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JeevanaP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

na na option haina .. aapko maska laga ke update paa sakthi hoon na

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rashmiv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
part 72

i think i havent commented from this part... in case i am mistaken and commenting again... no other option... chup chaap baitke padho😆

i loved the new name of geet... cherry ... wow...😳... jis tarah geet laal hothi hain the name is so apt for her...

maan ne kya kimti idea nikaala hain for geets dress... but even this heavy price will seem to be less for him when he sees her happiness... haina😳

mr and mrs khosla... that pic😆... oyyyeee opp great job yaar👏

though like annie and rahul i was grinning seeing suman married to a buddha... but i loved how u brought suman and shown us that what ever bad we sow in this life we get the result too here only...unlike taijee who still doesnt budge and is not ready to accept that she has done something wrong ... i respect suman for atleast realising that she had done wrong and for accpeting it...

geets explanation as to y she doesnt have any grudges agaisnt suman as she and taijee where like cupids who made maaneet one was so true👏...

wonderful update and i reallly loved the re-entry of suman 😃

nahi you are right you have started from the right update..

he he cheery is a really cute name as I used red apple in Dulhan so new ff new name

maan ne dress ka idea use to kiya but abhi designer biwi ka gussa bhi jhelna padega..

I just wanted to show the readers that the result of a bad act is mostly bad..

agar suman pahle hi samaj jaati to uske liye hi achca hota ..at least ek theek taak se ladke ek saath shadi to ho jaati..

taiji ke baare me bi jaanogi when time comes..but now Suman has realised that how it hurts when someone points out us and she got a chance to say sorry to geet..

But Geet honestly thanked her because she got Maan because of suman and taiji's tricks..

dekha sirf tumne notice kiya Mr. and Mrs.Khosla ki pic..kisi ne bhi nahin dekha usko😭😭

it was suman's re-entry and as well as exit too

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rashmiv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: JeevanaP
na na option haina .. aapko maska laga ke update paa sakthi hoon na

philhaal wo moption out of stock hai😆

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geetmerly

@geetmerly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

😳cute moments

keep writing we r waiting

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rashmiv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
part 73

y maan dreamt that now?? tumhaare dimaag mein kya pak raha hain?? or is it just like geet said, sumans presence brought back those bad memories??

but the way geet handled maan was so sweeet ... loved that sleeping waala pic too...

geet on leave?? uff office romance ke bina maan ka kya hoga?😉😆

coffee banaane aur peene kaye andaaz😳😳 bahut acha laga😃

kya solid base banaaya hain rtm ke liye... stormy night, gaadi kharaab, small house, wet clothes, a single room ... uff... maar daala... maan ko coffee nahi horlicks pilaake bhejna tha for more control power😆

geet scared of adis laugh was so so cute... 😆

Maan's dream is related to something in Future..mere dimaag me khichdi pak rahi hai😆😆..sab kuchh saamne hai but kisi ko dikhayi nahin de raha any way let the dream come true tab sabko pata chalega what was there in that dream..thanmsk for lkinh the way Geet andled him..It's not only Maan who cares for Geet but she too cares for him..

don't worry main bahana bana kar Geet ko bhej doongi office😉

he he Maaneet ka jadu hai jo sab kuchh sikha deta hai coffee banana bhi aur peena bhi😛

hain na perfect back ground for RTM..

maan is now used to comntrol himself even witout horlics..main hoon na uska horlics😆😆..

sab ko funny lagi serial me adi ki ansi maine scary bana diya😆😆😆

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rashmiv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
part 74

mast rtm version👏 i loved how u shown their passion in a subtle way ... i have always loved to read love and passion in maaneet but within a limit which u too have done... 👏

the song selection superb... vm kaatilaana😳

though at the time of that phone ring i was thinking kis gadhe ka phone hain😆 but later i think that call came at the correct time... both had wished to remarry with traditions soon and they may also wish to start their new life after that... so who ever had called,made maan stop at the right time ... after years of marriage they will definitely cherish these days😃

uff geets kashmakash regarding yash... is it confusion that did yash love her truly as she is seeing a different flavour of love through maan? or is it a confusion that did she truly love yash as her feeling for maan was much more than she had felt before for yash??

maan offering a job to adi was so nice... adi had selflessly helped them even without their asking... loved his famous signature laugh used here again and again... the name adi brings the first memory of his laugh only😆

i tried to give a diffrent flavour to RTM with a different song and scene ...and I m happy taht all liked it

wo gadhe ka nahin mera phone tha

mujhe rokna tha na un dono ko aage badhne se😆😆

I think they should move in marital relation swith no trail of past jahaan Yash Geet ka pahla pati na hokar sirf Maan ka bhai ban kar rahe..

geet bechaari kuchh soch akr pareshaan hai..she is not able to understand that..the person whom she was loving till now has foeced her to think about himself again

bas thoda intezaar maa will surly help her to get her answers..

Few days ago Maan and Geet learnt from Mr. mathew about how to return the favor back to the person who helped them ..

Yes Adi is known to his signature laughter

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rashmiv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
late hi sahi kaha tha na meine ... i wont leave wihout commenting... writer tho hamesha bolthe hain and all readers wish to hear them more and more... but readers get only this chance to talk with the writer ... to tell them what they feel... and i will never ever leave this chance to make u all bore😆

read all the three parts again on the bahaana of commenting😉

thanks for all the beautiful updates rashmi🤗

teacher sahi kahti thi school me ki aaj ka kaam kal par mat taalo..ab dekho kitna sara home work ho gaya karne ko aur mujhe bhi kitna kaam ho gaya check karke reply karne ka😆😆

but this is a firm truth that as you like to read update we as a writer like to read comment too

as we are able to know your vies about our work..we come to know what you think about the update..

so happy to have you as my reader..der se hi sahi comment to de hi deti ho..

thank u so much Lakshu for all the comments

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

meri tarah kaam chor thodi hoo

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Yash Geet ka pahla pati na hokar sirf Maan ka bhai ban kar rahe..👏

i loved this thought😳

ek ek comment ka thorough checking karne ke liye ... thankie

mujhe tumhaara waala thanks bahut acha laga❤️

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rashmiv

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

thank u thank u for these updates...

I am late in responding as I went on vacations again to my home-town Dehradun...

I really really missed Adi so much in this story...many times I keep on thinking about him that why u didn't include him but now I am happy with his entry...

kitna control karna pad raha hai Maan-Geet ko☺️ but koi nahin sabr ka phal meetha hota hai...😉

I am not understanding why Geet is always comparing Yash with Maan...how will he answer her doubts on his love now when he is no more...instead of doubting over his love Geet should respect him and concentrate on her present now...Maan ki nazar mein Arpita mein bhi to kamiyan thi and their relation was much more closer than Geet-Yash but Maan is not always comparing Arpita and Geet...comparision is insult of that deceased person's feelings...Geet ko itni bhi samajh nahin hai ki har insaan alag hota hai...Maan Yash se alag hai and Geet se bhi...the definition of love and togetherness in Geet's eyes cannot be same in Yash eyes...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

Hi Kiran ..

i guessed right when I did not get your comment on last update that you were on vacation..how were your vacations hope you enjoyed there..

bas Maan -geet ke intezaar khatam hone ko hai bas teen din to bache Rahul and Anie ke marriga eme uske next day Maaneet marriage😛..

Kiran Geet is not comparing Yash and Maan..se is in mess since they have confessed their love..she never thought about it earlier even after getting married to Maan..

it's just that she is experiencing a whole new different feelings and she is not blamming or comparing them but there is something which she needs to find..and she is scared if she was wrong there too..so relax..

yes Maan nad Yash are different but Geet is a simple girl so she is thinking all this..as she has come a long way in a short period of life..

Adi was not planned here earlier but then I though this scene and included him

I m happy that all liked his entry