cont.soon

pls do send pm to me too..

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

sorry for so late comment how i miss this story
beautiful story line with beautiful treatment u make it
beautiful
i feel like i watching them alive front of me good job
dear 👏

maan - love at first sight but
his nature become dushman for him
his nature stop him to tale his better half
ke main to sar se lake pair tak
apke pyyar main kho chuka hu
geet ji ...

poor boy so much dream about first night
but geet shyness hurt himm hope
this things not brought MU in them
lakin Kiss was 😉😳

geet - ab kya bolu totaly lving in dremy
world she waiitng for his first move phon called
and date (yaar wo thik se bol
nahi sakta ki U are beutiful )
phon and date bhool jao
but her dreamy world may be come in their
new relation
her shyness become Mu in all eyes including
maan which is not good

and maai aise relative to hote hi isliye
looking fot tamasha 😡

savtri this caractor going to eles
help or distroy maaneet
relation am i right neetu

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Mahimaan
sorry for so late comment how i miss this story
beautiful story line with beautiful treatment u make it
beautiful
i feel like i watching them alive front of me good job
dear 👏

maan - love at first sight but
his nature become dushman for him
his nature stop him to tale his better half
ke main to sar se lake pair tak
apke pyyar main kho chuka hu
geet ji ...

this big complement😲 i am dead⭐️

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Neeju

this big complement😲 i am dead⭐️

dear abhi khatam nahi hua 😆

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Mahimaan
sorry for so late comment how i miss this story
beautiful story line with beautiful treatment u make it
beautiful
i feel like i watching them alive front of me good job
dear 👏

maan - love at first sight but
his nature become dushman for him
his nature stop him to tale his better half
ke main to sar se lake pair tak
apke pyyar main kho chuka hu
geet ji ...

poor boy so much dream about first night
but geet shyness hurt himm hope
this things not brought MU in them
lakin Kiss was 😉😳

geet - ab kya bolu totaly lving in dremy
world she waiitng for his first move phon called
and date (yaar wo thik se bol
nahi sakta ki U are beutiful )
phon and date bhool jao
but her dreamy world may be come in their
new relation
her shyness become Mu in all eyes including
maan which is not good

and maai aise relative to hote hi isliye
looking fot tamasha 😡

savtri this caractor going to eles
help or distroy maaneet
relation am i right neetu

tkx for big comment di...lets wait to see what happens next...u can call me neer

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Mahimaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

neer waiting for update

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Mahimaan
neer waiting for update

half done...still writing

Edited by Neeju - 10 years ago

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Neeju

half done...still writing

ok ok take your time we are waitng

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Neer Kataria

@Neeju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

part 4

AT NIGHT

geet is busy in kitchen ... preet is helping her... "bahu dinner lgadoo"said savitri coming in the kitchen ... "ji maa"said geet ... maan and his father both enter the house ... they come and sit on couch...maan start tv ... savitri bring them water ... both take water and start discussing about the current news they r watching on tv...

preet

Both geet and preet set the dinner on dining table... while savitri instruct them... she ask maan and his father to join... "ji dinner lagya hai aajaeyee... maan beta news baad main deklena pehle dinner kerlo"said savitri... "ji maa" told maan ... both father and son took their seats...

savitri start serving her husband while geet start serving maan... geet see how her MIL is serving... she will do same as savitri did... geet is serving maan daal which he do not like... he look toward geet to tell her ..."geet"said maan softly ... but geet do not listen and keep her eyes on her MIL... "geet ...geet..."said maan now little louder then the first time...

"ji"said geed finally looking at maan..."mujhe daal nhi chaheea... "said maan looking at his beautiful wife..."ji"said geet slowly..."geet beta bethjao(sit) or dinner kerlo "said maan's father Ram..."ji "said geet taking seat near maan...all have ther dinner...

AFTER DINNER...

geet is in kitchen preparing tea for everyone and milk for maan...as instructed by her MIL... "bhabhi koye idea do na"said preet siting on the slot in kitchen... "kis batkeliyee "ask geet as she put tea in cups... "bhabhi wedding ke vjasee maine project file prepare nhi ke...or kal submit kervanee hai...kya khooge main teacher ko"said preet with worry expressions ...

"tell ur teacher ke family main wedding the...esliyee file nh bnayee"said geet...giving tea to preet ..."bhabhi varma sir bhut strict hai...nhi manegee" said preet getting really worried... "main help kro file bnane main...mera bhi economics subject tha" said geet as she thought she will help preet and she will sleep in preet's room itself...

"per bhabhi puri raat lagjayeege" told preet..."koye bat nhi preet...humdono sath milke kerlege...or main tumhare room mey soojaoge"said geet...she is happy about escaping maan..."preet apna kam khud krege"said savitri strictly... she is there in kitchen to get tea when she listen them planning to spend night together to make file... here she want to see her grand children n geet is behaving like a child...

"geet tum apne kamre main jao maan ke liyee doodh (milk) leker... preet apna kam khudkrege" said savtri telling geet there is no escape she have to go to her room... "but mumma mere file"said preet but before she can complete her sentence savitri stop her by showing her hand... "sare raat baath ker file bnaoo...main bathooge tere sath...kuch chahiyee hoga tuo mujhe bnadogee" said savtri leaving preet with no other opnion..."ji"said preet slowing ...

"geet bahu apne kamree main jao" told savtri once again... when she find geet is still in kitchen... "ji "said geet slowly... she is feeling nervous as she don't know what will happen next... she also thought tonight she will have no reason to stop maan... she know one day she will have to face but this early she never thought it ... it worry her that they are still on the same page...

IN MAANEET'S ROOM

Maan is sitting on bed with his laptop and files... door open maan look n see geet entering with glass of milk..."ji aapka doodh (milk)" said geet presenting the tray..."hmm"said maan. as he took the glass and put it on side table... geet move to cabinet geet took her night wear to change... maan give one glance and start working once again...after some time geet come out in her night dress...

night dress for geet

geet come near bed and sit... she don't know what to do now... she should sleep or just sit like that... maan see her ... he was going to say her to sleep but stop himself remembering previous night... "geet lay down...i need to finish some work"said maan (both r educated so i am using conversation in English ) still typing as he wanted to finish his work as soon as possible ...

"ji"said geet once again using her fav word... "you can turn off ur side of lamp if you want"said maan as he can feel her uneasiness ... "ji"said geet switching light off ... maan shake his head listen her ...he had loss the count of time she said ji...uff maan complete ur work fast else geet will sleep and you will have same sleepless night...

Maan is working fast... he is deliberately making noise so that geet will not sleep... here geet is not able too sleep... and the way maan is making noise of opening drawer and then closing it...she is not even able to pretend... finally maan complete his work... he took deep breath ... finally he will have his wife thought maan with big smile...maan took his laptop and file and kept them on the couch in their room...geet see this...she close her eyes at once ...Maan come to his side ... he lay down and cover them with blanket...

note- i will update next part tomorrow itself...i love to see 100+ likes in this OS ... do read my other works too...i just hope i get same amount of likes...link is 1st page...and for pm link is on 1st page...like the link it make easier to pm...comments readers who give me long comments tkx a lot...

Edited by Neeju - 10 years ago

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