Ruthless Rejection-Last chap@99/ Dec-08.

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#571

Amazing end..
happy that wt started as a painful journey had a happy end...

looved it..

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#572

I don't know but I think the end was abrupt & the title of the story not justified...the reunion was too soon...U were so much engrossed in maaneet romance that u totally ignored to portray maaneet's pain & sufferings...U didn't describe those parts well...or I would say that I didn't feel connected to their pain ...emotionally I feel not attached neither to their pain , nor to their loss which I should have...Starting was too good & the progress was nice...👏...but soon I got lost...the essence of the story or the soul was lost......any way good attempt...😊...Sorry if I hurt u... it was never my intension...I am really sorry...

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#573

Superbbb updates nd End is Outstandinggg dear...
i just missed soo many parts but finally read it in one go...
Beautifully written dear...
loved it...

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375400

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#574

beautiful dear

i m speechless

loved it

I love maaneet

q khtm krdi yr

last part thoda lamba krdeti yar

awsm part

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#575

Beautiful yet Emotional Story held so much of love yet pain and guilt
both Maan and Geet suffered for years and it was only them that could
erase the pains from each other yet their love was strong and at the end both got what they deserved and had beautiful family

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#576

Nice part ..

finally they are having their share of happiness.

loved the update

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Gudiyeet

@Gudiyeet

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#577

awesome update

finally both are expressing love got their kids

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#578

Finally they are together never to part away.

Nice story

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chubby786

@chubby786

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#579

Nice really love it but give epilogue it seems so incomplete where they fought so much but very less lovey dovey moments atleast in epilogue u can give some of those precious maaneet lovey moments plzzz😛