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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome ending dear
perfect end to a lovely story
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Posted: 10 years ago


hello my dear friends..



Life is beautiful ...
Today Maan scold geet 1st time in these 2 nd half mnths nd she was very angry now,, he was very late nd not picking his phone too ,, hrs passed ,, Geet called in his office nd his Jr who was on duty that time replied that he had left hrs back ,, his jeep was not there ,, DM nd he became tense ,, it was a hilly area nd weather was not well , it was foggy nd got dark ,, Geet was sitting near DM , Ammy was playing in her lap ,, Geet tried many times but Maan was not responding ,, DM became worried for him ,, she didn't have courage to face any harm for her family ,,her eyes turned teary nd started praying for him ,, seeing her like that Geet became more tense nd pacing in d living hall ,, he came near 10 pm ,, seeing him she started her Qs session nd didn't give him a chance to reply ,, helplessly Maan scold her nd she became angry ,, Geet went back in kitchen with teary eyes then remained there ,, Maan sat near DM nd consoled her ,, told her d reason for becoming late nd his phone was on silent coz he was on patrolling nd cdn't take d call ,, 2 more officers wr with him ,, DM relieved nd went to her room taking sleeping Ammy with her ,, lil Ammy slept sometime with DM nd sometime with Maaneet ,, Maan went in room nd changed ,, his mind was thinking about Geet who was angry with him now ,, she sent his dinner with Nakul nd didn't show her face in bedroom ,, Maan asked about her nd nakul said that she was very upset , he even told him how both d ladies wr worried for him ,, Maan felt bad for Geet nd decided to say sorry .

There Geet too realized her mistake ,, it was true that in her tension she didn't give him any chance to give reasons of his delay nd not replying d calls ,, she felt bad nd decided to say sorry ,, she made coffee for him nd find him in lobby watching out in foggy nyt ,, she forwarded d mug at him ,, he took quietly glancing at her dull face,, Lt Mjr. Maan Singh Khurana a very tough Army officer for outer world but very soft nd caring for his small family,, he cdn't hurt Geet.

Geet: wo ,, I m sorry ,, I really behaved very immature ,,, sorry .

He looked at her lowered head nd held her hand which was twisting d corner of her dupatta ,, sat on d settee nd made her sit near him ... Geet , look at me ,, plzz ,, she looked with wet eyes nd next moment hugged him ,, he placed d mug on side table nd hugged her back ,, pecked her head ..I m sorry too Geet , but u know my duties nd have to give me time to reply na .. Satabdi train ki traha se shuru hui to ruki nahi ,, Geet looked at him with a pout calling her Shatabdi train ,, he smiled at her mouthing sorry again nd then saw that it starting snow fall ,,, this was d 1st fall of d season ,, it was looking so heavenly ,, something clicked in his mind nd he removed his jacket ,, then removed Geet's shawl nd dragged her out in lawn ,, where nature was showering its blessings .

******

These wr beautiful moments of their life ... yes he loves her ,, it is not any compromise nd force but pure love for her ,, she made her place in his heart with her altruistic nd soft nature ,, he was cherishing those most romantic moments of his life when he brought her out in lawn to feel nd enjoy d 1st fall of winter weather ,, she was so elated nd enthralled ,, both wr watching nd feeling d soft feather touch of snow flecks over them ,, she denied that time but now she was enjoying .

Geet was looking like an angel in her white suit nd that snow made d nyt more beautiful nd romantic ,, Maan felt a gush of emotions nd he confessed ... I Love U ,,, I love u Geet .

She was praising d nature nd her words stuck in her mouth listening those magical words from him ... God she was dying to hear this ,, not she every person who loves waited for these words to move forward in their life with their companion ,, Geet was froze at her place ,, Maan smiled seeing her like that nd came behind her ,, glued her with him giving her a back hug nd whispered again in her ear ... yes Geet , I m in love nd love u so much ,, I never though that i'll fall in love but u make this heart to fall for u ,, thanks for coming in my life ,, u brought back happiness in my life ,, in our life Geet.

Geet turned in his arms nd looked deep in his eyes ,, d wetness of her eyes nd blushy smile was showing d happiness of her heart .

Maan: Geet , kya hua ? Kuch kaho na .

She was chocked nd nodded in a no which disheartened him ,, he too wanted to listen those words from her , but her next gesture startled him ,,, Geet placed her hand on his cheek , rose on her toes nd placed a soft peck on his other cheek ,,, Aawww,,, his whole melted in a blink ,, he looked at her awed ,, she blushed nd hide her face in his neck hugging him ... Gosh ! I love it ,, he smiled nd cocooned her in his arms , today he cd say .. She made his life beautiful .

Both came inside ,, she went to DM's room checking her nd Ammy nd he went to his bedroom took a book nd sat in his rocking chair to read ,, he knew that she took some time to finish some work nd then came in d room ,, d warmer was on nd room was cozy ,, his eyes went at their wedding photo frame placed on d pet table along with d pic of Ammy nd Meera ,, he leaned back closing his eyes ,, his thought went back nd flashes of past few months started floating in his mind .. How his happy life turn upside down in few hrs,, not only he but Geet too faced an ugly side of her selfish relatives ,, tough circumstances brought them together ,,she saved his small baby ,, that was a miracle ,, even she took care of DM nd many more ppl who wr badly affected coz of that disaster ... A deadly flood which destroyed everything of millions ppl nd hundreds of ppl lost their lives ,, that was a heart wrenching phase of his life nd he lost Meera in that but Geet came in their life like an angel .

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Maan opened his eyes with a jerk when he felt a soft touch near his eyes ,, she was wiping d tears which flew down from d corner of his eyes ,, he looked at her with a weak smile nd she nodded in a no ,, Maan move close to her ,, held her from waist circling his arms around her waist nd hide his face in her tummy ,, Geet caressed his head nd threaded her fingers in his thick hair ,, consoled him .

Geet: kya hua ? ku udaas ho ,, abhi to kitne khush thy .

Maan: promise me , u won't live us alone.

Geet: I won't ,, how cn I ? when my happiness lies in Ammy , u nd DM .

Then her eyes shine with naughtiness ,, she bit her lip nd made a pouted face .

Geet: but what about u ,, u never think about me .

Maan looked at her : when I didn't think ?

Geet galred : today ,, do u have any idea how worried we wr ,, but why sd u think about me ,, u didn't reply nd scold me when I asked u .

Maan: Geet ,, did u give me any chance to open my mouth after coming back ,, u never stop when started to talk like Shatabdi Exp .

Geet looked at him with open mouth : hhww u again called me Shatabdi Exp ,, leave me , I won't talk to u ,, go .(she pushed him a lil nd turned faking anger)

Maan got up nd pulled her to him with a naughty smile ... nahi chodunga to ,, ab bhi gussa ho ,, ab to maine I love u bhi bol diya aur kaise manau ?

Geet blushed recalling those moments nd Maan was enjoying her pink cheeks which turned more dark with her blush ... sshhh ,,, mishty .. u r looking so tempting , I want to eat u alive ... Maan ,, plzz ,,, what plzz ,, permitting me to eat u ... no...

He laughed ... then ..? don't tease me ,, u r so bad ,, really , nd when I showed u my devil side ? Bolo mishty .

Geet looked at him all shy : devil side bhi baki hei abhi ?

Maan: hhuumm,,want to see ? ( he asked her with a killer smile nd pulled her more to him with a jerk which made weak on her knees ,, she was melting in his love , sighed nd hide her face in his chest )

Maan cocooned her ,, pecked her forehead ,, brought her near bed nd sat on d edge having her in his lap ,, he himself was facing a sweet torture in her closeness ,, she always made him hard even her mere smile affected him ,, both wr controlling their desires from last two months ,, On their SR Geet had requested him to move forward in their relation only when he feel love for her , not bounded with any compromise or duty .

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Now she was in his arms ,, though she didn't say those magical words to him but her soft peck opened d doors ,, she was shyly sitting in his lap hiding her face in his neck ,, he cupped her face ,, kissed her forehead , eyes , cheeks ,, d corner of her lower lip ,, aawww,, she gasped nd tightened her grip digging her fingers in his back ,, he lost his last strand of control nd took those rosy lip in his to quench his long thirst , entered his tongue in d sweet world of her mouth nd started tasting d sweetness ,, both wr cherishing their 1st kiss,, she became breathless , hummed nd try to part to get some air ,, Maan realized that he was becoming hard nd parted a lil , both took a breath nd he gave few more soft feather kisses ,, whispered rubbing his lips on her... Geet cn I plan for us ? she blush hard nd nodded in a yes ... G e e t ,, mishty ,, r u ready to bear my devil side ,,, M a a n ,, he chuckled ,,, a sweet devil my love .

Geet sighed nd hide her face in his crook humming ,, M a a n ,, i love u too ,, ... O J a a n ( he startled nd a chilled wave passed in his body with her confession) ,, take me M a a n ... G e e t ... J a a n ,, i love u ,,, love u so much ,, he moaned contented nd leaned back having her in his arms ,, covered them with soft warm blanket ,, glued her to him nd started adoring & filling her every pour with his love ,, Their life is beautiful now.


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hai babbie

how r u?? kal tabeeyat teek nahi thi na... ab kaisi ho??

mera photon abhi atka hain...

came now to papas house... so thought to use his pc fro some timee...

phone par gf mein reading and lil bit commenting is ok... but gappe is really hard... as every time has to refresh it😭

hope jaldi koi solution ho mere problem ka

take care


🤗 Hi lakshu.. thanks dear..
tum FB per to thi..
kab tak prob solve hoga yaar..
missing u ...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-


congo for completing yet another beautiful story on maaneet babbie

this story had been such a nice journey from maans relaisation then to their love😃

the ending was too good... all living ever happily there after😃

will be waiting for ur next story... jinx too have to read... will soon be therre too😳



😆😆 Thanku so much.. aap last part tak aa hi gai..
😆😆 waiting for u ob jinx...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi DD
How are you
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Posted: 10 years ago

ok hu all finish sab chale gaye aaj free thi so came here


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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely and Beautiful end😳









for giving an Amazing story dear😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

bcoz of malware prob on my thrds i change all d links nd here r d new links ...
The whole FF is in a chain with pri nd next updated link...
so no need to go on main trds for links ...

Links...



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Part - 111 - (Last Part)

Epilogue ..Pg 18


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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks dear for beautiful maaneet story
we will wait for more new stories

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