MG OS ups and down of eternal love oct 11

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Relations are not always same they differ with time they are sensitive and require by your time and commitment to the same.. Whether its a relation of a day or years it is not judged or characterized by any means it can just be the interpretation of love and care... Today was the sixth karwa chauth that she was fasting for him.. And just like every passing year this year was too not same it was changed geet looked at the red color Saree that maan and she had brought together just after their marriage .. Its been five years that they are married and maan and she were not same .. He was now busy with the business handling KC alone and she was there but didn't want to work... Geet took out The ornaments , the same jewelry box along with the gifts that maan had. Given her in last six years...
Geet was getting ready when she saw the reports they were old one the year when they had a big argument and maan literally threatened her that if she will fast then he wont be there for her ... She wasn't well that year it was after their marriage and her second KC but she was adamant.. Being pregnant isn't that easy to keep yourself well along with your husband's anger but she did cope up with that.. Geet caressed the report she had tears when she remembered the worst time they had...

Three years back...
Geet was six months pregnant and all was not well her hemoglobin levels were disturbed along with her being anemic maan had strictly asked her not to fast but she was geet she just fought with him and kept the fast.. Be the old traditions or her love that she wanted to fast for maan but everything was not same.. When she lost the baby...
Geet was lying in the Hospital she still didn't knew that she post her baby the baby couldn't survive and maan was same as her.. Even when she cursed herself he didn't let her..
Maan didnt said anything but as always he was with her ...

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A lone te
ar escaped her eye as she encounter those memories its been three year that she wasnt able to conceive but today only be the day she got to know that she was expecting... Geet dressed just like the way he liked ..it wasn't the ordinary day their was distance between them that was created by time...
Maan came and saw her getting ready he suddenly realize that he has forgotten and she didnt even remind him.. It was time and work that made him forget responsibility , her love.. Before maan could say anything geet just asked him...
Geet : maan aap bhi ready jayiye... There was a smile on her lips like she was Happy today.. He came to her and apologized for the mistake of his..
Maan : maan I am sorry I didnt knew that you are fasting today.. Par ye sab kis like.. There is NO need for all this geet... Geet didntbsaid anything today she didn't want any thing to spoil her mood...
Geet : aap change jar lijiye maan..
Saying so she went..

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It was after the braking the fast geet and maan were having their dinner. When maan fed her Reminding her the sweet moments they shared when she fasted for him in college and made him lie in the mansion just to come to break her fast in girls hostel ..
Maan : why did you cook we could have a dinner date today just like we had when you fasted first Time geet.. So USS din I was so scared.. Kahin tum USS din faint waint ho jati toh..
Geet mocked him as he was feeding her the morsel..
Geet : haan you were so scared and I did complete my fast that day maan apko yaad hai we went for shopping for that KC specially...
Maan : why wouldn't I be I just one gf agar use such HP jata toh.. He teased her...
Geet : haan wo toh hair gf ke liye you care but nor for your wife I know you.. Wo pyar vyaar sab gaya na maan...
Maan thought that she was a serious and he just came to her side and tried to cooed her by the lovely dovey talks..
Maan : maan you know that's not true .. And you know I am still your ghulam who is ready to do anything for you just like I did when you just literally threatened me saying ' ek toh fast rakhun upar se cooking bhi Karo '
Geet kissed his cheeks this time and revealed the news to him..
Geet : I know that my maan will do anything for me but jaanu we can't go outside you know I don't want anything to happen this time..
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Years later
Geet was sitting waiting for the moon to appear when a voice came...
Woww beautiful daadi aaj toh you are planning toh kill me.. He said dramatically he was krish maan and geet's grandson and was on

first year of graduation.. He was .clicking some pictures of his and geet when maan came and said yo krish..
Maan : isn't she looking gorgeous..
Maan asked him only to be chided by geet .. And krish agreed to maan...
Krish :,why not after all she is MSK's love...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one suhana
simple n Sweet!😊
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hi dear, emotional sweet wonderful OS! beautifully written! Loved it! pls update OS will u marry me! Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sweet os
they lost their baby huh
but guess their baby was back with them
ahhh KC special huh i see
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oh such a sweet and lovely os dear...
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very cute os didz
simple and sweet
maan and geet's character and their love is just beautifully depicted
n the ending was so cute
maan geet and krish
amazing os didz
will be waiting for more of them
luvv yaa didz

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice n sweet os suhi...
n ending was lovely...

suhi like button kaam nai kr rhi h issliye like nai kiya
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short and sweet..
lovely os😊

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