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zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Emotions are very well written..

Maan been guilty..

Horam... selfish...decide 2 rectify... for a family..

Annie cold...

MIL angry..

And last r geet ... knowing nothing...

Very good job...

Guess its going painful ...when geet come what reality is...

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pooja vejani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#272

loved that you showed even horams pov.👍🏼

wonderfully written👏.

love it.👏👏

thanks for update😃.

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icskwt

@icskwt

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

wonderfully written emotional part...all are drown in there own pain but what about geet ...why this poor sole have to suffer without any fault...

how everything will sort out...and how geet will react after knowing maan first marrige...

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BikewithGirl

@MG_Love

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Anni taunting geet 😡 poor geet..
Thank god Mariyam clear mu raat wali baat ki nahi to maan ko lagta geet ne bataya...wo tho geet ko hi blame karta
Geet doesn't know that maan is already married..
waiting for more
continue soon
Awesome update

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#275

wonderful update! Maan n Annie rude 2 Geet! Annie hates Geet as her mom shouted her cos of Geet! Maan n his mom talk! So Geet does nt knw he is married! Feelimg 4 Geet! Horam lost her baby n cannot get conceive! update soon! Well written

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#276

Awesome update...Maan & annie unnecessarily misbehaving with geet...I think geet's parents hid the fact from geet that maan is married...

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#277

wow.. Superb update. Ek hi update mein kitna kuch pata chale. Annie is too rude with geet. Baki sab apni jagah sahi h bt insab mein bechari geet ki koi galti na hote hue bhi pisti ja rahi hai.

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sohni_kudi_111

@sohni_kudi_111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#278

this is an interesting concept! I dont know who to be sry for, maan, geet or horum? but will maan ever accept geet n if he does what about horum!

I seriously dont know wat to expect frm this fiction...

one word... awesome

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#279

hi fariya and pooja

nice update ..

but i didn't like the way all r treating geet ..

may be i love geet to much that's why ..

maan doesn't want to see her ,he wants his first wife ..

maan's mother want geet just to produce child nothing else ..

annie ..why any hates geet ..waht geet has done with her .. why annie keep on taunting geet ..

harom ..selfish ...but still can't say her so ..she wants maan's child ..

all so confuse ..

p.s i want to know geet's background ..to which kind of family she belong ..why her parents made her married to an already married maan ..does geet know that her so called husband is already married ..geet is just there in family as a machine to produce a child ...

i want geet's part too ...i don't want so much horam ...

thanks for update

waiting for next

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fariya20

@fariya20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#280

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

wow lovely emotional update..te way hor ki pain one side thinking abt sharing her hubby with some one and my maan ki pain one side thinking how he will accept another girl in his life and one side anni who was hating geet and taunting her and one side mariayam want his kids ki happiness was lovely emotional..all are drowning in they own pov forgetting one innocent whom they talk revolving is mute in all tis, did she know my maan is married..in all tis im feeling sad for geet ..i love te update so much with heavy heart..

thank you for ur words

i soo happy that u like our work