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fariya20

@fariya20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: sohni_kudi_111
this is an interesting concept! I dont know who to be sry for, maan, geet or horum? but will maan ever accept geet n if he does what about horum!

I seriously dont know wat to expect frm this fiction...

one word... awesome

thank you liking our story

well trio will be soon came out their pain

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fariya20

@fariya20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: tabby999
hi fariya and pooja
nice update ..
but i didn't like the way all r treating geet ..
may be i love geet to much that's why ..
maan doesn't want to see her ,he wants his first wife ..
maan's mother want geet just to produce child nothing else ..
annie ..why any hates geet ..waht geet has done with her .. why annie keep on taunting geet ..
harom ..selfish ...but still can't say her so ..she wants maan's child ..

all so confuse ..
p.s i want to know geet's background ..to which kind of family she belong ..why her parents made her married to an already married maan ..does geet know that her so called husband is already married ..geet is just there in family as a machine to produce a child ...
i want geet's part too ...i don't want so much horam ...
thanks for update
waiting for next

am so happy to get a long coment from you dear

yes maan mother is also selfish only want heir not from geet but horam too well asey hi hota hai i think shadi k bad all want baby soon no mater what

anie rud with geet coz she against this marige she dont want maan marry second time

horam uskey barey mein abhi kuch nahi

soon will show geet house story why her family marry her with maan

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fariya20

@fariya20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: kabslocks
wonderful update, different from usual maaneet stories.

thank you for coment

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#294

geets mil is too good may b a bit selfish too...feel sorry for 3 of them...maaneet n horam

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anuradha.nandam

@anuradha.nandam

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#295

achha likha hai ,..khaas kar ke horam kapoint of veiw and mariam kaversion,. achha laga

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SAI92

@SAI92

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#296

nice.but please write in english .

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#297

Nice update...

mariyam bahut practical hai aur emotionally nahi sochti...ussne maan ko bata diya ki ek baar aage badhne ke baad mud kar pichhe nahi dekhna chahiye...woh maan ko saaf saaf bata deti hai ki maan ko geet ko usska haq dena padega...mariyam ko bas waris chahiye!!

Maan bhi samjta hai ki geet ab usski jimedari hai par woh dil ke hatho majboor hai...woh apni maa ko bhi dukhi nahi dekh sakta...woh tay nahi kar pa raha hai ki kya kare? Isiliye woh kisise madad mang raha hai...kaun hai woh?

Hor ke barein mein kya bolu? Woh maan ko share nahi kar sakti par ussne khud maan ko dusri shaadi ke liye manaya hai toh uss ab geet ke barein mein bhi sochna padega...usski self talk bahut achhi thi...

Ab geet toh maan ki pehli shaadi ke baarein mein jaanti hi nahi hai...usski maa ne usse kuch nahi bataya...koi maa apni beti ke saath aisa kaise kar sakti hai? Maa ki aisi konsi majburi thi? Jab geet ko sab baat pata chalegi toh kya hoga?

Sab baate ulji hui hai par jis tarha se update likha ja raha hai bahut achha lagta hai...loved the story very much!! Jaldi update diya karo!!

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-Adwika-

@-Adwika-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: fariya20

🤗
😈 iam devil na soo wait karo next update ka

aap toh blushy blushy hona toh hume bhi blushy blushy updates do😳

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#299

Lag raha he ye story kuch kuch zindagi k show kash me teri beti na hoti se inspired ge
but really interesting he and I trust u both writer s k aap log is story me maan geet ko alag nahikarenge
horam k liye koi aur hero le aao she is a nice girl.aur wo twen life saath me chain se kaise ragengi

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: preeti.1
Lag raha he ye story kuch kuch zindagi k show kash me teri beti na hoti se inspired ge
but really interesting he and I trust u both writer s k aap log is story me maan geet ko alag nahikarenge
horam k liye koi aur hero le aao she is a nice girl.aur wo twen life saath me chain se kaise ragengi

Maan usko chhodo Tabb na...

Maan toh horam ko chahta hai na😛

Waise Jo b hoga... Manzure fariya hoga😆