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Gudiyeet

@Gudiyeet

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#321

mariyam talk to horm feeling sad maan waiting horm in bf

geet scared maan scolding voice his mother stop yelling maan

annie insut geet in bf maan and mariyam conversation both are what feeling own self horm nice girl her she and her imeginary conversation awesome amazing update

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#322

hi thanks 4 da pm bt read n commented already! update soon

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SGuru

@CuteTommy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#323

Pooja n Fariya's story is very nice...

Fariya.. no problem with language as we can understand wat u r trying to convey... n the way u describe matters which is wonderful...

waiting for Pooja's part too...

n as for as the part... did Geet know abt Horam n she is married to a person who is already married????

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#324

nice update poor geet!!!
will maan ever be able to love her???yaar i want maaneet scene plz waiting for next part

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#325

part 1

first sorry for so late comment
truth is iam feel uncomfortable
with story line sorry fariya
but it disturbing me for
child second marriage
it feel punishment to
geet shadi feel like
maan just doing like
robot

👏

maan outbrust is sup-ab
u write well he get force with
his own wife very sad

part 2

geet welcome like this
husband gaayeb sis in law
tonting but like her nature
down to earth why i feel
that geet don't know about
maan first marriage

part 3

ohhh just perfect
firsts mitting and geet shout 😆
chalo kuch to halka mila update main
ye geet and her nono stop bak bak acha
laga

part 4

sabki uljhane
maan dont want his first wife place
took by geet
geet is all confused ke how she
will act

anni ki narazgi and maan ke first
wife ka pain all just mess
with one decision which is child

maan mother also helpless
she have to control all
in that process she hurt herself also
again sad part fariya
but nice job like it 👏👏👏👏

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Why Annie is holding grudge against Geet when she is the victim ?

Nice part ..

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#327

beautiful story dear...read all parts in one go..am really enjoying this ff. 😊 ...
maan and horam are in pain...but it is truth its not so easy for them...hope in all this geet will get not hurt...she is innocent...hope maan will not misunderstood her... continue soon...waiting for next part...

Edited by Monikaarora - 10 years ago