Tamanaa ' nigah e yaar ki ' || check note at page 139 - Page 31

Originally posted by: sheetalvasa

Nice update...

mariyam bahut practical hai aur emotionally nahi sochti...ussne maan ko bata diya ki ek baar aage badhne ke baad mud kar pichhe nahi dekhna chahiye...woh maan ko saaf saaf bata deti hai ki maan ko geet ko usska haq dena padega...mariyam ko bas waris chahiye!!

Maan bhi samjta hai ki geet ab usski jimedari hai par woh dil ke hatho majboor hai...woh apni maa ko bhi dukhi nahi dekh sakta...woh tay nahi kar pa raha hai ki kya kare? Isiliye woh kisise madad mang raha hai...kaun hai woh?

Hor ke barein mein kya bolu? Woh maan ko share nahi kar sakti par ussne khud maan ko dusri shaadi ke liye manaya hai toh uss ab geet ke barein mein bhi sochna padega...usski self talk bahut achhi thi...

Ab geet toh maan ki pehli shaadi ke baarein mein jaanti hi nahi hai...usski maa ne usse kuch nahi bataya...koi maa apni beti ke saath aisa kaise kar sakti hai? Maa ki aisi konsi majburi thi? Jab geet ko sab baat pata chalegi toh kya hoga?

Sab baate ulji hui hai par jis tarha se update likha ja raha hai bahut achha lagta hai...loved the story very much!! Jaldi update diya karo!!

Originally posted by: SAI92

nice.but please write in english .

Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam

achha likha hai ,..khaas kar ke horam kapoint of veiw and mariam kaversion,. achha laga

Originally posted by: ammu5

geets mil is too good may b a bit selfish too...feel sorry for 3 of them...maaneet n horam

Originally posted by: mirror1521

Thank u sheetal for such a detailed analysis and liking the story...

And u r right all r being selfish ignoring geet and her happiness... But god will do justice to her...

Stay tuned :)

I hope u will not be disappointed with future track...